Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 04/12/07 12:44 AM · On: Chapter 11
Excellent!!! You write so well I can picture it all in my head. I am loving this story, except for Dean pushing Sara away, that's a big no no.
Author's Response: Thanks so much I don't know that there's higher praise than that... I really appreciate it, and thanks for checking in it means the world to know that people are reading and enjoying - K
Reviewer: bernie (Signed) · Date: 30/11/07 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 10
I love your Sara and her family. This is such a great series. But it's so sad - Dean is always the tragic character - he ends up giving up everything that he might want - hopefully this isn't the plan for this story. Looking forward to the next xhapter!!!
Author's Response: So sorry for the slow response, somehow I missed your review. I'm glad you're digging sara and her family.. these have been great stories to write and it's even more fun knowing how well people respond. As for how the story will end, i'm not telling ;) All I can do is warn you that it's not the last in the series.. thanks - K
Reviewer: witchy (Signed) · Date: 30/11/07 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 10
Ouh, Dean knows how to play with people minds ! He always gets what he wants. I like that ! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: So sorry I missed your review, I agree Dean knows people. He knows just what needs to be said in order to get what he wants.. Good thing he's a good guy...lol - Thanks for the kind words - K
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 30/11/07 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 10
Ahhhh i love this story. Can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Sorry for the slow response Winch, just realized I never answered your review.. I'm glad you're diggin the story and I as always I appreciate you taking the time to let me know - K
Reviewer: POOKEE (Signed) · Date: 30/11/07 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 10
KEL, NONONONO!!!!! IN THE WORDS OF BOBBY SINGER - "YOU'RE BREAKIN' MY HEART". WHEN WILL DEAN EVER ALLOW HIMSELF TO BE HAPPY AND SARA'S A SMART WOMAN - SHE'S GOT TO SEE THROUGH DEAN'S HARSH WORDS. SHE WILL ..... RIGHT KEL??? RIGHT KEL???? LOL I LOVE DEAN'S REMEMBRANCE OF HIS "KITCHEN TIME" WITH SARA IN THE LAST CHAPTER AND WITH SARA'S REMEMBRANCE OF THE FIRST TIME SHE MET AND CARED FOR DEAN IN THIS CHAPTER. THESE FEW LINES SO VERY SO CAPTURE THE BOND AND LOVE THE TWO FEEL FOR ONE ANOTHER. THESE CHARACTERS WHEN TOGETHER SUPERBLY BRING OUT THE BEST IN YOUR ALREADY TALENTED WRITING. P.S. HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY! MINE WILL BE HERE BEFORE DECEMBER'S END. I THINK I'D LIKE THE SAME PRESENT AS YOURS!!!!!! CARRY ON TALENTED AUTHOR, POOK
Author's Response: Dean happy what show do you watch Pook? lol. A happy Dean would cause a rift in the time/space continum...lol. Glad you're enjoying and as for Happy Birthday's I'll see what I can manage - Kel
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 30/11/07 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 10
Hey Kell, awseome update! Thanks for spoiling us with two new chapters within a few days :) Chocolate for you! So Sara doesn't want to leave Dean but he pushes her away - awwww. Go Dean, finish Gordon! I am really enjoying this story and looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you!
Author's Response: Thanks sweety glad you enjoyed and I will gladly take the chocolate...lol. - K
Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 29/11/07 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 10
ok thanks for this update can't wait for more
Author's Response: Your welcome Bookworm, glad you liked, I'll get an update posted soon - kel
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 29/11/07 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 10
No... Dean is pushing Sara away for the safety of herself and her children, that's he's so Dean to do that. But Sara is determined to stay and help to save Sam. There're not lot of action in this chapter but it was so emotional. I'm looking forward for your next update Kel.
Author's Response: Thanks much Oceane so glad you enjoyed. I figured Dean would be swamped with guilt over the whole Gordon thing, driving Sara away for her safety just seems so Dean to me.. As always thanks for the R&R it means a lot - Kel
Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 29/11/07 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 10
I am sobbing right now, absolutely bawling!! Please, please, please, please don't make Dean leave her!!!!! He's not there JUST to make Sam happy, he loves her!! She makes HIM happy!!! Please, please (yes, I'm begging here) PLEASE have a happy ending!!!!!! I NEED a happy ending!!! Pretty please???
Author's Response: Man, now I feel guilty. I so didn't mean to make you cry (though the begging is kinda nice...lol) I can't promise a happy ending as I'm never sure till I write it..lol. I do promise to update as fast as I can. Hope that helps - Kel
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 29/11/07 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 10
Not much action??? Were we reading the same chapter??? Just another awesome chapter... Dean trying to let Sara go - guh - *wibble* Loved that Dean could scare Gordon off even cuffed to a chair.... So...I'll be patient....waiting for the next chappie.....waiting..... I know - people in glass houses and all that..... This story totally rocks!!!
Author's Response: Sorry Lisa, should have made sure my disclaimer meant actual action not just a whole lotta drama. So glad you're enjoying and hey you know turn-about is fair play, i've been waiting patiently...:)
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 29/11/07 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 10
"She knew what it was to be dependant on the happiness of others for your own happiness. She'd been living that way for a couple years now." I so live this sentence. And a lot of others too... Dean really intents to disappear from her life after that huh... It is just too sad! Especially this, i hurt for poor Sara, "Go to your kids, Sara, they need you. I don't,"
Author's Response: Glad you dug it Fredo, and I appreciate you going over it for me, another pair of eyes always helps to clean a story up. Also as always thanks for the enthusiasm, you have a knack for making me want to write more :) Kel
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 29/11/07 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 10
another great update kel thanks Lorraine
Author's Response: Thanks Lorraine, and I appreciate the stars also... - Kel
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 29/11/07 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 10
So typical of Dean to push away a chance for happiness rather than let her be in any danger, even though she's well able to look after herself. Can't wait till the next update Kel, don't mind when, just keep it coming!
Author's Response: Hey thanks bullet, so glad you're enjoying, I'm really so happy with the response this story is getting. - Kel
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 25/11/07 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 9
wonderful update kel thanks Lorraine
Reviewer: buttercup (Signed) · Date: 25/11/07 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 9
ABSOLUTELY LOVING THIS FIC!!! You truly are an incredible writer and I can't wait for more! Happy Birthday btw ;) sophie
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 24/11/07 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 9
That was a thrilling chapter Kel. Dean remembering a hot, steamy memory happening two months ago, loved it. Hope that Sam is safe. Gordon won't be an happy man, I'm afraid that Dean is going to pay. What Sara is going to do. It's getting so intense, can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks Oceane, glad you thought it was hot and steamy...lol. Things are really moving along now, - Kel
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 24/11/07 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 9
Kick his arse Dean!!! Never liked Gordon anyway. Awesome update....Keep 'em coming!!
Author's Response: Ah...so true that's what makes Gordon so much fun, he's easy to kill off. Glad you liked and I'll get posting soon - K
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 24/11/07 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 9
Better and better! Sam and Dean work so well as a team and you capture that brilliantly.
Author's Response: Thanks Shannon, I love when they mirror each other's thoughts it's one of my favorite things on the show. - Kel
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 24/11/07 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 8
AWESOME!!!!! Keep up the great work!!
Author's Response: Glad you liked Winch, we're getting down to it now. Thanks for the R&R it always means so much - K
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 24/11/07 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 8
Great chapter! Dean is much smarter than I am. I would have killed Gordon right there on the stairs. He really loves Sara and her family to be so considerate.
Author's Response: Yeah, well if it was my house, I'd want a bit of consideration also, after all blood's a bitch to get out of the hardwood floors...lol. So glad you liked and thanks for the R&R - k
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 24/11/07 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 9
great chapter!!! Nice memory... "A measure of calm broke over him as he realized at least one good thing. Sara wasn't here with him, that cuff dangling from the fridge had been a sign. She was free, she was safe." Yeah well, as you said, she's a mom, she can't just abandon the people she loves. And again i wish you a happy happy birthday, even if my time zone we're already sunday!..
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed Fredo, this one's starting to wind down. I'll be bit sad when it's over, though I'll have plenty of time to come up with a NEW Sara story just in time for your b-day...Thanks for the support, Kel
Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 24/11/07 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 9
Happy Birthday!! I loved the pressie you wrote yourself, GUH!!! Excellent chapter once again. Full of tenderness & heart pumping excitment & thrills. I love this story!! More ASAP please.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, glad you dug the chappy, I will update just as soon as I can, Kel
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 24/11/07 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 9
Oh baby - who needs to write when I can be reading THIS!!!!! Think this is a b-day present for all of us, Kell! Do I even need to tell you how much I loved the flashback???? Now, the way you are teasing this out is killing me.... leaving Dean doing ??? to Gordon - with his hands tied behind his back and to a chair??? Could he decapitate Gordon with it?? I LOVE this story..... Save a bit of Gordon for Sara to whump, though.... So....ummm.....another chapter for Tuesday???
Author's Response: YOU, need to write....lol. I have to admit to REALLY enjoying writing the flashback, so glad you liked reading. We're getting down to it now, I may be able to get another chappy done by Tuesday or Wed. Thanks as always Lam for the support ;) Kel
Reviewer: jp123 (Signed) · Date: 24/11/07 03:33 PM · On: Chapter 9
Thank you so much for another fab chapter, Im really enjoying your story, I hope you update soon.:)
Author's Response: Thanks glad you're enjoying, though I didn't say it, I'm thinking I'll post a new chappy by Wed.. - K
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 24/11/07 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 9
Arghhh...Don't stop now!!!!! I was 'so' into this chapter, please don't leave me hanging! And the Sara/Dean on the floor thing...ehem...may just need to go read that bit again! Very hot! As always, beautifully written, very descriptive and extremely addictive! You must update this soon...please.
Author's Response: Sorry to leave you hanging Louy...lol. I will update soon though if that's any consolation. I'm so glad you're enjoying this one - K
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