I know I kinda put myself in it when I said I thrive on tragedies...but why her, why Camyll? How could YOU do this? I love that girl nearly as much as Dean does;(

"Promise me that the sharp pain in my chest will stop hurting, promise me that I will stop feeling sick every time I think of her. - When Dean said that, my eyes watered. then.....How could he ever move on? Kiss another girl and mean it like he did when he kissed her. - you're killing me.

And then the accident, nooooo! I can't believe it, and when Sam's watching from the car it was totally heart breaking.

-The tears spilt as he heard the muffled cries from his older brother.. oh I wanna die right now.

 The note and chain she wanted to give him, OMG!!! Thats' why Dean never ever takes the amulet off, makes sense to me. I loved this whole story Schelz, but I don't know how long its going to take to get over this emotional trauma;( I don't know how long it'll take to forgive you for taking Camyll away from me and Dean!

Rocking chapter title though;(

DRU

 

Author's Response:

Again, really sorry...What you're feeling now, I was feeling after I wrote it:( I'm kinda proud that this story has you feeling so strongly about it, because it shows I've done something right...I hope you can forgive me for the ending hun:)

Hugs4u

Love Schelz

She said the three words to Dean, yes! I love her, he will be loved no matter how much he tries to stay emotionless, she still fell in love with him. He fell in love with her too, what a match Schelz, its perfect... Ahh, young love, the best kind!

Why must the parents ruin everything? Cant they see Dean and Camyll are made for each other? She loves Sam too, how sweet, she wanted to run and take Sam. I hope everything works out...cant split them up from Camyll, shes been there almost their whole life.

Camyll, I just love this girl, in the space of a few chapters she's grown on me big time. I like how well her character fits in, not just with the boys but with John and Bobby too.

 

ROCKIN STORY!!!

DRU

Author's Response:

AHHHHH, Thank you for this, doesn't matter what Dean does, girls fall at his feet. We all love Dean *Sighs* I love Sam too... Parents, mmm, Isaac is selfish and in some ways John is too, though he cares more about his boys than Isaac does about Camyll. Smarter to split the young lovers up before she ended up following Dean across the country, thats the type of girl she is;) Love that you love Camyll, glad she grew on you, last thing I wanna do is create a character that annoys people (Bella and Jo) I kinda liked Jo and B...sometimes...lets forget I said that shall we? Lol

Sam and Camyll are like two peas in a pod right now aren't they, leaving Bobby out in the cold. lol

Camyll is a fighter, she kinda reminds me of me when I was that age, fighting with guys to test your own strengths and weaknesses, I really like this chick Camyll. Love how quick Dean and Camyll can make up after they've just kicked the crap out of each other...hehehehe

Oooh what Dean did was a sweet pay back!!!

So hilarious after all the fighting Camyll wants to stay with Dean...and he lets her, I think Dean likes her more than he cares to admit. Thats him all over though!

Loved this rocking chapter off the ground.

DRU

Author's Response:

Glad you like Camyll, she is a fighter and she did start off trying to test her own strengths, but lets face it...after a while it gets hard to ignore how HOT Dean is, even at 14.  heheehe You know Dean, no one ever gets away with anything, she knew he'd get her back. lol, Yep, she wanted to share the bed and he let her. Dean admits nothing, always keeping it to himself. Glad you liked it! Schelz

This story was amazing, the ending was fantastic and how you tied in the necklace. Oh my gosh i was so upset and shocked when Dean hit her. Fantastic story!!! I loved it :)

Author's Response:

Hey Tara Thank you so much for taking time to read this and letting me know what you liked. Thrilled you thought this was amazing and liked the necklace tie in. Schelz

Hmmmm....i must say u are very, very descriptive....i mean all ur stories are, but i actually flinched when the goblin slit camyll's stomach. i could actually imagine it. And now camyll can brag that she saved the day...thus proving her point to her dad. Love the chapter....again.

Author's Response:

Glad you found this chapter to be very descriptive, I find that sometimes I struggle on that. My strength is dialouge, always have something to say. lol So happy that you could imagine it as you read along. Camyll kinda proved a point to her dad by showing her capabilities, but also showed that she's irresponsible by not doing as she was told. Hence, no hunting until twenty one. Lol Thanks so much for review hun. Schelz

i love the way this chapter begins. camyll, dean and sam as kids. and i take it sam is a bit chubby. i can actually imagine them as kids. fighting over evrything. camyll and dean would never think forr 1 second that they would end up actually falling in love with each other in the future....wicked!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review hun. I agree, when you hate each other or can't get on, something romantic happening would never cross your minds. Lol Thanks again Schelz

Great chapter, my fav.

We got see Camyll's dart practice put to use, I just love this girl Schelz.

Love how Dean didn't think twice to get out to the mountains to bring Camyll back.

Very well written, glad Camyll put an end to that freaky Goblin.

Camyll Rayne Rocks!

Loved this to bits.

 

 

Author's Response:

This is my fav chap too, sooo glad you loved this, means alot. Ok, I am repeating myself now, but I am really glad you found this well written. Ecstatic that you think Camyll rocks! Love this review to bits. Schelz

You have done well and I think outdone yourself with this addition. Glad you decided to give us more of Camyll:) I think she's great.

 

Author's Response:

Thank you Chao, makes me proud to know that these added chapters are such a success. Thanks 4da stars too. Very happy you like Camyll:)   Schelz

I'm flying in a blue dream now

Amazing chappy and the scene between Camyll and Dean was so wonderful and warm, the action was also well represented here and I was biting my nails as I went along

Please update soon hunni *pleads*

Author's Response:

Thanks sweet, I am truly stunned now, this is like the 3rd or 4th time someone has said it's action. I didn't think I was too clever at action, thanks for that. Glad you found this chap amazing, and I think that you and everyone else who has reviwed, is double time awesome!!! Schelz

I've lost count of how many times I've read this while at work, I've been showin my work mates. Lol

I just had to read this again...Hope u dnt mind me reviewing again, I'm not a stalker. Lol

Very sad...I want Camyll to come back to us, I don't know how you managed to fit all that emotion, action and everything into just five chapters. It all fits so well,

I think Camyll is a lovely girl and I think Isaac was wrong, I know he is only try to protect her but he can't stop her from being in love, I dont like the way he handled it.

Camyll and Dean were perfect as one. You wouldn't really think they would've got it together coz they got on each other's nerves, but it it was so sweet how they did.

I love John, I just wish he would've have stuck up for Dean to Isaac a bit, instead of agreeing.

Camyll is a wicked hunter, considering she doesn't get to do it often, Dean and Isaac are more experienced, yet she was the one that kicked arse.

I don't think anyone, teen or not should be stopped from feeling a certain way, Camyll and Dean are in love. Poor things:(

I like Camyll's little letter at the end, and the chain he wears, clever how you made Camyll give it to him.

Fantastic!!!! The chapters just never stop & always got better & better!! Well thought & well presented - Well Done!!!

Love Alli

Author's Response:

Wow! I am gobsmacked with this review, thank you:) Oh, no, reading at work...naughty! Off course I don't mind you reviewing, you can read this as many times as you like. You're not a stalker. Lol Well, when I first wrote this, it was only 2 chapters long. I added the 3 chapters after, to fill in the childhood. Seriously glad you think this has action as well as emotions. I am thrilled that everyone has embraced Camyll like this, she will be missed:( I agree, Isaac could've handled it better, he's very protective. Being a single parent is not easy and for some it's very difficult, especially raising a girl. Lol John. I love John, I think though tough at times, it's because he loves them and does what he believes at that time is right. Ah, yes! Camyll's hunting skills??? I don't know if you noticed but, she'd been practicing her aim from 12, throwing darts at the door. It paid off in the mountains and yes, she saved their butts. Lol, she kinda put them at risk too, by sneaking out! Really happy that this story has got you feeling so passionate, love that your pro Dean and Camyll. Thank you so much for this huge review, I hope I have matched it in my response... Schelz

aww i think its so cute how dean quickly ran to camyll's rescue like a night in shining armour.

and her dad really is a beep. also that mountin part wit da goblin yuk nasty big rat. but you described it perfectly.

golden.xx keep up the juicy chapters.lovin it.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the stars hun, it was great talking to you on the shout box tonight. Aww, thanks. Nasty big rat...I love that, I'm gonna use that! Schelz

Everthing about this chapter was so sad, right from the beginning and the moment when he hits her with the car I had to re-read a few times because I was just so shocked, it was truly heartbreaking and then the scene when John has to tell Dean, I was near tears, this was such an amazingly beautiful story schelz!

-Bex

Author's Response:

Babygurl, you are the sweetest.

Bex, I am really and truly touched by all ur reviews, and the stars have my heart smiling.

:)  See! Lol

Using the words, amazingly beautiful has seriously got me blushing!!!

You've made my morning...

Schelz