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Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 15/11/09 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 15

Cool! A bit different from the show but I liked it. I was especially thrilled when Bobby pulled the gun on John in defense of the kids. yahoo!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 15/11/09 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 14

"But he thought it went well. There was no yelling, no bloodshed. A very good conversation by Winchester standards." Hilarious! Also, very true.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 15/11/09 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 13

Wow! Nikki is a fast thinker. One minute she decides to got to Australia and the next day she decides to move back to the USA. I guess that's normal for the Winchesters's nomadic life.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 15/11/09 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 12

Just a fun little night out for the Winchesters. No one even got beaten, possessed or cursed. Bet that doesn't happen often.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 15/11/09 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 11

A good chapter. You have me wondering if there's more to Nikki's excursion than just to give them all some down time.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 15/11/09 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 10

Glad everything is working out for the Winchesters (for a change). I'm sure that won't last long.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 28/10/09 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 9

My favorite part of this chapter is all the times Dean says he's awake when you know darn well he was sleeping seconds before that. Typical stubborn man! But ya gotta love him for that---and for being by his sisters side throughout the entire hospital stay.

Author's Response: I'm so sorry I haven't replied earlier. Real life got in the way. :) So glad you like this story. Yes, Dean's "I'm awake" is something I do pretty regularly if someone's been talking to me and I'm way past exhausted. I think it's now just an automatic response. Thanks again.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/10/09 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 8

Whew! that was close!
Thanks for the information on Nikki and Sam's first hunt.
Sma and Stanford---this should be interesting since we know John doesn't take it well.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/10/09 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 7

Oh, how sad!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/10/09 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 6

I didn't think an angry Winchester backed down from anything. Fortunately, Mikki had her brothers there to make her see sense.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/10/09 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 5

Sudden action---yay! I like your short chapters. Sometimes I think I have ADD and by the time I finish a long chapter I've forgotten the beginning.

Reviewer: nightchills (Signed) · Date: 18/04/08 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 15

Nice referance to why Dean had mentioned that the last time they had been there, Bobby had threatened to shoot John with a shotgun (Altho I can't picture John getting violent and ugly like that). I eventually got used to Nikki and the twin thing and enjoyed your story. But, still love my boys on their own sans girls in the mix. Unless they're demons and thieves (Su3). Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: nightchills (Signed) · Date: 15/04/08 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 9

I liked the nice hospital family moment of closeness, makes John seem like the father he should have been with the boys on the show. I feel more welcoming towards Nikki during this chapter than I have so far - my Winchester world just doesn't have a place for a sister and she seems more like a girlfriend figure to Dean to me. Not your fault, I know...

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 31/10/07 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 15

This was an odd story. funky that you gave dean a twin. nikki is a cool chick though. i love that she stood up to john to protect her brother. and i love that you had bobby threaten him with the shotgun. loved the ending. i think you should do more with nikki. show what happened between her and dean after sam was at school. i wonder if they'd hunt together. this was a cool story and you should totally write a sequel.

Author's Response:
Thanks for the review... hadn't really thought abou ta sequel. Have a few Nikki ideas though. Glad yo like her.

Reviewer: buttercup (Signed) · Date: 28/10/07 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 4

Great start...can't wait to see where you take this, esp Adam's planned revenge.
I was just wondering how are Nikki and the boys related..are they blood related etc???
sophie

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm pretty sure that I covered the relation bit in the first 2 chapters, Nikki and Dean are twins.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 4

Good addition.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 3

Good story---I like the background.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 2

A nice fill in chapter. I like knowing what's happening, where everyone stands.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow! I normally don't read Au's, but I'm glad I gave this a shot! It's good!

Author's Response: Thanks, that means alot, hope you like the rest of the story too.

Author's Response: Thanks, that means alot, hope you like the rest of the story too.

Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 17/10/07 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 2

I usually do not like stories where they boys have a sibling.Other than each other But you did a really good job and it is going in to favorites. Looking forward to the updates.

Author's Response: wow thank, that means alot. i'l try to gret as manu updates up asap before uni exams take over

Reviewer: nicky199172 (Signed) · Date: 17/10/07 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 2

PLZ WRITE MORE LOL IT IS GONNA BE COOL
:)

Author's Response: more chapters on the way. glad you like it

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 16/10/07 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 1

A sister??? wow, this is kind of original - I like it. Wondering where you're going with this. Looking forward to finding out.

Author's Response: thanks for the review... next chapter should be up soon

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