Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 22/10/07 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 5
WHAT??????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 21/10/07 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 5
OMG! what a wonderful chapter Dean is truly out of control. Next chapter please. Lorraine
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 21/10/07 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 5
Ah, Darth, nice, frickin' nice girl. LOVING Dean's loss of control, and Sam's determination to do the right thing. Great update, K
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 5
This just keeps getting better and better! I'm so glad I started reading it! Please post again soon!
Author's Response: Shannon, thanks so much for all the really awesome review, they mean a lot to me. Hope you enjoy what's to come, and hopefully I will be posting very soon. Thanks again for reading. Kari
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 4
This is great! Not that I like Dean and Sam suffering...well...I guess I do. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: So thrilled to hear that you think so, Shannon. Lol, I think everyone has a little desire to hurt the boys just a little. Thanks for reading. kari
Reviewer: darkangel (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 5
Omg hurry up with the next chappy,, an Evil dean i like it so hurry up:D
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading, Darkangel. So thrilled that you like an Evil Dean! It was really kind of fun to write him like this. Thanks for really nice review. Kari
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 3
I forgot about Dean's leather coat and Sam's laptop. *moan!* Those poor boys. On the other hand, if the entire motel had been consumed in flames and all their stuff was untouched that would have been wrong. Happy-go-freakin'-lucky attitude---brilliant! Love Dean's sarcastic optimism and his obsession with Leave It to Beaver. So funny! Not that the Winchesters normally have good luck, but that medallion gives bad luck a whole new meaning.
Author's Response: Hey, Shannon, thanks so much for reading so glad you liked Dean's sarcastic optimism and Leave it to beaver obsession. Hopefully you will like all that is to come in future chapters. Thanks again for all the really nice reviews. kari
Reviewer: zerosbabe (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 5
poor sam whats he going to do now and hope he can figure out that medallion soon to save dean
Author's Response: I know, I feel so bad for the boys, wonder if this is how everyone feels as they write them in these really bad situations. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, Zerobabe, it really means a lot to me. Kari
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 2
Wow! Dean's a human torch! Oh no---everything in their room is destroyed. Most of their lovely weapons (Dean's favorite knife), and clothing. Oh well, I'm sure you have a plan for this. I guess that's what fake credit cards are for.
Author's Response: Lol, yep, Dean's a firestarter. Hated to destroy all their stuff, especially the kinfe and Dean's leather jacket, but really kind of had to. fake credit cards are great aren't they. thanks for taking the time to read and review. Kari
Reviewer: zerosbabe (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 4
great action and poor dean hes going to turn evil if he keeps it up
Author's Response: Thanks, Zerobabe, so thrilled to hear you liked the action as it was very hard to write. Yeah, things don't look to good for Dean at the moment, do they? thanks for the review, it was very kind of you to write one. Kari
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 5
Whoa!!!!! Oh goodness...Dean...leaving Sammy...pooor poor poooooooor brotheres...you must...write...more...soon...cookies?
Author's Response: lol, Your reviews always make me smile, Shiny. Thanks so much for reading. Hope you enjoy what's to come. Kari
Reviewer: zerosbabe (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 3
awww poor sam and i didnt see that one coming..hope dean can get that medallion off or at least control his power
Author's Response: Yeah, I was hoping I could throw people off a little, don't want the story to be too predictable. Hopefully Dean can get the medallion off before he actually kills someone. Thanks so much for reading. Kari
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 1
OMG! This is great! I love the smart banter between the brothers and Dean's new attitude. It's all just swell!
Author's Response: Shannon, thanks so much for taking the time to read my story, I was so thrill to read that you liked it so far. Glad you liked Dean's new attitude. Thanks so much for the kind review. Kari
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 5
okay...this sounds more like possession than a cursed object...........
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading, Jude. Hopefully you will like the future chapters of my story. Thanks so much for taking the time to review. Kari
Reviewer: Silvertayl (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 5
This is terrific, it has a bit of everything, hurt, angst, comfort, humour, (southern exposure, very funny) love it, more please !!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading, Silvertayl. So thrilled you think my story has a little bit of everything included in it. Hope you like the upcoming chapters. Kari
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 5
Ouch Dean! Assuming Sammy doesn't really get to play torch here. I like this story a lot, the banter's perfect. Looking forward to more
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading, Danrac, so thrilled to hear you like the story so far, and think the banter is good! I hope you enjoy what's to come in future chapters. Thanks for the review it was very nice of you. Kari
Reviewer: StrigoiVii (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 2
keeps getting better. gotta wait til tomorrow for the rest, sorry to say.
Author's Response: Hey, thanks so much for reading. I am so glad you are enjoying the story so far, and hope you like what is to come in future chappies. kari
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 5
Okay yet again you had me cracking up with the first paragraph...it really could almost be narrated by Dean or Sam... "Dude, where’s my car?" LMAO I nearly spit out a jelly belly when I read that... "There’s nothing wrong with my butt, Dean," he returned his attention to Dean, "Women love my butt." LOL yes we do Sammy, yes we do! Okay, now that twist at the end with Dean just leaving Sam there...OMG this is NOT good! Dean's being corrupted...not good! lol good tension build can't wait to see what comes next!
Author's Response: Lol, gengen, so glad you liked those lines. Glad the end surprised you. thanks so much for reading and reviewing. kari
Reviewer: StrigoiVii (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 1
Pretty good for a first attempt so far. Moving on to chap 2
Author's Response: Oh, thanks so much for saying so. i was s nervous posting my first story, and am thrilled to hear that i did okay with it. Kari
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 4
Okay great chapter Darth very impressive. Like the opening line about the gawking people and the hospital gown...Gotta say I wouldn't mind me some back side viewing of Dean in a hospital gown...or Sam's back side for that matter...I'm easy that way lol Also loved the clever reference you made to Metallica...Dean Hetfield lol awesome he SO would use an alias like that lol. Great job all in all a couple of typos but hey who doesn't make those! Very nice handle on the brother dynamic as well. Nice job! can't wait to see how you get the boys out of this!
Author's Response: Lol, gengen, I am right there with you, and all the other Deangirls. So glad you picked up on the Metallica reference. thanks for pointing out the typos, i corrected them. Thanks for reading. kari
Reviewer: betty1069 (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 4
great story!! Can't wait for an update!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading. So glad to hear you are enoying the story so far. Hope you like what's to come. Kari
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 4
verbal pukage of the soul Bet Wally freakin’ Cleaver never had police officers show up at the hospital to question him about a suspicious fire right after he almost damn near killed the Beaver. If Wally had then Dean wanted that episode on freakin’ tape. Two of my fav quotes...too fricking funny. Dean's gonna wallow in some serious guilt over causing that heartattack. Can't wait to read more, and I have to say I'm loving the quick updates.... thanks for the read - K
Author's Response: Hey, Kwater, thanks for reading. lol, i just love when people quote things I have written, don't think there is another feeling like it. So glad you thought it was funny. thanks so much for reviewing, it means the world to me. Kari
Reviewer: devonshire (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 11:11 PM · On: Chapter 4
great update, i love how realistic it is that the boys would lose everything in the fire, and that the cops would come looking when they did an investigation. that is so right on the money and it's fantastic, i love it. I love that sam doesnt blame dean either, even while he;s lying in the hospital bed. and dean's anger, that's something to see. i love dangerous Dean.
Author's Response: Devon, thanks so much for the very kind review. So glad you think it is realistic that they would have lost everything in the fire. It really means a lot to here you say that. Thanks for reading and reviewing, hope you enjoy the rest of the story. Kari
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 4
This is a great update. Poor Dean. It's gonna be near impossible for him to control any angry feelings. And, boy, you can feel the guilt and angst rolling off him in waves. Love this story.
Author's Response: Hey, Vanessa, thanks for reading. I know, Dean isn't that great at controling his anger, and it's gonna get him a lot of trouble. Thanks so much for the review, it means a lot to me. Kari
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 4
I think a better thing to do would be to grab Sam and abscond....so, you've destroyed Dean's Jacket, his Bowie knife, Sam's laptop and all of the weapons in the weapons bag and their clothes.... What will they lose next ...their freedom since they've attracted the cops or the Impala???
Author's Response: Hey, Jude, thanks for reading my story. Couldn't really save all those things in the fire, could I? Really wished I could've saved Dean's jacket though cause I loved his jacket. Thank you so much for taking the time to review, your opinion really matters to me as I think you are an awesome writer. Kari
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