Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 21/10/07 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 3
Lovin this story!!! Way to ratchet up the tension - I am dying waiting for Dean to get in the house - you just know it's going to go south - hopefully not before he gets the kids out. I am sooo looking forward to the chapter (well in the distance, I'm sure) when Dean finally gets his hands on Gordon..... Not looking forward to the chapter after that when I just know that Dean is going to try to walk out of Sara's life to protect her.... Just a thought - maybe Jack could be at the grandparents for Saturday night....or perhaps the vet with a non-life threatening cold???? Seems to be a quiet Sun. afternoon, so you should get the mountains of reviews you deserve for this......
Author's Response: So glad Lisa.. I've got Dean trying to figure a way in, so hold tight. I hope to update by Wed.. So glad you're enjoying. - thanks for reading - K
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 21/10/07 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 3
you really wanna know my thoughts? WOW, i LOVED it. Amazing. Weird to find your kids in this story, i mean, as i know you personally, it makes it strange to read about them in a fictional story, which describes how they are in real life. The whole "climbing the walls, due to forced inactivity." remembers me conversations we had. In a few years you'll have to make them read that, i'm sure they're gonna love it. Even the Transformers are here!
Author's Response: Lol, yeah, they really are my kids..lol. Soooooo glad you liked, you're opinion means the world. I'll update as quick as I can, - K
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 21/10/07 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 3
Very nice. This one gets a whole bag of gummi worms
Author's Response: hm, gummi worms I'll take that..lol. Glad you enjoyed - K
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 21/10/07 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 3
Great update kel, so glad Bobby is there with his level head to lend a hand. Because something is bound to go wrong. Lorraine
Author's Response: Hell, what would be the fun in reading if something didn't go wrong..lol. Glad you enjoyed thanks Lorraine - K
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 21/10/07 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 3
This is great - although the story itself is very tense, the fort memory is sweet, I always love little glimpses into what Sam andDean might have been minus one house fire. Thanks for the read, Angela
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed, didn't want to push this one too fast, so I figured a bit of background would work. Next chapter's Dean in the house so should be fun. thanks so much for letting me know what you thought, reviews are like gold..lol - K
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 21/10/07 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 2
If there's a use in the world for Gordon I'd be hard pressed to find it -- unless it's to make stories like this - you kinda feel the air hum in this can't ya? Love it so far. _ Angela
Author's Response: lol, that's so true isn't it. Fun to have someone that you can hate completely. So glad you enjoyed - K
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 2
Kel, you know how to build the tension. Sara is quite a woman, she's tough. The good news is that Dean and Sam're already there, hope they'll find a plan to save Sara and the children. Riveting story so far, can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much Oceane, soooo glad you're enjoying. I'm going to update later Today - Sunday afternoon - Hope you enjoy - K
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 2
Awww Jack was killed by a car? I liked that pooch. I do not like gordon. Nope..Don't like him. This is very good.
Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment..lol. You're supposed to not like Gordon..glad you're enjoying a new update will be posted by Monday. Thanks for reading - K
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 2
Kelly Kelly Kelly, outstanding!!! I love every changes you made, and, bonus, it's much longer than what you sent me. A lot of great lines, my favorite probably being "She now realized that using the word wasn't the same as feeling the word, in that one blow, Sara felt the words." Can't wait for more, hoping than Dean and Sam will find a way to save her, hoping the kids are alright, hoping Jack is somewhere, hoping your hubby will give you space so as you can update quickly...
Author's Response: Love that longer's a bonus..lol. Makes me feel loved :) As for getting more space to write..lol. That's not going to happen today. I'm going to try my best to post the next chapter by Monday though, and bonus for you, you haven't read it yet. - Thanks as always for everything you do Fredo. - K
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 2
Of all the villains to choose, you picked the one I hate most! (Doesn't everyone?) This is too good---can't wait for more! I'm eager to see how the kids handle this situation!
Author's Response: Ah....everyone hates Gordon, that's what makes him so fun. We'll have to see about the kids..lol. Even I'm not sure yet how they're making out. Guess I better head on up to the attic and see - K
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 1
I love the Powers family! I'm glad Fredo put the bug in your ear. The tension in this first chapter is excruciating! I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: lol, yeah it was all Fredo. So glad you enjoyed and I'm planning on posting as quick as I can. thanks for reading - K
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 2
I think this is my favourite birthday present!!! Thanks Kell!! Great chapter - I squirmed in my seat the whole time! Please tell me that Gordon is going to meet a slow and painful death.... Poor Dean - he is going to feel so guilty regardless of what happens - still blaming himself for everything.... Please tell me that you did NOT kill Jack off in my b-day chappie...!? I'm hoping he's up with the kids... could be a problem if he needs to go outsid... Can't wait for the next update!!!!
Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed, sorry it was a bit late, got caught up in other things yesterday and didn't manage to post it until 2:00am. Yeah, I'm thinking Dean's going to pretty much be wallowing in guilt until his fingers get all pruny..lol. As for Jack, honestly I have no idea if he's alive or not yet..hm. Guess I'll have to decide soon..lol ;) Once again, Lisa, Happy Birthday
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 05:40 AM · On: Chapter 2
Great update K hope Dean and Sam give Gordon everything he deserves Lorraine
Author's Response: I have no doubt that Gordon's gonna get every last thing he deserves. Thanks for reading - K
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 05:38 AM · On: Chapter 1
Hi K what a wonderful story i`m going to go back and read all the others lorraine
Author's Response: Lorraine, so glad you're enjoying. And it's great that you're going to check out the other stories. Though I wrote them a while ago, they've always been some of my favs.. Thanks for the R&R - K
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 04:39 AM · On: Chapter 2
Great chapter K. the suspense is mounting. Love Gordon, you've writen him as a very believable character, and you've got his voice just right. Can't wait for update - this should be a feature story!
Author's Response: Ah, bullet too sweet. I've never been featured but who knows..lol. Glad you're liking my Gordon, I'm trying my best to keep him in character. Next update should be no later than Monday - Thanks as always for reading - K
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 02:33 AM · On: Chapter 2
Wow, great chapter. Loved how Sara "felt" the hate. Loved how Dean pointed out that their job is to hunt monsters and Gordon has become one. This is a fantastic story. I am already hooked! Extra cookies for not only bringing Sara back but also rising the tension to top level right away and bringing out the best in Dean - caring for the ones he loves. So looking forward to the next chapter! Thanks as always :) Dagmar
Author's Response: So glad you're enjoying, I'm really just having a ball writing this and the terrific response I'm getting helps..lol. Extra cookies huh, sounds good to me. I'll try and post no later than Monday - Thanks as always for reading and have a great weekend - K
Reviewer: POOKEE (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 1
K, I'VE ALWAYS LOVED YOUR STORIES WITH SARA. THE INTERACTION BETWEEN THE BOYS AND THE KIDS HAS ALWAYS PULLED ON MY HEARTSTRINGS AND DEAN'S RELATIONSHIP WITH SARA IS PURE GOLD. THIS STORY IS SETTING UP TO BE A NAIL-BITER. GORDON MUST BE VENTILATED!!!! CARRY ON WAYWARD AUTHOR, POOK
Author's Response: Thank you so much, that's a great compliment. So glad you liked it and Yeah I agree for messing with this little family Gordon is so done...lol. thanks for the review and the stars - K
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 1
Well , you have my FULL attention on this on. GORDON WALKER...ugh. If there ever was a character that needed to be removed - he's it. I hate cowards - he's the poster boy for a coward- using a woman as bait. OK ... you can tell that this chapter has me going . Excellent , powerful verbage- you have already created the mood and the temper of this story. OUTSTANDING!!!!! Compelling and demanding at the same time. Excellent !!!! Please post soon. a fan
Author's Response: WOW, I gotta say I love this review..lol. So glad you loved the fast start and I hope I can keep you on the edge of your seat. Update will probably be tomorrow, thanks for the review it means so much to know I'm hitting the right tone with the story - K
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 02:37 AM · On: Chapter 1
Yeah, another story with Sara and the kids! I missed them and I was actually going to ask you about them in my next mail - lol! What a great start! Once again we see that Dean puts the ones he loves first. Ahhh, and Gordon is back. I can't wait to see what happens next. More please soon.... and cookies for you for bringing Sara back, or would you rather have German gummibears??? :)
Author's Response: I hve to say, I'm suprised by how many people are tuning into this, I think my origonal story only got 20 reviews..lol. So glad you're enjoying and always feel free to ask for something..lol. Fredo does...he he he. Before you say anything more let me tell you I've already started a new Cat story, well of course Cat won't be involved but you get my drift. hm.. cookies or gummibears.. man that's a tough one, but Im gonna have to go with the cookies. As always thanks for the enthusiasm, it's readers like you thta make me thrilled to write....Talk to you soon -K
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 17/10/07 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hey! Told you I was going to review every couple of hours until I got some joy, right??? I see you told someone you could have the new chappie for Friday - did you forget that tomorrow (Thursday) is my Birthday???? Really, really - how about a little present???Please?????
Author's Response: lol, too funny Lisa.. hm.. that's what you want for your birthday. Alright then, I mean I got you a blow up Jensen but if you'd rather have a chapter of my story, I owe it to you to make you happy ;) Thanks for the love and I'll see about posting tomorrow. - Kel
Reviewer: Nilah (Signed) · Date: 17/10/07 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hurry up and post gal. I love Sara and her family. Can't wait for the story. And Gordon is an added incentive. Does that mean we get a little hurt Dean thrown in?
Author's Response: Oh, I'm pretty much thinking we get a bit of hurt everyone..lol. So glad to see this story getting such a great response. I'm typing as quick as I can..lol. Thanks for the review it means so much - k
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 17/10/07 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 1
Kel, I'm so glad that you're writring another story with Sara and her little family. What a start, I'm already captivated.So Gordon got Sara, more insane than before . The children've been very brave. What's going to happen next, can't wait to know.
Author's Response: Thanks so much Oceane, I'm always so happy to see you follow me onto another story. Glad you dig Sara and her family and I hope I can entertain you for a bit - thanks K
Reviewer: SUPERNATANGEL67 (Signed) · Date: 17/10/07 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great start. I am happy to see another Sara story. I loved the others and sure that I'll love this one as well.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm really excited about this story as well. I've got a new update nearly ready to go that'll I'll post probably on Friday.. So glad you enjoyed, and thanks for the review it's very much appreciated - K
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 17/10/07 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 1
Damn - tight lipped, much????? I LOVE Sara stories and this is fantastic right out of the blocks!!!! I barely breathed while I read the whole thing - thanks - officially hyperventilating here.... Loved Sammy packing the car and Dean screaming out in his bare feet... Gordon must die...... Should I review every couple of hours to hurry you along to post more quickly?????
Author's Response: Hey chicky I'd share all the stories I have planned but I don't think you have that much time right now.. So instead I'll just suprise you and post them..lol. So glad you liked, I wasn't expecting a big turn out for this story so I'm excited to find some Sara fans lurking out there. As for updates, I'm doing this one sans beta (eek) so they'll be timely.. So glad you enjoyed - K
Reviewer: jp123 (Signed) · Date: 17/10/07 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 1
yay loved it, can't wait for more
Author's Response: More is on the way, I've already written a good bit so I should be posting regularly - Glad you enjoyed and thanks for taking the time to review - K
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