Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 4
Great stuff Kari, loving this plot. Well writen too! Would be a pretty awesome power if only he can control it! Update soon.
Author's Response: Thank so much, bulletbabe, so glad you like the story so far. thrilled you thought it was well written. it would be an awesome power if it could be controlled, but i don't tihnk it can be. thanks for reading, Kari
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 4
Scary ,this thing seems to feed on anger and turn it on anyone who angers or upsets Dean. Really good update. Lorraine
Author's Response: lekelly, thanks so much for reading! yeah, the curse chain is definitely feeding on Dean emotions and turning them on those who make him angry. So thrilled you enjoyed the chapter. kari
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 4
Oh my. Pooooooor Dean. This cursed chain thing is a real stinker. Hope they figure out how to fix it soon....great chapter, though. Your tone and voice are so well developed and it's really clear that you have the boys' emotions down beautifully. Wonderful job--can't wait for another update!
Author's Response: Yep, the chain is certainly bad news. So glad you think i have the boys emotions down! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. kari
Reviewer: Thru Terrys Eyes (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 4
I had read the first chapter of this and had lost it in the shuffle. This is a good story and an original story idea. Bravo for you!
Author's Response: Terry, thanks so much for reading and reviewing, it means the world to me. You have no idea how thrilled I was to see that you were my very first review for this chapter, it totally made my day! and to hear you say it is a good story and an original idea is pretty much the icing on the cake! thanks again. kari
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 3
If they survive they are in for one hell of an expensive shopping trip lol. Lorraine
Author's Response: Lol, yeah definitely true. Hopefully all their ake credit cards didn't burn up in the fire! thanks for reading and reviewing, lekelly. Kari
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 2
Firestarter Dean wow, action packed chapter very well written. Looking forward to next chapter Lorraine
Author's Response: yeah, thought it would be pretty cool to have Dean be a firestarter, glad you thought it was action packed! hope you enjoy what's to come. Thanks again.Kari
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 1
You write the boys very well , pulling those splinters out is not going to be fun.. Well don on to next ch Lorraine
Author's Response: Oh, i'm so thrilled you think i am doing a good job writing the boys. That really means a lot to me. Yeah, definitely not fun, splinters are a real bitch! Thanks again for reading. Kari
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 3
Nice work Kari, love the snarky sarcasm coming from Sam and all the women's names Dean remembers. And his pain at the loss of his fav. knife. Can't wait to see how you're gonna get them another laptop! Good work!!
Author's Response: Hey, bulletbabe, glad you loved the snark. I actually really like writing that part alot. Yeah, should be real intersting to see how they aquire all their new stuff. Thanks again for reading and reviewing. Kari
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 3
Kari- I love this! You've got the cliffie down pat - Dean's not gonna forgive himself even if Sam is fine. Eagerly awaiting more. -Angela
Author's Response: Oh, thank so much, Danrac, so thrilled you think i have the cliffie down, first time trying one. Hopefully the next chapters don't disappoint you. Thanks again for reading and reviewing. Kari
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 17/10/07 10:32 PM · On: Chapter 3
"But Dean was still feeling pretty damn optimistic thinking that there was a special little place in Hell for the dumb ass who designed hospital gowns." lol great line! LOL Dean always lovin him some girls! Poor guys is so easily distracted! Poor Sam hope he'll be all right cuz Dean's already lost his knife and his jacket and now his brother...definitely not good! Waiting to see where you go with this... Btw I know you're a Dean girl but be careful the Samgirls will kill you if you kill him!
Author's Response: lol, i love when people pull out little pieces of my story and quote them. Thanks for that, gengen. Thanks again for reading and reviewing. kari
Reviewer: devonshire (Signed) · Date: 17/10/07 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 3
oooo wow, great story, cant wait for more.
Author's Response: Hey, Devon, thanks for reading. so glad you like my story so far. Hopefully you will enjoy what's to come. Kari
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 17/10/07 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 3
Aww, poor Dean, beating up on himself all the time...lovely chapter once again! This is an excellent story so far!!! Can't wait for another update...!!!! Cooooookies to you!
Author's Response: Thanks again for reading, Shiny. So thrilled that you enjoyed the chapter. If you're handing out cookies, i like chocolate chip ones. Thanks again. Kari
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 17/10/07 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 3
Holy cow--didn't see that coming! Dang, poor Sammy.
Author's Response: lol, always good to hear that I somehow surprised you in the direction i decided to take the story. Thanks for reading, Vanessa. Kari
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 17/10/07 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 3
Chipper Charlie who lived in Beaver freakin’ Cleaver world - That sums up this entire chapter to me.. TOO FRIGGIN FUNNY..lol. I don't know what's worse the fact that I wanted to die laughing during Dean's whole Beaver Cleaver bit, or howl in sadness at the thought of Dean's leather coat burnt to a crisp or cry at Dean unintentionally causing Sammy's throat to close up.. You really ran the gambit on this one Kari and I'm loving it. - thanks for the read - K
Author's Response: Awww...thanks, Kwater, so glad you thought it was funny. Yeah, couldn't very well hae a fire and not have the boys lose pretty much everything. Thanks again for the awesome review. Kari
Reviewer: Dean494 (Signed) · Date: 16/10/07 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 2
Awsome, when he gets angry fire begins. Can't wait to see how Dean is going to be free of this. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading. Hopefully you will like where this story is going. Hopefully you will like the rest of the story. Kari
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 16/10/07 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 2
Very intriguing! Dean the fire-starter...can't wait to see where you go with this...very well written you're a natural at this!
Author's Response: Gengen, Thanks so much for reading my story so far. Yeah, Dean a firestarter, i ws hoping people would like this idea. Thanks so for the really nice review. Kari
Reviewer: supernaturalpass (Signed) · Date: 16/10/07 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 2
Aww no, poor Dean, the guilt is gonna eat at him like rat! You've got my interest that's for sure! I can't wait to see what happens next, update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading. So glad my story has got your interest! Thank you so much for the kind review. Kari
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 16/10/07 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 2
Okay, I'm just gonna go right out and say it: AMAZING!!!! Get the next chapter up quiiiiiick!
Author's Response: Shiny, thanks you so much for reading! So glad to hear you liked the story so far. Hopefully, i got the next chaper up quickly enough for you. thanks agan for the review. Kari
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 16/10/07 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 2
This chapter is great, Dean, a firestarter. I'm loving, what else will that chain have him do? Can't wait for the next chapter! Well done sweet:) I think it's hilarious dean using the word "Swell." keep it up. Fantasy.xxx
Author's Response: Hey, Fantasy, Thanks so much for reading. I love Dean as a firestarter, especially with his family history with his mom dying in a fire. Lol, so glad you like the "swell" thing. Hope you like what is to come in upcoming chapters. Kari
Reviewer: zerosbabe (Signed) · Date: 16/10/07 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 2
Great chapter i loved the action and poor Dean
Author's Response: Zerobabe, thank you so much for reviewing, it means the world to me. So thrilled you liked the action in the chapter. Hope you enjoy what's to come. Kari
Reviewer: zerosbabe (Signed) · Date: 16/10/07 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great start can't wait to see what comes next
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading, Zerobabe. So happy that you are enjoying my first story so far. Hope you like all that is to come in the future. Kari
Reviewer: heather03nmg (Signed) · Date: 16/10/07 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 2
Loved this chapter, great twist with that mysterious and creepy necklace. And Dean still all optimistic and using swell, that just makes me laugh!! Loved the angst and the hurt Dean, awesome job! Update soon!!
Author's Response: Heather, thanks so much for reading. So happy that you liked the twist with the necklace. LOL! It is so funny that everyone loves Dean saying "swell" I just love that. thanks again for reading. Kari
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 16/10/07 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 2
Can't wait to hear how Dean was at fault......
Author's Response: Jude, thanks so much for taking the time away from writing to read and review my story. It is so nice of you. Hopefully you'll enjoy the story. Thanks again. kari
Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 16/10/07 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 2
I didn't expect that!! Wow. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Mtee, I am so thrilled that you didn't expect that little twist. Hopefully, i'll be able to keep the twists nd turns coming. Thanks so much for sticking with my first story. Kari
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 16/10/07 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 2
WoW Darth this is great - you sure can write action! - Dean is such a hero isn't he? ( okay so I know he caused the fire technically but...) Great work!! keep going!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Bulletbabe. I am so happy that you liked the chapter. It really means a lot to hear that. Dean really is so awesome. I just love him. Thanks again for reading and reviewing. Kari
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