Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 07/11/07 01:35 AM · On: Chapter 7

Love the technical jargon of the hairpin - curvy part vs. mostly straight curvy part....LOL;) - am I the only one who also calls them "BOBBYPINS"???? that's irony at its finest, I think....

Ok. love the update - it is now 2:30 am here and I haven't slept in my bed (or for more than a 45 min. cat nap) in two days - ie Sunday I spent 1 and 1/2 hours in my bed.... but I had to read this BEFORE I could go to bed....

Loved Dean checking on Jack - and totally empathizing with his headache - that's my boy.... And thanks for allaying my fears about Jack yet again... really - you can't hold cheese against them - they have no power to resist that....

my only beef??? You total tease - I get a couple of thumps for the big Gordon/Dean fight scene - I gotta wait for more???? Please tell me you don't have a busy week planned and I'll get the next chapter sooooon - tomorrow???? Thursday????? Still a bit concussed here, could use a little cheering up..... *whine*.....

Author's Response:

Hey now, I spent at least ten minutes on youtube learning how to pick a handcuff lock, knowing the Amazons that's bound to come in handy some day..

A busy week...hm.. you didn't hear the news.. I'm leaving for 9 days, so you are, hate to say it completely out of luck..lol. 

You'll just have to wait patiently for the fight.  thanks as always for taking the time to review - Kel

Reviewer: Synera (Signed) · Date: 07/11/07 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 7

Excellent. I can't wait to see what happens next.


Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed, Thanks for taking the time to review and for the stars - K

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 05/11/07 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 6

Roll on tuesday is all I can say - i'm on the edge of my seat here, this is suspense writing  at it's best.

What is it with Dean and kids? Just works so well - he really is the parent/brother/protector isn't he - but guess that's why we all love him.

Author's Response: Thanks so much Bullet, I'm just floored by the repsponse this story has gotten, so glad everyone seems to be diggin it.. Yeah, you have to love an overly protective Dean.  As always thanks for reading and reviewing - Kel

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 03/11/07 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 6

What an intense chapter. Poor Sara, she's going through so much. Now that the children're safe, Dean can work to save Sara. Can't wait to know what'll happen next. Terrific writing Kel, you're doing great so far.

Author's Response: Thanks so much Oceane, trying to keep it coming fast as I can.. though I've noticed how far gone I am on other stories..lol.  I've got to get a move on..;)   - kel

Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 02/11/07 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 6

So K, did you finally get mad at the real life Jack and have him killed in the story, lol..I hope not cos I love that dog!

Great update as usual, I was holding my breath for a minute when you had Dean dropping Jess to Sam..very well written! And DAMN Gordon, how I hate him, you've written him so well in this that I find everytime I watch Hunted or Bloodlust I get SUPER angry lol :)

Can't wait to see what our 'hero' Dean does next,

-Bex

Author's Response:

Actually Bex as always I've forgiven big Jack.. The fact that he is just adorable is the only reason I don't have a st.bernard rug lying on my floor..lol. 

 As to Gordon, isn't he just the best to hate...lol.  Makes me just happy as a lark to work out ways of making him pay. 

As for our hero Dean (hm....) he's going to be on top form in the chapters to comel. Oh, and Sam's due a bit of glory so keep and eye out for that...

thanks  and I'll catch you around the site - K

Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 02/11/07 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 6

Still really enjoying this one, here's to Tuesday! 

Author's Response: Thanks so much, glad that I can return the favor as I enjoyed your last story so... ;)  thanks - K

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 02/11/07 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 6

TUESDAY??????!!!!!!!!!aaaarrrrrhgggghghhh!!!! Please, please, please....maybe just a little sooner????? OMG Kel!!! I think this is my favourite story EVER!!!! I don't think that I breathed the entire time I was reading this - just awesome, awesome storytelling here....

Thank you for NOT shooting Jack - he's a big dog and a little knock to the head won't be a big problem for him - right???? So, I'm thinking that you told us about those nasty steps to the concrete basement for a reason.... Can just imagine how pissed Sammy is right now at Dean...

Is it Tuesday yet????

Author's Response:

Lisa.. come on every now and then my family expects me to be around..lol. 

Tuesday's gonna be a stretch as it is.  So glad you liked, wasn't sure it wasn't too redundant to do Sara's experience.  Glad it worked for you.  As to Jack no worries, he's a tough pup, he'll  be fine.  And yeah, I'm thinking right about now Sam's a might miffed with big brother... - K

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 02/11/07 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 6

"It killed him to do so, he knew that the little girl that had so willingly befriended him would most likely never trust him again.  How could she, how could any of them when he was unable to keep them safe. Unable to bear the thought, Dean pushed it away.  Really, it would be a blessing, that way when he left and never returned they'd simply be glad." No way! Cause he saved them, and they will be grateful, and he will return, many many times, i wanna read that scene you hear me! Great chapter, love the different pov's, and love to hate Gordon. Tuesday sounds good to me. Just don't forget my tuesday starts 6 hours before yours..!

 

Author's Response:

Argh.....six hours ahead huh.. damn, you are a slave driver..lol.  I'll see what I can do.  Glad you enjoyed and really isn't Gordon too much fun to hate...lol.  Thanks as always for reading - Kel

Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 31/10/07 06:06 AM · On: Chapter 5

Um, how soon is soon, cause this is brilliant!!!!! It's going into my favourites. 

Author's Response: Hm.. how soon is soon, huh???  Well I'm writing as fast as I can.  Baring no huge problems, I should post late Thursday... So glad you enjoyed and WOW, it's going into your Favs??? Thanks  - K

Reviewer: POOKEE (Signed) · Date: 29/10/07 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 5

K,

TWO THINGS STAND OUT IN THIS CHAPTER  - ONE FUNNY, ONE NOT.

THE BEST LINE TO SUM UP DEAN'S RELATIONSHIP WITH THIS FAMILY - "WHEN HAD HIS LIFE TURNED INTO SOME KIND OF WARPED VERSION OF FAMILY CIRCLE" - PRICELESS.

THE DISTURBING PART OF THIS CHAPTER IS FORMULATED IN A FEW LINES - GORDON NEEDED TO DIE - THE MEN SHE CARED FOR COULD NOT BE THE ONES TO DO IT - IF YOU WANT SOMETHING DONE, DO IT YOURSELF..... FOR THOSE YOU LOVE.

GREAT AS USUAL.

CARRY ON

POOK 

 

 

 

Author's Response: Thanks Pook so glad you're enjoying.. Glad you liked the Family circle wasn't sure if that would play.  And as to what Sara's willing to do to keep her family safe, we'll just have to see - K

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 27/10/07 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 5

What a suspenseful chapter. Awww...Poor children, I just want to hug them. Dean had his hands full, not easy to deal with three afraid little children, he kept them safe until now, hope that'll continue. OMG!I thought that Gordon was going to shoot Jack. Amazing work Kel, I can't wait for more. 

Author's Response: So glad you're digging this one.  Today was a wash for writing so I'm thinking the update will be Thursday. After all, I can't leave Dean and the kids on that roof for too long. ;) thanks as always K

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 27/10/07 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 5

great chapter, although, as i said before, longer is good too... I really liked this, "That however, didn't mean she wanted one of the men she cared for to do the killing.  Sam, with his unfailing faith in a world that did nothing but beat him down, and Dean, the soldier in a never-ending war he refused to stop fighting, were already burdened with enough. really liked this, " I feel the same, Gordon needs to be stopped, but one of the brother killing him... Maybe Sara's gonna do it... Don't know how i'd like to see it end, and that's why it's good than it's you writing it! And as i said earlier, i think this could be my fav of yours... Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thanks Fredo, honestly it's how I feel about the boys and the things they've had to do to save themselves and others.

As to Sara killing Gordon, well I'll ask you Fredo, what would you do if you had the means and someone threatened your family....YUP. 

As for how it will end, HONESTLY haven't decided..lol.  You know me and planning ahead, I've never been good at it.

So glad you're enjoying this story, as it is YOUR story.  Hope I don't dissapoint, Kel

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 27/10/07 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 5

Awesome. This story just gets better and better.

Love the fact that you didn't kill the dog, and I hope Jack gets to taste a little piece of Gordon before this is all over. He so needs to pay big for this one!

Great work K.

Author's Response: Oh, Trust me I'm thinking Gordon's gonna pay...lol.  As to Jack he's safe for the moment, though I can't guarantee for the length of the story.  Thanks so much for the review and I appreciate the stars... K