Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 11/12/07 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 12
By stabbing DEan, Gordon has been true to himself until his death. Sam finally killed him, he had no choice. Hope that Dean is not too seriously injured. That was a gripping chapter, can't wait for the last one.
Author's Response: Gripping huh? I like that. Thanks so much Oceane, I'm glad your enjoying and I'll post soon - Kel
Reviewer: Anybody out there (Signed) · Date: 11/12/07 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 12
Ooh yeah, still like this. should be good little reviewer and tell you everything I like about this, but my mind's not working, to tired, middle of the night, should sleep (don't know why I don't, sigh), but really it's good!!! But seriously, did you have to leave us there? So not fair:( Keep up the good work (ASAP) !
Author's Response: Middle of the night, well, hell, get some sleep, this story will still be here tomorrow.. ;) I am glad you're enjoying it and I always appreciate a review, even a brief one will do..lol. Thanks so much - K
Reviewer: CherryTootsiePop (Signed) · Date: 11/12/07 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 12
awww i can't believe this story is almost over. i do hope you're planning on creating another sequel for this. =) keep up the good work.
Author's Response: My good friend Fredo, who encouraged me to write a new Sara story has requested the sequel for her birthday so no fear we will be running into Sara's family again. - So glad you're diggin the story - Kel
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 11/12/07 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 12
Finally that human devil is dead! And Sam did the deed---how appropriate. An excellent chapter. I think fight scenes are hard to write, but you did great!
Author's Response: Yeah, Shannon I have to say Fight scenes (for me at least) are hard. I know I always worry I went too easy on the boys. Though I guess this time with Dean stabbed, I probably did just fine..lol - Kel
Reviewer: bernie (Signed) · Date: 11/12/07 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 12
You leave us hanging so very nicely! Hopefully it was Sara that pulled the trigger. Justice for the lady! Then Dean can get his act together (we hope!). Looking forward to Friday! Have a great one!
Author's Response: Friday it is.. so glad youre enjoying and I hope you enjoy the ending - Kel
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 11/12/07 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 11
Yay Jack! I love that big, furry slobberhound! Just when I feel a sense of relief that one character is safe, you throw them back into the mix again.
Author's Response: lol.. yeah furry slobberhound sums up my Jack as well. Gotta keep things lively you know..lol - K
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 11/12/07 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 10
Wonderful chapter! I love the part where Dean slaps her on the butt! So funny! I would worry about Dean and Sara, but I believe they will make it back to one another.
Author's Response: Thanks Shannon, glad you're enjoying it. Hope you like the rest - Kel
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 11/12/07 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 12
Aw...Kel what an awesome chapter, I was reading so fast I almost lost my own place a few times lol Great action and that knife must have hurt... need to find out what happens. please update soon..
Author's Response: Updates coming, so glad you enjoyed, action is the absolute hardest thing for me to write so I'm glad it seemed to have worked - Thanks as always Kel
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 11/12/07 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 12
Glad Sam got to give Gordon his send off. Dean strategy may not have been for the best, but who could blame the guy!? Hopefully he's not going to pay too high a price for it. Any chance he can get well enough for a little kiss and make up with Sara? I'm enjoying this very much, looking forward to more. Thanks.
Author's Response: Yup, Gordon's down for the count at last, just the wrap-up left. thanks for sticking with me and I'm glad you're enjoying - K
Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 11
Yay I'm glad good ol Jack made and appearance! Like Bobby I'm sitting here cursing Dean's stupidity for doing what he did to Sara. This is just so well written Kel. I can safely say I've enjoyed reading every chapter! I'm looking forward to an update :) -Bex
Author's Response: You're making me blush here, girly. I'm glad you enjoyed catching up, there's not much more that I could wish for than to keep someone entertained for an hour.... :) Kel
Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 10
Oh man I just know Dean doesn't mean that...and once again he sacrifices everything for the people he loves..this one was a tear jerker m'dear..the amazing description of Dean's eyes being dead, was chilling and heartbreaking! Amazing, once again. -Bex
Author's Response: Bex, you're reading them quicker than I can respond...lol. So glad you're enjoying. As for Dean, well it's why we're all so fascinated with him right. ;) Thanks as always for the support - K
Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 9
I always love it when Sam is described as Dean's 'baby brother'..its just so sweet especially given that he's this hulking full grown man :)..another enthralling chapter m'dear, I especially loved the imagine conjured up of dear ol' Sammy falling asleep on the couch after stuffing his face. The romance between Sara and Dean is neither off putting nor does it take away from Dean's utter love for Sam, and I really like Sara, she's a hard ass! -Bex
Author's Response: lol, baby right.. too funny. But somehow I figure for Dean size never mattered. So glad you like the balance between Dean's feelings for Sara and his love for Sam. I would never want a character of mine to lessen the bond between the brothers.. after all they're the reason we're all here... Thanks again for taking the time to review - K
Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 8
Oh man Sara is a fire cracker! Sorry for the slow reviews Kel, I've been meaning to have a sit down and have a catch up with your stories for some time now! Another great chapter, although I found myself screaming at the screen, (like one does when watching a horror movie,) telling Dean not to leave Gordon alone! Great job! -Bex
Author's Response: Ah, no worries about the slow reviews, I'm so constantly behind on my reading I completely understand. Glad you're enjoying the story so far, and as always I appreciate your reviews...Kel
Reviewer: POOKEE (Signed) · Date: 06/12/07 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 11
KEL, THIS CHAPTER IS A TRUE EXAMINATION OF DEAN'S AND SARA'S INNER TURMOIL WITH THEMSELVES. ALTHOUGH DEAN CAN PUT HIS WALLS UP ABOUT WHAT HE THINKS IS BEST FOR SARA AND HER FAMILY, HIS BODY PHYSICALLY CANNOT ACCEPTED HIS EMOTIONAL LIES. HE CANNOT HANDLE LOSING HER. HOW SWEET. INTERESTING HOW SARA INTERPRETS DEAN'S HARSH WORDS TO LEAVE AS TELLING HER "TO GO" ON TWO LEVELS: LEAVE THE PROPERTY AND HIS LIFE, WHILE DEAN SEES SARA FREEING HIM ON TWO LEVELS ALSO: FREEING HIM FROM THE KITCHEN AND FROM HER LIFE. GOD, THESE TWO ARE MADE FOR EACH OTHER. HOPEFULLY BOBBY WILL STEP IN AND KICK BOTH THEIR BUTTS INTO CLARITY. YOU ARE THE MASTER OF WRITING THE "MONOGAMOUS DEAN"!! GREAT WRITING, CARRY ON WAYWARD AUTHOR, POOK
Author's Response: Well, Dean is nothing if not self-sacrificing and Sara's got her own issues with doing the best for those she loves regardless of her own wishes.. Match made in heaven right...lol. As for Monogamous Dean.. well yum, it's not hard to put your own fantasies to paper...lol. Thanks so much and I'm glad you're diggin this one - K
Reviewer: Synera (Signed) · Date: 05/12/07 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 11
Great chapter. I hope Bobby really knocks some sense into Dean about Sara. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm glad that you enjoyed. I'll get this updated soon - K
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 05/12/07 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 11
Oh Kel, this is heartbreaking! Sara crying at Bobby's shoulder. Oh man, I guess you didn't take my email into consideration - lol. Great chapter, so looking forward to more. I guess the big showdown is just around the corner. I am still hoping that Dean won't shut Sara out of his life completely, but as Fredo said I guess we have to stack up on some tissues here, or??? Awesome update, great job :)
Author's Response: Got your email, and have been drooling over your Ten Inch Hero cut...lol.. Can't get enough of it.. As for the tissue warning.. hm.. Well you can blame Fredo for that..Glad you're enjoying and I'll post more soon - k
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 04/12/07 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 11
Great, Bobby came back to help. Poor Sara, crying on Bobby's shoulder, so heartbreaking. Way to go Jack, you found Sam. Time to go after Gordon, the hunter is becoming the hunted for a change. Amazing work Kel, can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks as always Oceane.. Glad you're enjoying - K
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 04/12/07 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 11
freakin' awesome chapter Kell! Brave Jack, he reunited the brothers... Poor Sara... Great Bobby! Funny not lost Sam. And Dean... Just in case you don't remember, I LOVE THIS STORY!!! Can't wait for the big fight, eventhough i know you don't like to write them, i know also it's gonna be perferctly done, and well, looks like we won't avoid the heartbreaking end, so will keep tissues nearby...
Author's Response: Keeping the tissues handy is probably a good idea Fredo..so glad you enjoyed and as always thanks for the support. I'm just happy you're enjoying your story - Kel
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 04/12/07 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 11
Enjoyed? I would say so, great chapter, and I have a feeling Sara is still around and gonna be playing a part in the ending. I know it probably can't happen but I do wish Dean could get his 'dream come true' Great read, thanks Kel!
Author's Response: Aw, come on Bullet. LIke anyone of us would leave...lol... glad you're enjoying and thanks for the review - K
Reviewer: Supernatural227 (Signed) · Date: 04/12/07 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 11
I loved this Story. It has so much action and romance, I can't get enough of it! I cant wait till' the next chapter!! Good job so far!
Author's Response: Thanks 227, I appreciate it and thanks for the review it's always great to know that people are reading - K
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 04/12/07 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 11
YAY!! Great update. Keep 'em comin'
Author's Response: Thanks Winch.. will do. Well at least another chapter or so, this one's really nearing it's end - Kel
Reviewer: witchy (Signed) · Date: 04/12/07 04:41 AM · On: Chapter 11
I'm glad the boys are back together ! They always are stronger as a pair ! And bobby is here to help ! But something tells me that Gordon didn't say his last word...
Author's Response: Yeah the boys are more fun when together..Glad youre enjoying I'll update soon - K
Reviewer: CherryTootsiePop (Signed) · Date: 04/12/07 04:38 AM · On: Chapter 11
ahhhh! this story is freakin' awesome! please update soon!
Author's Response: So glad you're enjoying Cherry... I will update soon, - Kel
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 04/12/07 01:35 AM · On: Chapter 11
Great update Kel, thank you very much Lorraine
Author's Response: Thanks Lorraine, I'm glad you enjoyed, and thanks for the stars! - K
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 04/12/07 01:17 AM · On: Chapter 11
Ok - It doesn't matter how long the chapter is, I still get to the end and say - awwwwww, that's it???? I've said it before, and I'll say it again - this is just an awesome story!!!! Love the reactions of everyone to Dean cutting Sara off - I KNOW you are gonna fix that, right? Loved Jack to the rescue!!! Your Jack must be behaving himself!!! Of course, you realize the in "real life", Jared is the serious dog lover.... Thanks Kel! I can't tell you how much I just love this story!
Author's Response: hm.. define Fix... not sure it's gonna happen Lisa.. we'll just have to see :) - Kel
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