Reviewer: buttercup (Signed)
27/10/07 10:15 AM · On:
I know I have already left you one review, and I don't know if you'll get this as I'm sure you're busy with other things, but I had to get this off my chest.
I know I said I lost my friend Amy...well actually we were practically sisters - joined at the hip since we were about five if you know what I mean!! - in the same way as Sam dies in this story. Well, reading this dredged a lot of painful memories, feelings, flashbacks and dreams. I don't want that to sound critical by the way!! But if it is possible your writing may be a little too good.
The point of this ramble is that, when you get back around to finishing this if you want any help writing about the emotions Dean is bound to be going through just let me know. I know Amy and I weren't blood sisters, but you never would've known! And well I can still rememer everything about what happened after the crash and how I felt - the guilt that if I was paying more attention to the road, if I hadn't sped up..then the anger at her for trying to find that water...and the devasting hole that is left in my heart to this day after loosing my true best friend.
If you need anything just let me know, it would be a pleasure to help out if you want.
Sorry for the essay!! Loving everything your writing at the moment - you really do have a gift :)
Author's Response: We'll be in touch. :*)
Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed)
17/10/07 07:10 AM · On:
This chapter was heartwrenching. The tone of the story was so happy at the beginning and then when the crash happened it changed to a sad tone. The description of Sam's injuries made me feel like I was there at the accident scene. I read this chapter despite the warning that this was a death fiction. This first chapter was brutal so I don't think that I can continue to read this story. I was almost in tears by the end of it
Oh, don't leave! I know this was a terrible way to begin, but that's realy the worst of it as far as gore and distrubingness goes. The rest is Dean coping, reacting, and dealing with the fact that he has to let Sam go in more than one way.
I hope you read the rest when I post it.
Reviewer: SUPERNATANGEL67 (Signed)
17/10/07 12:07 AM · On:
I'm not okay, but neither are you!!! Tooooo painful. However, will wait patiently for update.
Author's Response: I know, it was awful wasn't it? I must have some kind of sick mind...
Reviewer: Shade (Signed)
16/10/07 11:04 PM · On:
O.M.G. *bows down* You are awesome. Twisted, but awesome. I'm hooked. I am literally trembling from this newfound addiction, please, please, please, please, PLEASE hurry up and post the next chapter or I swear I am going to go into a withdrawal already. Wow. Wow. Wow. (You deserve more than three but I didn't want to take up the whole page) Oh by the way... *screams in misery for Sammy and Dean of course* Yes, it was quite painful. Geez you are fantastic.
P.S. Green eyes are incredibly exciting and attractive.
Author's Response: Alas! I won't be putting up ch2 for quite a long while, since i am currently hard at work on another story, but as soon as physically possible, I will update.
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed)
16/10/07 03:51 PM · On:
OMG I don't know why but I wasn't expecting Sam to die in your story. Maybe a serious hospital visit and a super angsty Dean. Instead a grieving, devastated Dean, which you wrote very well. Dean screaming with Sammy in his lap made me have goosebumps. Maybe another chapter where Dean finds some mojo hoodoo to reverse it so we can relax again...But if not, a great little stand alone fic.
Author's Response: This isn't a one-chappy thing, it'll be long and drawn out. I want to explore Dean's reactions and responses, what he does with the car, and what he does when he is forced to confront Sam's spirit (yes, Sam haunts the car's remains).
Reviewer: Little_angel_666 (Signed)
16/10/07 03:08 PM · On:
Man your brutal, you killed Sam straight away. I a kinda hoping that maybe it really is a dream coz if it aint its going to be short story?
But good job!!
Author's Response: NO! This won't be short, Dean's POV has a lot more to say.
Reviewer: soapsuds4 (Signed)
16/10/07 02:08 PM · On:
oh my god!!!
sam cant be dead!!!
is this gonna be a story or just a chapter???
Author's Response: It'll be a story, don't worry. There's alot to this one.
Reviewer: buttercup (Signed)
16/10/07 01:03 PM · On:
I loved this...it was really emotive!!
Although you must be psychic as that is exactly what happened to a friend and I whilst we were road tripping in Canada a few years back.
If i can stress anything in this review it is to please, please remember to wear your seatbelt.
Seeing your friend's brain splattered all over the road is not something you can ever forget...and it still haunts me today. I still wonder - was that drink of water really so necessary that she undid her seatbelt for it? I doubt it.
Thanks passerby for writing a story like this, and using our boys for such an important message.
PS. Amy I still miss you everyday, you're always in my thoughts.
Author's Response: *hugs you tightly* You have no idea how much it meanns to me as a writer and as a person that anything I've created could matter in this way to anyone. Thank you so much for sharing that with me, and I'm sorry that you had to experience that. I fully appreciate the amount of importance a seatbelt has, and I hope along with you that this story can convey that.
Reviewer: d6l2j7 (Signed)
16/10/07 12:37 PM · On:
PLEASE TELL ME THAT WAS A NIGHTMARE!!!!!! YOU CAN NOT KILL SAMMY!!!!!
Besides that little issue I loved the first chapter. :)
Author's Response: I'm liking all these reviews asking for it to have been a nightmare. It's a shame it wasn't. (I'm so evil.)
Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed)
16/10/07 12:11 PM · On:
i'm okay and yes that was painful! but really only so much the last paragraph when dean realized what happens. And even though i don't know why, I'll be waiting for the next update. But you need to finish your other stories first coz i'm still waitin on those.
Author's Response: Don't worry, DAMNATIONS comes first for now.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed)
16/10/07 09:06 AM · On:
Oh my stars! This is amaaazing!!! It's so horrible and sad, but great!
Author's Response: Haha, you said 'oh my stars.' Hah. I like you.
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed)
16/10/07 08:57 AM · On:
Great descriptions and a very powerful, emotional piece of writing.
I'm not a fan of deathfic per say but no-one could argue with your skill as a writer. Well done!!
Author's Response: I'm not big on deathfics either - in fact , I kinda hate them. But this one just wouldn't leave me alone, so I had to write it down.
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed)
16/10/07 08:47 AM · On:
yes, very painful for me too! Wow. You have me tearing up here! Nicely done!
YES! You have no idea how gratifying it is to know I could make you tear up - storytelling is my passion, and if I can make you react with that strong of an emotion, I have truly succeeded.
I think I'll go reward myself with a cookie.