Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 16/10/07 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 2
Okay not sure what's cooler the fact that Dean seems to be a firestarter or the fact that I just got to watch him reenact all of his (and my) firefighter fantasies.. Swell update and I look forward to more - k
Author's Response: Kwater, thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Yeah, Dean as a firefighter is just too yummy to even imagine. I'd wait inside a burning building if i knew he was the firefighter coming to rescue me. LOL! Glad you enjoyed the chapter. Kari
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 16/10/07 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 2
Ooohhh, very good. Loved the update. Boy, that medallion sure is cursed--Dean's suddenly a firestarter, and probably more. :-)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading, Vanessa. So thrilled that you liked the update. I just really liked the idea of Dean being a firestarter and hope others like it as well. Thanks so much for the review. Kari
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 15/10/07 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 1
CURSED??!!! naw...... Winchester luck says it will be nothing but bad luck on the way over the next few chapters..... Poor Dean!! Don't think all the optimism in the world will help him now!!
Author's Response: Oh, thanks so much for reviewing, Jude, it means so much to me. I don't think all the optimism in the world will help him either. Thanks so much for reading my first story, hopefully you will like what is to come. Kari
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 15/10/07 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 1
The attitude in this is priceless! Lovely, er rather, swell first fiction start.
Author's Response: So glad you liked the first chapter. I was really hoping I would get the attitude right. I just love Dean and wanted to do him justice. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Kari
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 15/10/07 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 1
Lmao...okay this was a snarkfest...nice work! really great handle on the boys and such an impressive first story! Many funny lines to choose from here so all I;m gonna say is that this was SWELL! and so were Sister Sally Sunshine and Smarty McSmartster were very swell lol!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading, Gengen. So glad you liked the snarkiness and thought it was funny. Hope you like the rest of the story. Thank you so much for reviewing, it really means a lot. Kari
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 15/10/07 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 1
lol, I forgot to mention the "swell" thing...hilarious...
Author's Response: LOL. Everyone seems to really like the "swell" thing. So glad I added it. Thanks again for reading. Kari
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 15/10/07 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oooooh!!!! That's very exciting! Nice job! First try at writing? Well, you're pretty freakin' awesome! Can't wait to find out what's goin' on in this story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading! So very nice of you to say that you thought I did a good job with it. I hope I don't disappoint you. Thanks for the review, it really means the world to me. Kari
Reviewer: heather03nmg (Signed) · Date: 15/10/07 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 1
That was an awesome first chapter and I can't believe this is your first fic. You've written both boys so true to character, brilliant snark and brotherly banter. Loved the bonus of hurt Dean!! You're swell, update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and thinking I did a good job on the first chapter of my story. It means so much to me that you think i have done a good job portraying the boys. Thank you for taking the time to read and review. Kari
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 15/10/07 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow--I really like this first chapter and can't wait to see what happens next. I'm a sucker for anything Hurt!Dean. Sammy's gonna have a fit when he sees those "splinters". You portray the boys very well and everything has a nice flow to it. Great job so far!
Author's Response: Thanks, Vanessa, so thrilled you read my first chapter. I think Sam will be very upset seeing the slpinters too. I'm so glad you think I portrayed the boys well, that means so much to me. Thanks so much for taking the time to read. Kari
Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 15/10/07 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 1
This is a good chapter! I love Dean saying "swell!!" Thanks
Author's Response: LOL. Apparently likes Dean saying swell. So thrilled to hear that. Thank you so much for reviewing my first Story, it means so much to me. Kari
Author's Response: Darn, that was supposed to say everyone likes Dean saying swell.
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 15/10/07 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 1
You must be writing something cause this sure doesn't seem like a first try!!! Great start to this story. You write Dean really welll, and I love the banter you've got going. Love Dean fixating on being optimistic and "swell". Love the "splinters".... Looking forward to your next chapter....
Author's Response: OMG! you gave me 5 stars, i could just about cry. Thank you so much for reading. You and the other reviewers have made my day. So glad you liked Dean optimistic outlook. hope the next chapter doesn't disappoint! Kari
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 15/10/07 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 1
I think this is really good for a first attempt sweet! An optimistic Dean is Definately funny. I really enjoyed this and I look forward to reading your next chapter:) Schelz
Author's Response: Oh, thanks so much! i am so glad you think it is a good first attempt, i was so afraid to even post it. Glad you like Dean's optimism, it was fun to write. thanks again for reading and reviewing, it means so darn much to me. Kari
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 15/10/07 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 1
LOL love the snark.
Sister Sally Sunshine??? LOL
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing my first story, it means the world to me. Glad you liked the snark. Hope you like the rest of the story. Kari
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 15/10/07 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 1
most people would have called them huge jagged hunks of wood, but Dean was feeling optimistic - Great line I think it’s such a lovely little piece of jewelry that I just can’t part with it and so I’m subconsciously willing it to stay where it is." Great start and I look forward to the rest - thanks for the read - K
Author's Response: I am so thrilled that you actually quoted a few lines of my story. It was so cool to see that. Hopefully you will like the rest of the story. Thanks for taking the time to read. Kari
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 15/10/07 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 1
Wow - This is a great start to your first ever story, i'm very impressed - keep it up! Look forward to reading more from you.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for being my first ever review. It means so much to me as I was terrified to actually post this story. You really made my day. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Kari
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