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Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 22/02/08 02:56 PM · On: The Unspoken Things

Wow. I'm in tears, but in a good way! Awesome job. You really captured buckets of emotion in a relatively short one-shot. Good thing, too, I don't know if I could take much more angst.

From start to finish, this flowed perfectly. In fact, until I read your bio, I didn't know you weren't a native English speaker! (Your spelling, grammar, syntax and sentence structure are better than several folks who post on this site!)

I thought the ending was perfect! I think I'll have to add this story to my favorites list.

--c 



Author's Response:

I'm not sure how to respond... I mean, these are great compliments! I think you just made my day. Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked this.

Reviewer: Kumaproogey (Signed) · Date: 09/01/08 08:20 PM · On: The Unspoken Things

This line was so simple, but it's totally what he's thinking every episode.  (The paragraph that followed was perfect too):

“I don’t really think that I can do this without you,” Sam confessed quietly.  

Dean punching Sam so he could leave & make it easier on Sam/him was also so Dean!  Great writing, you really captured the scenes' emotions and thoughts.

The ending was beautiful and poetic – I loved it!!! Truly a great story, it was simple but powerful and touching.  

Author's Response:

It's good to hear that someone likes simplicity! It's all I have right now though I'm trying to improve my English. Thank you very much, these are wonderful compliments!! I'm really glad you enjoyed.

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 02:00 PM · On: The Unspoken Things

oh, very sad...loved it scan...now i am all teary-eyed!! thanks for the awesome one-shot!! bambers;)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and pretty stars Bambers!! I appreciate your kind words so much.

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 13/11/07 04:41 PM · On: The Unspoken Things

That bit in the middle where they hug damn near broke my heart, and then Dean's letter - well now I can't see for tears! So sad, so sweet. You've touched my heart! Birdie x

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm sorry for the tears - and happy that I managed to touch your heart.

Reviewer: Corpsed (Signed) · Date: 03/11/07 12:29 PM · On: The Unspoken Things

Really, I cried! it was so sad. Nice job!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Nice to see you here, Corps :)

Reviewer: zerosbabe (Signed) · Date: 21/10/07 07:20 PM · On: The Unspoken Things

great story and very sad..poor sam

Author's Response: Thank you zero!

Reviewer: SUPERNATANGEL67 (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 11:33 PM · On: The Unspoken Things

Very beautifully written.  Had me in tears from beginning to end.

Author's Response:

Oh, thank you. So glad you think this's beautifully written!

Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 12:45 PM · On: The Unspoken Things

The whole thing was more than ok.  I cry about as often as Dean, but it's a near thing here - lovely job

Author's Response: Thank you! Your kind words are much appreciated!

Reviewer: justannanow (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 12:03 PM · On: The Unspoken Things

I swear that I'm not going to have any tears left by the time Kripke resolves the deal issue. These fics are killing me and this one did it so well too. LOL

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad that I killed you well. Or wait a minute... Is that a good thing? lol :D

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 11:43 AM · On: The Unspoken Things

Absolutely beautiful Scan, writen from the heart! Loved it!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much Bullet! For reading, reviewing... and the stars! It makes me happy that you enjoyed! 

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 11:08 AM · On: The Unspoken Things

Ah, Scan such a nice job.  I appreciate it even more knowing you just lost your grandfather.  Great job you should be proud - K

Author's Response:

Proud? Thank you very much for your awesome review, K!

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 10:38 AM · On: The Unspoken Things

Lovely, Sanna. As always! love it very much, and hope you feel better better better!!!!!! Hugs and cookies! >:3

Author's Response: Thanks a lot!! Lovely as always? Wow, I could have never guessed that someone'd say that 'bout something that I've written! And I'm so lucky when I have people who care 'bout my welfare, not only here but there too :) Hugs and cookies, Cat!

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