Reviewer: buttercup (Signed) · Date: 27/10/07 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 5
Loving this..the suspense is killing!!! Keep up the amazing work. I am defiitely a huge fan of the Powers family and what they to the Winchester dynamic!! Can't wait for the next update sophie xx
Author's Response: Tell you what for a story I'm writing to fufill a fantasy (hm.. Dean as a dad, HOT) I'm so happy for the response it's getting, you guys have all been terrific. And I'm writing just as quick as I can - Thanks much K
Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 27/10/07 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 5
Ahhh this is so good... the suspence is leaving me on the edge of my seat and I love that good ol Jack didn't get shot! I love Sara she's so strong..this is an amazing story K! -Bex
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Bex.. I will take strong for me there's no better compliment. As to Jack he's safe for the moment, so no worries for now. Thanks so much for the stars and the review and I'm glad you're enjoying
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 27/10/07 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 5
Well done kel brilliant job. now all Sam and Dean have to worry about are each other and sara. Well done jack hope he took Gordons hand off. Lorraine
Author's Response: Ah, Lorraine, the kids may be out of the house, but I'm not sure they're safe yet.. We'll just have to see. I'm thinking that Jack may just have to get even with Gordon at some point, after all I know my own Jack does not take kindly to strangers upsetting his family. Thanks so much for the stars and the review - K
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 27/10/07 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 5
Like really soon? Like 95% really soon??? First - THANK YOU for not killing Jack - really, we don't need another reason to hate Gordon.... this is just a fabulous story - totally loving it. I loved the visual of Dean up against the house with all three kids clinging to him - who could have thought that would be so sexy?????? Just when you think you can't love the guy more.... Honestly, you had me so freaked out about Jack that I could barely force myself to scroll down the screen.... Waiting.....for.....next......chapter.... Done yet????
Author's Response: Man, Lisa you are a slave driver..lol. I'm thinking update more along the lines of Tuesday or Wednesday if I can manage.. Jacks safe for the moment, though I can't guarantee it for the length of the story.. Damn dog did steal that cheese after all..lol. Thanks as always for the review and I'm so glad you're enjoying - K
Reviewer: Synera (Signed) · Date: 26/10/07 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 4
This is good. It totally blends with the latest Supernatural episode. I can't wait to see what comes next.
Author's Response: Thanks so much what a compliment. I'm glad it's working for you, and I'll try and keep it up. Thanks for the stars and most of all thanks for the reviews, it means so much - K
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 26/10/07 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 4
Whew!!!!!! I couldn't wait for Dean to get to the kids. I'm glad the dog is there - he gives the kids a measure of safety. This is an AWSOME chapter- Dean's love of these children is verry evident. I can't wait for Gordon to get what he deserves- he needs to be put down- he's the filthy thing. You have as always, made the reading experience OUTSTANDING Please post soon. Bravo!!!!!! a fan
Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed and thanks a heap for the stars. It's too funny that everyone's so worried about big old jack. I never new that my slobbering, hairy, stinky Jack was such a charmer...lol - Thanks for taking the time to review... - K
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 24/10/07 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 4
Jack is sound and safe with the children, I'm so glad, I was worried about him. Awww...The children're so lovable. I hope they'll get out without Gordon knowing it. Riveting story Kel, you're doing an amazing work so far.
Author's Response: LOL, I have to say I'm amazed by the support Jacks gotten. So glad you're enjoying, I'm gonna keep updating just as fast as possible. Thanks for always taking the time to r&r, it's appreciated - Kel
Reviewer: POOKEE (Signed) · Date: 24/10/07 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 4
K, THIS CHAPTER TAKES THE READER ON SUCH A DIFFERENT PATH. ALTHOUGH THE DRAMA AND SUCH REMAIN, IT TAKES A BACK SEAT TO "DEAN'S FAMILY". AGAIN, THE LEVEL OF TRUST BETWEEN DEAN AND SARA IS IMPECABLY VOCALIZED THROUGH THE SILENCE OF MOVEMENTS AND GLANCES. GREAT WRITING. THE RELATIONSHIP BETWEEN DEAN AND THE CHILDREN IS SO ENDEARING. ONE WOULD EXPECT DEAN NOT TO RELATE TO CHILDREN - HIS HARDENED EXTERIOR AND LONG HIDDEN CHILDLIKE QUALTIES --- BUT "HIS CHILDREN" ARE NO DIFFERENT THAN SAMMY, HIS CHARGE. ON SCREEN THE VIEWERS GET FEW CHANCES TO SEE THIS SIDE OF DEAN, HIS FATHERING ETC, HERE IN SARA'S WORLD THOSE WONDERFUL CHARACTERISTICS SHINE. CARRY ON WAYWARD AUTHOR, POOK
Author's Response: Pook, thanks so much for the support. I 'm just glad that people (other than myself) enjoy seeing a bit of a softer side to Dean. Of course that'll only last as long as the kids are around, after that it'll be no holds barred, kick ass Dean. Personally I can't decide which I like better...lol. Guess that's why I"m writing a story with both. Thanks for reading and reviewing - Kel
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 24/10/07 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 4
A family hug!!! Love family hugs! Although no Dean in my family hugs... Yeah hubby probably would find it weird anyway... Super chapter, so glad Jack is with the kids. Liked Jessie's reaction, and then, the family hug! Can't. Wait. For. More. Luckily for you i have a very busy week, 'cause other than that i'd harass all day long... Did i say that the family hug was a great moment?..
Author's Response: Fredo, surely Thierry is secure enough to allow Dean into one of your family hugs...lol. I have to admit, kinda glad you are working this week cause I'm going to need every moment to figure out how to get three small children, 180 lb Dog and Dean all out of that house...hm........I said update on Friday huh. eeek.... Glad you liked. - Kell
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 24/10/07 12:10 AM · On: Chapter 4
YAY!!!Jack is ok!! This is good. gonna be a pisser to get all those kids and the dog outta the attic. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Tell me about it Winch, So glad you enjoyed, thanks for letting me know. It really means so much - K
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 23/10/07 11:23 PM · On: Chapter 4
Glad Dean's in and he dog's still good to go. Like that Sara caught a glimpse of Dean. Great story!
Author's Response: Glad you're diggin the story, I owe you one for your Jessica story, I've been eating up the chapters for that story, as quick as you post. Thanks for reading - K
Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 23/10/07 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 4
nicely written and thanks for finally getting dean to the kids. they're just so cute...especially jess. and i'm so happy you didn't kill Jack. I really thought he was dead. nice chapter, but too short for me. friday just can't come quick enough.
Author's Response: Man too short of a chapter huh, good to know I'm not boring anyone..lol. Thanks for the R&R it's much appreciated. I'll do what I can to get this posted - Kel
Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 23/10/07 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 4
Awww dean's such a softie at heart :)..I really like the dynamics between Mike and Jim and how they kinda match Sam and Dean's relationship. And I'm just gunna say it..I'm glad the cute dog is alive too :) Awesome..can't wait till friday! -Bex
Author's Response: Oh, that dog I'm so mad at the real life version, he's lucky I didn't kill him off..lol. Glad you're enjoying and I'll post as soon as I can. - Kel
Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 23/10/07 10:32 PM · On: Chapter 3
I loved the flash back of Sam making looking after three kids all under 7...it was perfect because you could just see poor Sam getting roped into something like that. The suspence is killing me K! -Bex
Author's Response: lol, yeah poor Sam, I've been in his shoes and it's never fun trying to occupy a house full of kids. Glad you liked, and thanks so much for the stars - K
Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 23/10/07 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 2
Gordon's a right piece of work..he just keeps getter more maniacle! I like how you've made Sara realistic..she isn't a damsel in distress but she knows her limits y'know she's a real person :) Great job! -Bex
Author's Response: So glad you like Sara, I try real hard to walk the line. She's just a woman that's been through a lot, and is determined not to lose anyone else - thanks for reading - K
Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 23/10/07 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 1
Woah...although I am a tad confused is this a sequel to one of your other stories K or a stand alone? It doesn't matter though because I really liked it. It's always nice to see Dean's parternal (sp?) side :)..very well written as usual! can't wait to read the next chapter! Bex
Author's Response: A tad confused, so not suprised Bex..lol. It is a sequel to a story called Thank You. I have a series of stories based on the brothers and the Powers family. Thank You is the first and explains anything and everything you need to know. Glad you enjoyed it despite the confusion...Kel
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 23/10/07 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 4
Marvelous! I'm soooo glad Jack isn't really dead. That really had me going. Dean is so adorable with his kids. I love the powers-Winchester family!
Author's Response: Now I couldn't kill off Jack, could I. But even Little Mikey would agree the big guy's no match for Gordon, at least not Gordon with a gun, so tucking him away for the moment worked for the best. Glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review - K
Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 23/10/07 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 4
good story would be even better if you let that ass gordon get killed. Man i hate that guy. Other than that i really like all of your storie and i am glade you are posting a new one keep up the good work
Author's Response: Ah, gordon, who better to hate than Gordon...lol. It's wonderfully freeing to use him in a story as no one minds if you kill him off in some nasty and painful way. So glad you're enjoying the story and I have to say thanks for reading, it's so appreciated - K
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 23/10/07 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 4
Good? Try Great!!!!! I love this story and hugs and kisses for you for keeping Jack safe. I will allow him to take one non-life threatening bullet in the cause of saving the family - but none of this he was too old to come through the anesthetic crap..... Love Dean and Sara locking eyes as he snuck past Gordon. Really looking forward to the scene (which has to be inevitable) when Gordon tries to make his hasty getaway - hehehehehe!! Waiting patiently for Friday.... At least Thursday falls in there......
Author's Response: Ah, Lisa, that damn dog. He's lucky I posted already or I would have had Dean trip over his bloated body.... Jack, my Jack, just ate an entire block of parmasean cheese..lol. Took it right off the table, I'm talking a BLOCK..lol. So yeah lucky for him and you guys, he did it after I posted. So glad you enjoyed and I'll update as quick as I can - K
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 23/10/07 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 4
Arg... how could you end the chapter there, it's just so mean! This is fantastic. This chapter had me reading faster and faster as Dean got in the house then spotted Sara and now protecting the kids ahh..... Awesome stuff - please update soon, loving this story!
Author's Response: lol, at over 3000 words I figured you'd all be happy for me to stop. Glad you liked, not much on the action, but we're quickly getting there. Thanks so much for taking the time to review it means the world - K
Reviewer: POOKEE (Signed) · Date: 22/10/07 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 2
K, THIS CHAPTER IS FULL OF HEAD GAMES, FROM GORDON'S HEAD GAMES WITH SARA AND BRIAN FEELINGS FOR HER TO GORDON'S HEAD GAMES WITH DEAN AS FAR AS HOW MUCH GORDON HAS SEEN OF HER BODY. WE ALL KNOW THAT COMMENT SIGNED GORDON'S DEATH WARRANT! ALSO LOVE THE STRENGTH THAT YOU GIVE SARA IN YOUR WRITING - DEAN WINCHESTER WOULD LIKE NOTHING LESS -- ALSO LOVE THE UNSPOKEN CONNECTION BETWEEN SARA AND DEAN, VERY SIMILAR TO THE ONE DEAN HAS WITH SAM. GREAT. CARRY ON, POOK
Author's Response: Thanks so much Pook, so glad you're digging this one. I always like Dean with strong woman, he doesn't seem the wilting miss type. And I figured we have to make Gordon as hated as possible..lol. I want no regrets in getting rid of the bastard...lol. thanks for reading - K
Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 21/10/07 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 3
very good job. Although annoyed that Dean's still not in the house, I really like the way you went back and showed how the kids got to where they were. nice job and hopefully in the next chapter somebody will be able to play hero.
Author's Response: Dean's on his way I promise..just hold tight, hoping to post by Wednesday. Thanks for reading - K
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 21/10/07 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 3
I like reading the story from the children's point of view. I t gives a more complete picture and we get to see how they're entertaining themselves.
Author's Response: Glad to know it worked Shannon. Thanks for reading and reviewing it means a lot - K
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 21/10/07 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 3
Riveting chapter. Poor children they must be scared to death. I hope that Dean'll rescue them without Gordon to know it. Great to have Bobby to help. Can't wait for more Kel.
Author's Response: Dean's moving oceane..lol. I'll update by mid week, don't wanna leave the poor kids any longer.. - K
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 21/10/07 01:49 PM · On: Chapter 3
Like the jump in timeline - works very well, and the fort is a great bit of description (& a cool hiding place) Hope Dean gets his skates on! Great chapter!!
Author's Response: Gald to know you enjoyed and it wasn't confusing, it's always unerving to flashback in a story. Glad you're enjoying - K
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