holy cow!!!!!! nice bunch of people....really worried about our hero at this point.......first you take away Sam...then the Impala....and now Dean looks like he might be separated from himself.....So NOT good!!!

Author's Response: Never fear Jude - I never write death fic's so rest assured he'll come out of this in one piece (well mostly) Thanks for the review.

You said angst and whump!! OMG, triple dose!! Gustov's torment of Dean was just downright cruel. My heart is in a million bits. He actually wore him down despite Dean's mammoth effort to fight him off. *sob* Your description was dramatic and detailed, no wonder I am sitting here in shock!! I don't know which scene was more shocking: the one where Dean "faced his truest and more terrifying fear. His brother needs him - and he's powerless to help...And in that moment, his world slowly unravels" or your ending with Dean on the floor with that sicko "looking into the blank staring face...reaching out a finger to wipe the steady stream of tears tracking their way down his face". so well written to make us feel so sad and outraged.

Big Bad Sam locked, loaded and lethal - what''s not to love!!! He is a Winchester and you wrote him with precision. The contrast in this chapter between the Sam in Dean's nightmare and the Sam plotting a hunt and a rescue is striking.

I am so into this story of yours, even if the excitement is killing me slowly!!

Author's Response:

Please forgive me for answering once to all these reviews, but you've rendered me speechlless, which is quite something for me, I can tell you!!!

I always love to log in and find one review from anyone - but have a special thrill if it's from you, as you have always been perceptive, thoughtful and descriptive. To find all these, was like christmas come early, so thankyou so much.

I'm overjoyed that you're liking this story, and that you've taken the time to write about it. Reading reviews like this are such an inspiration to be creative. They're what keep up all up at night scribbling ideas down in notebooks in the dark! lol and I'm very grateful for the encouragement!

And I'm also very glad to hear you're writing! I can't wait to read what you come up with.You are known on the site for being a great reviewer and I'm sure that reputation will continue with your stories!

Thanks again Petra - you've made my day! :) Louy

Holy Sh1t, did you ramp it up! The intensity and tension just hit ten on the Richter Scale and my heart is thumping. The way that bad guy summarised Dean's life, that vile talk of his mother, came straight through the nasty filtre. I absolutely LOVED how you had Dean react, your creativity shone - "Slowly but surely, he worked to extinguishing the boiling rage he felt at the caustic insults thrown at his mother, replacing those internal barriers, brick by brick, stone by stone, burying the emotions he could feel bubbling up to the surface along with his anger and frustration. This freak had been in his head once and he’d be damned if he was ever gonna give him a second chance." *standing ovation" That  description is right up there with the best fanfic has on show, and is so true to Dean that I wanted to cry.

And there's a twist: the professor was attempting to save Sam. No wonder Sam was one-tracked about booking it outta there. Always love Sam busting out of his usual reserved self to full blown hunter and you wrote it perfectly. All his skills, training and intellegence in one angry brother. Sam's intensity was perfect in this intense chapter.

 And your WOW factor continues: "He'd almost been able to smell the outrage bleeding off him at the treatment of the girl, and when he's looked into him, well now - those sort of emotions would be a positive feast" - these words of yours are positively sinister and I am on the edge of my seat with anticipation (worry!) with what he has in store for Dean. Outstanding writing! *bravo*

A.W.E.S.O.M.E!! You have me in the palm of your hand.

How dare they?! We all share Dean's rage that a non-Winchester has touched his car, let alone driving her!! How wonderful is your description that his baby was "no skinny assed chick" not to mention a whole freakin weapons cache. Again a fantastic 'Dean title'. Loving ya work!

Again your amazing description puts us in the midst of your story. I was in that hall with Dean, I could see it all. Loved Dean's smirk at the 'amateurs' and "Wow. You fell out the fuggy tree and hit every branch on the way down, didn't you, dude?" - we REALLY get how ugly he is Lou, no punches pulled here. *kudos* 

By far my fav scene because it stole my heart - “…he hated the look of vulnerability written all over Sam’s face, and was silently planning a number of ways to kill whoever had put it there.” – spectacular, so love protective!dean.  “He had no idea what was going on, but he didn’t like the fact that, clearly, someone had messed with his brother. And no one messed with Sammy, unless they wanted to dance - with Dean” Yep, someone is in a world of trouble. You write of Dean’s need to watch out for Sam with the passion we know Dean feels, so this just leapt out the page. Beautifully written.

So now Dean is kidnapped and Sam, who is not himself, is missing. It's turned out to be a big night out! 

Great work. The last nightmare so vivid, poor Dean, he really belives that they have Sam. I guess how are you going to save Dean and the girl if they are so broken to help. Keep working. I enjoy a lot this chapter. What exactly is Gustav ?

Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying the story, It's always great to hear from readers who are caught up in the action, horror or suspense. Always a thrill!

Thanks for the review and the rating Dean494 and I hope you continue to enjoy.

Hoo-wee!, sweet, twisted   and delicious torture, Gussy is indeed 'as mad as a bucket full of crazy -love him!

Loved the sentence 'you fell out the fuggly tree and hit every branch on the way down'  laughed til my brains turned to snot and escaped down my nose!   Hear me talk! 

Please please hurt Dean some more for me you wicked, talented, good looking girl you!

Birdie x

Author's Response:

WOW - the most animated review I've ever had!

Brains turned to snot, huh? Thats a powerful visual image you're giving me there birdie! lol

Thanks so much for the review, next chap of angsty n' hurt won't be too long.

 

Loved it Lou! Another great chapter and I just can't wait for more.

I like how firm and focused Sam is to get Dean back, returning the dedication Dean always gives.

I am not liking gustav at all, but love the visuals, your writing is so clear to me, I could see images rather than words.

Loving it:) You're great.

Author's Response:

Ah Schelz, that's such a lovely thing to say - thank you! Getting the reader to see it, is what it's all about for me.

Thank you so much for the review and the rating, they're what keep me going!

 Hiya Louy:)

Evil Gustav is going to pay for all those insults, especially for the Mary ones. Poor Dean, Hope Sam gets to him soon.

No more crawlies...I hope, Lol.

Oh by the way, Sam holding a coke can to Mac's neck was funny!

Schelz

Author's Response: Ah - the humble coke can be used for sooo much! Thanks for the review Schelz!

I can't believe I didn't know about this chapter!

Woah completely amazing, although your chapters always are. Poor Dean no matter what that man does, he just cannot catch a break lol :)

Five stars from me, they're totally deserved!

-Bex

Author's Response:

Thanks Bex - you always know the right thing to say, I'm happy!!!

Thanks for the stars they're lovely.

Brilliant update Louy, can`t wait to read what horors you are going to inflict on Dean

Lorraine

Author's Response: Trust me when I say - there will be lots of them Lorraine! Thanks for the review and the rating! That's very kind.

love it....keep on going

Author's Response: Next chapter will be ready in next couple of days - glad you're enjoying it bernie. Thanks for reviewing!

Wonderful chapter!  The power of the baddies is pretty amazing!  I'm eager for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks Shannon - But you just know he's only gonna get worse, don't you? :)

Nice job, Lou. I'm really likin' this. Keep it up! Just what I needed after this week!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review Shiny - hope your week gets better mate! More to follow soon.