Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 17/12/07 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 13
Oh Kel, what an ending. I am sitting here, tissues in my hand.... snif... lol. Ok, me and Fredo will go on strike now - seriously. I know, I know, you promised one more Sara story and I am really looking forward to it. But do you really think that's gonna be enough? We want more!!! :) This was amazing, wonderful, heartbreaking. So Dean thinks he is nothing? Aw, give that man some confidence and knock some sense into him. Since Sara comes from the same (hunting) background I believe they could team up together and make their lives work. Come on, one story with a Winchester happy-end, ok? And then of course sequels... lol! id I mention that I so love Sara and the kids? And Dean loves them too and Sammy and oh ya, Fredo loves them too:) Thank you for sharing this story with us! I will read it again. Woman you rock :)!
Author's Response: Sorry about the tears, Dagmar...lol. I should have issued a tissue warning. Going on strike, whoa, wait a minute there, Chicky, you and Fredo are my cheering section you two go on strike and I'm doomed ;) Hm.. I'll have to put a little thought into more, or else come up with a character that rivals Sara. So glad you enjoyed the story as for reading again, what a compliment. Look for the next one in February, and I'll talk to you before that... Kel
Reviewer: CherryTootsiePop (Signed) · Date: 16/12/07 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 13
lol if it wasn't for that end note i would have said something hehehe. i'll patiently wait for the story :) keep up the good work!
Author's Response: lol, everyone else has said something Cherry...lol... I would have understood. Naw it's not the end of Dean and Sara only a pause in their story, more to come and thanks so much for the R&R It's always appreciated - K
Reviewer: Synera (Signed) · Date: 16/12/07 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 13
I'm so thankful for that A/N, or I just might of started looking to start one. That was brilliant writing all around. Does Dean know that Sara was the one who shot Gordon, or will that come out in the next story?
Author's Response: Trust me at the moment, Dean's clueless to the fact that Sara fired that gun.. he's gonna find out soon enough though and he's not gonna be happy - Thanks so much for reading and I'm glad you dug it. - K
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 16/12/07 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 13
Ok, so we'll hold off on the lynch mob - as long as there are enough hankies in stock to deal with this tale - lol. Beautifully written, Kel, just sad. Could definitely see Dean doing that though. Thanks for the story, Angela
Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment, Angela, the fact that it felt true to character is the nicest thing you could have said. As for that lynch mob well don't hang up the rope yet, who knows what'll happen in the next one...lol
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 15/12/07 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 13
Awww...so, so sad, I was all teary *sniff* ,and then, I read that you'll do another story with Sara and Dean, I'm so glad. That was an intense, poignant story, you did a wonderful work with this one kel.
Author's Response: Ah, Oceane, thanks so much. I'm glad I made you cry, hell, at times I made me cry. Thanks for always being so supportive and I'll see you on the next one - K
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 15/12/07 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 13
first thing first, thanks for the sweet words, I really consider myself lucky to have met you, and happy that we've gone further than that first review I sent, as it was one complaining because you were mixing names between your stories! lol... So, back to this story, Kelly, it was an awesome read, and it got the response it deserved. I loved it from first to last line. The end was... sadly perfect, perfectly heartbreaking, heartbreakingly Winchester-ish. One last story?... Let's say one more story, and we'll re-talk about it after...! 65 days till my birthday, and till Sara's coming back...
Author's Response: Aw...Fredo, I can always count on you to find my mistakes..lol. You should hang up a beta sign and start taking customers, you're good. As for the story, well what can I say, it's your story, people should be sending you reviews ;) after all, without you, Sara would have stayed in retirement....Though, since she's just had her heart ripped out, she might not be thanking you any time soon. 60 days huh, eeek, I'd better get and start typing. Thank you Fredo, for everything - Kelly
Reviewer: Anybody out there (Signed) · Date: 15/12/07 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 13
You should be really glad that I don't know where you live right now..... But: I've loved this story from the start and I still love it. The scenes that have been played out, the characters, they all seems so real. You have done a GREAT job, Kel. Looking forward to future story with Sara and Dean.
Author's Response: Trust me I posted this story and immediatly moved...lol. So glad you enjoyed, barring that killer ending. Keep an eye out after the first of the year, for the next installment - K
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 15/12/07 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 13
One LAST story???? no,no,no,no,no.... Pleeeeeaaassseee I love Sara - so does Dean, so does Fredo - what more do you want? So, thank you for letting Sara kill Gordon - that was awesome!!! The boys saying goodbye - just, well, .... guh! Please don't let Sara settle for some other guy.... who could ever replace Dean? And we know Dean isn't about to find someone else..... So - started the next one yet???? This was awesome Kell - a brilliant story from start to finish. I shall bribe Fredo to keep you at it.....
Author's Response: hm.... you guys are killing me. Fredo's already mentioned the hounding I'm gonna get if I make it my last. Well how about this, one more Sara story and I invent some other chick to be tortured..lol. Maybe this time Sammy'll get the girl. hm.....yeah scratch that it's probably not gonna happen, after all I'm a tried and true Deangirl. So glad you enjoyed - K
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 15/12/07 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 13
So I cried my eyes out for nothing? Beautiful story, marvelous ending (although I hated it!). I'll look for future stories.
Author's Response: Sorry about the ending Shannon, but come on, a Winchester happily ever after, please that's never gonna happen...lol.
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 15/12/07 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 12
I have to admit that I screamed through this the night you posted it, but didn't have time to review it until now - I'M DONE EXAMS!!!!! - and this is such a nice present!!!! Awesome action in this chapter Kell! I really like your take on Dean's attitude to Sam going to school - it really makes more sense than the general attitude that he was pissed in some way about it.... Certainly, doesn't preclude any angst over it either.... Anywho - love the Dean/Gordon fight - like YUM!! Soooooo.... I'm voting for Sara to be the shooter.... and now I'm going to find out!!!!
Author's Response: YOU'RE DONE EXAMS!!!!!!!!!!... hm. I don't know who's more excited you or the Amazons, we've missed ya. Glad you enjoyed the action.. argh alwasy makes me nervous. As for Dean and school I always figured he gave Sam what he wanted... Thanks as always Lisa
Reviewer: witchy (Signed) · Date: 15/12/07 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 13
Well I was gonna say that you made a mistake when you said that it was the last chapter. I was gonna tell you that it was obviously wrong and that you meant that it was "almost" the last chapter because there is ABSOLUTLY no way you can leave us like that ! with that so sad end !! But then I read the chapter end notes and breathed again when I read that Sara and Dean will meet again for another story. So now I can't wait to read it 'cause if it's gonna be as good as this story and the others you already wrote, I sure will have once again a very good time reading it.
Author's Response: Ah, witchy, thanks for the compliment, I'm glad you liked and no worries, Sara will be back. Glad you enjoyed and thanks much for showing your support with your reviews, it's always appreciated - K
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 15/12/07 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 13
Unbelievably sad, but I'm very glad you said there is at least one last story to go with Sara...hope it has a happy ending though cos after this chapter I've run out of tissues...
Author's Response: hm... happy ending, now I didn't promise that did I????, we'll have to see how it goes. Thanks for the support Bullet it means so much- K
Reviewer: clairebear (Signed) · Date: 15/12/07 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 13
You have to write another sequel ... please, please. This was just so sad an ending. Claire
Author's Response: I will hunni no worries, thanks for reading and reviewing it's always appreciated - K
Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 15/12/07 05:31 AM · On: Chapter 13
I'm not liking you right now......LOL. But seeing as you said they'd be back, I just might be able to forgive you. This time. I am sitting here bawling my eyes out!!!! The whole chapter was exceptional & you get high high praise for it!! Looking forward to the next story, so don't take too long!! LOL.
Author's Response: No worries, I'll have the next stoy up after the holidays, I plan on posting in February. So glad you enjoyed and hopefully you'll find it in your heart to forgive. ;) Thanks for sticking with it, and I'll see you for the next one - K
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 15/12/07 02:01 AM · On: Chapter 13
Ah very sad, but beautiflly written Kel .Well done. Lorraine
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the support Lorraine and I'm glad you enjoyed.
Reviewer: witchy (Signed) · Date: 14/12/07 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 12
can't believe it's almost over... Bouh ! But hey, it seems that you won't leave without a little hurt Dean and maybe nurse sara !! Ok, nurse bobby and Sam will be fine too !!! Ooh and you got rid off Gordon : finally ;o) Can't wait for the last chapter
Author's Response: Thanks so much witchy I"m glad you've enjoyed, just posted the last chapter tonight, enjoy - K
Reviewer: staffy08 (Signed) · Date: 12/12/07 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 12
Only one more left... I'm kinda happy (to know the end) and kinda dissapointed cause I'm really enjoying this. Thank you for yet another great chapter. Merrie
Author's Response: Funny, Staffy, I'm really happy the end is near and I'm dissapointed cause I've enjoyed writing it..lol. Thanks for the review ;) - K
Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 12/12/07 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 12
Can't wait for the finish good job
Author's Response: Thanks, so glad you're enjoying and thanks for the stars - K
Reviewer: POOKEE (Signed) · Date: 12/12/07 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 12
KEL, WHY DO I HAVE THE FEELING THAT SARA HAD MORE TO DO WITH THE GUNSHOT THAN SAM. I THINK DEAN'S LUST FOR VENGEANCE GOT THE BEST OF HIM THIS TIME. YOU GAVE US ENOUGH IN THIS CHAPTER JUST TO TORMENT THE READER! GREAT AS ALWAYS, CARRY ON, POOK
Author's Response: Yeah Pookee, Dean lost control a bit. Sorry for the torment but I gotta make sure you all stick around till the end. Thanks for reading - K
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 12/12/07 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 12
oh Kell... Awesome! You don't like to write fight scenes, but you really nailed this one, excellent. Loved the three POVs at the end. Can't wait for the final chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks Fredo, I appreciate the vote of confidence, fight scenes aren't my fav. Final chapter's on it's way, I just have to write it. ;)
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 12/12/07 03:35 AM · On: Chapter 12
OMG Kel, you have me on the edge of my seat here!!! Didn't expect that... awwww, please save Dean :) There are so many lines in this awesome chapter that I'd love to quote. You did an excellent job on this one, love Dean's POV about taking on Gordon because it is "his job"... once again... Oh dear, I will have to wait until Monday to read the next chapter because I will be away. I am really looking forward to it! Thanks so much for this great story. More Sara + family AND (!) Dean to come please! :) Hug, Dagmar
Author's Response: Save Dean, please Dagmar. Like I'd ever risk Dean..lol. Glad you enjoyed argh, hate the fight scenes.. Luckily this one's all over and done with. - K
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 12/12/07 01:35 AM · On: Chapter 12
Thanks for a great update Kel, really enjoy this story will be sad to see it end. Lorraine
Author's Response: Thanks Lorraine I'm really glad your enjoying - Kel
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 11/12/07 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 12
Awesome update as usual!!!
Author's Response: Ah, too sweet Winch.. so glad you liked and thanks for the stars - kel
Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 11/12/07 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 12
Thank God Gordon is dead!! But DEAN!!!!!! He'll be ok, he'll be ok, he'll be ok. Right?? Loved it, so descriptive & awesome & so Dean wanting to punch the crap out of Gordon. LOL. Ok, so Friday for you is Saturday for me. I'll be waiting!!
Author's Response: You keep saying "He'll be ok" till Friday, Glyconut, dont stop or Dean dies, his fate is in your hands.. mwhaaaaaaaa...lol. Seriously though, I'm glad you're enjoying and thanks for sticking with me till the bitter end...Kel
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 11/12/07 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 12
Kel- sorry I havent been leaving reviews- I'm naughty that way... but I have been reading- and gah... just had to take the time to say that I hope in your next update, Sam unloads the entire clip into Gordon... ( you know- just to be sure! )- call it a Christmas wish - heehee.
Its been a great story- but then I liked the first one with Sara too.
Author's Response: No worries about the reviews Tree, and I'm glad you're enjoying. Only a bit left to this one, I hope you enjoy - Kel
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