Supernaturalville
Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 19/01/09 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 6

Oh jeez....now I'm freakin hyperventilating waiting for the next chapter..What have you done to me?! :P

Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 19/01/09 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 5

OH MY!!!!!! O.O

Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 19/01/09 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 3

Oooooooh..I'm liking the sound of this..:D

Reviewer: Themis (Signed) · Date: 27/10/08 06:56 AM · On: Chapter 6

Please, don't forgot this story !!!Thanx :-)

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 31/03/08 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 6

I really liked this chapter too, but now I'm sorta wondering how they were gonna save Dean, Do you think that you might finish this fantastic tale? Please!!!!

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 31/03/08 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 5

That was so not Dean but it was a great read. so sorry to see that there is only one chapter left.

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 31/03/08 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 4

Brilliant, why did it have to be Dean, who had the pendant, he's so easy to anger. Keep them coming

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 31/03/08 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 3

Enjoying this story more and more. A really great chapter.10/10

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 31/03/08 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 2

Another great chapter, thanks

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 31/03/08 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 1

have just found this story and thought it was a great start, but i noticed that your last posting was 10/07 have you given up on it. Will read the rest of the chapters anyway.

Reviewer: Silvertayl (Signed) · Date: 16/01/08 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 6

Hi

I't's been 3 months since you updated this wonderful story, please don't keep us waiting too much longer for an update.

Silvertayl

Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 21/11/07 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 2

You really know how to get right down to the action! Good description of the fire and its effects. This is the third time Dean has pulled Sam from a fire - he really is an awesome big brother!! Under "normal" Winchester circumstances, the boys risk their life on a regular basis for strangers, the fact that Dean blames himself for the fire totally justifies his re-entry into a burning building. Good chapter.

Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 21/11/07 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 1

That was just...swell!!!!! Loved snarky Dean trying his hand at optimism and coming off as even MORE sarcastic than normal. You manage to combine humor and action so well - amazed that this is your first story. So many really good Deanisms, but especially;

"I think it’s such a lovely little piece of jewelry that I just can’t part with it and so I’m subconsciously willing it to stay where it is."

Great job, thanks for the laughs.

Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 27/10/07 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 6

Yes! Dean came back, I knew he would. S

am's so brave, willing to die to help everyone else.

Sam without Dean and Dean without Sam just wouldn't work...they need each other to work miracles.

Looking 4ward to the next chapter

Love Fantasy

Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 27/10/07 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 5

OMG, Darth this is genius stuff.

You're story is really blowing up, congrats on the blue thing (badge)by the way. Lol

Dean getting out of control...this is getting more exciting.

Love Fantasy

 

 

Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 27/10/07 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 4

Oh my! I know the cop don't deserve to die, but he was winding Dean up. Leave Sam alone? That's a no-no.

Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 27/10/07 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 3

Loving it Darth, absolutely loving it, well done girl!

Love Fantasy

Reviewer: Rae666 (Signed) · Date: 23/10/07 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 1

What a cynical opening chapter... I love it! I'm a very cynical person... lol. Anyway - great work! You've pulled me in and I'm moving onto the next chapter...

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 22/10/07 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 6

Very action packed chapter!  Well written...and intense...I liked that you had Dean turn around and go back for Sam...

Okay, and so totally off the point, but if Dean was freakin’ Batman and he was Wolverine, would that make Bobby, Professor Xavier? That line had me cracking up!  I LOVE Wolverine!  He is awesome!

Keep up the good work Darth...can't wait to see how you get the boys out of this

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 22/10/07 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 6

First off Congrats on the Featured, it's well deserved.  Secondly GREAT update, love seeing Sam in charge even at the expense of a Dean in torment, love that when Dean does get his crap together he sees that Sam is more than capable, and props for the whole Wolverine bit.  I have to admit, YUM, he is a favorite of mine - Thanks for the read - K

Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 22/10/07 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 6

Knew Dean had to head back in there - nice that it wasn't just to haul out a helpless Sam - definitely all grown up.  Nice work

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 22/10/07 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 6

Great chapter!  Love Sam saving all those people and Dean coming back for Sam.  So cool that Dean realizes Sam is a man who needs to make his way in the world.

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 22/10/07 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 6

Congrats! You made the featured stories list!! Amazing accomplishment!!! Shiny ribbon, cookies, awesome story for everyone to enjoy...got it made, Kari!!!!! Lovin' it!!!! And I'm sooo not talking about McDonald's happy meals...

Reviewer: jensenluva28 (Signed) · Date: 22/10/07 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 6

very good. i like that whole Batman part. you get it from recent episodes i wonder.....lol. great job! can't wait for the next chapter! :)

 

Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 22/10/07 03:33 PM · On: Chapter 6

really goor update darth looking forward to the next one Lorraine

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