Reviewer: Little_angel_666 (Signed)
16/01/08 05:44 AM · On:
Wow i loved this chapter. But you'e left it open for a sequel yippeee, please tell me your gonna do one???
Well i loved this fic from start to finish and i can't wait for your next one!!
It's been Awesome.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and for reviewing, nothing makes us happier then seeing that e-mail in our inbox that says there's a review! It's what we live for. I am thrilled that you loved the story! Still trying to decide on a sequel, not really sure it could be better then the original. (dont want to throw out a piece of garbage after all, right?)
Reviewer: Rosilee (Signed)
16/01/08 05:36 AM · On:
ohh!! paving way for a sequel are we??? ;p!
Still mulling that over. Maybe, eventually, we'll see.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, it means a lot to me!
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed)
16/01/08 04:26 AM · On:
You mean the shapeshifter is alive??? Damn......no no no.....she can't have Dean!!!! She can't have either one of them.........This is one of the best stories i've read...one of the most addictive ones too.....the way you phrased the last part makes me think that there's a sequel in the works???.......Please do..... :)
Taking a little break, then maybe a sequel, we'll see. I am really glad you liked it. If there is a sequel, I think it'll explain why she isn't dead yet. Maybe, we'll see.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed)
16/01/08 04:16 AM · On:
What an excellent end to a fantastic story...and this chapter has sequel written ALL OVER IT... I had a great time following this original and very well written story.
Thanks for the read Helen, absolutely awesome!
Author's Response: Thank you one million and one, and the banner, can I just say again how awesome it is!! You made the story even better with it's addition, and I thank you again. (I really am a broken record, aren't I?)
Reviewer: red11 (Signed)
16/01/08 02:04 AM · On:
Wow. Great Story! Nice ending. Thank you for filling my need for some entertaining reading
Author's Response: You are very welcome, and thank you for reading and helping feed my habit. I couldn't have done it without everyone that read and reviewed!
Reviewer: CherryTootsiePop (Signed)
16/01/08 12:57 AM · On:
so does this mean there's a sequel coming? there should be *nods* i think everyone agree with me on this one... awesome job!
Author's Response: Maybe, who knows. I left the door open, just not sure if I want to step through it yet. Thanks for reading it and I'm am really glad you liked it.
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed)
16/01/08 12:34 AM · On:
Wow, just WOW!!! I loved the epilogue as much as I loved the whole story! So Sam's idea with the silver based medicine saved Dean's life and their confessions healed their hearts. But you had to leave us with a cliffie again, he he.... This calls for a sequel sooner then later! This was a fantastic read all along, very well written, catching, intense, thrilling, at times scary, touching and hertwrenching. You did such a great job! This story is one of my favorites and I will definitely read it again. I am sad to see it end - but I am hopeful for a sequel and I look forward to reading more of your work. Thank you for sharing this with us!!!
Author's Response: Thank you for not only reading it but loving it too. It was a bit of a strange rollercoaster ride and I'm really glad it didn't disappoint. I'm toying with the sequel idea, just not sure yet. I mean, what else could i possibly put them through that I haven't already thrown at them. Oh well, maybe given enough time I can figure it out. Thanks again for reading!!
Reviewer: tvbatina (Signed)
16/01/08 12:05 AM · On:
Loved the ending. Loved the story. So much HurtDean - it was awesome. And now the girl's after Dean. Smart woman. LOL
Anyway, once again, you rocked it with this story. I loved every bit of it.
Author's Response: I can't thank you enough, I am really glad you liked it. It makes all the hours of lost sleep worth it!
Reviewer: Stock1210 (Signed)
15/01/08 10:57 PM · On:
Wow....that's the creepiest thing ever...Wonderful story.
Author's Response: Thanks, I am really glad you liked it. Thank you for reading too!!
Reviewer: lilballerette10 (Signed)
15/01/08 10:32 PM · On:
O.M.G............WTF.........SO NOW THE THING IS DR. MATTHEWS...O.M.G I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT TO SAY....SHOCKING SHOCKING ENDING...LIKE SERIOUSLY I DID NOT EXPECT THAT AT ALLL (AS U CAN TELL BY THE CAPS LOL) but k as for this story, i can't believe it's over, it's been awesome reading it and iwas so excited to see this updated. Loved Sam's confessions...considering it was all his fault...butt we'll forgive him cuz he's Sam and we love him and he loves Dean so so much...AND O I TOTALLY FOUND THE PART IN THE STORY WHERE SAM FINDS OUT IT'S HER I READ ALL THE WAY FROM CHPT 24 AGAIN, AND EVERYTHING MADE SO MUCH MORE SENSE...i don't know how i missed it the first time..anywho seriously amazing story and OMG THE END...YES BACK TO THAT...I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO SAY...SERIOUSLY I HATE THIS SHAPESHIFTER SO BLOODY MUCH...GAWDDD!!!! O MANN IS POOR SAMMY NEXT:( AHHHH...CAN'T WAIT FOR THAT STORY...THIS IS GOING TO BE CONTINUED RIGHT...RIGHT...!! LOLL AMAZING STORY LOVED EVERY MINUTE OF IT!!!!
Can I just say how excited I am to get not only an OMG but a WTF in the same sentence! And all that screaming, I love it!! Thanks for reading and reviewing, I really gotta consider the whole sequel thing. Who knows, maybe someday.
Reviewer: Vallana (Signed)
15/01/08 10:23 PM · On:
Really really enjoyed this story to bits! Loved all the twists in turns, you kept me guessing. Hrmm sounds like some one has a new stalker and love how you ended it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I am really glad the story was well liked. We all know who the better brother is anyway, don't we?
Reviewer: brookiwinchester (Signed)
15/01/08 10:04 PM · On:
i luv the ending. i hope u do a sequel
Author's Response: I'm glad you loved it. I really gotta think the whole sequel over, although I left the door open, I think I like where it ended up. Thanks again!
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed)
09/01/08 08:44 PM · On:
Jay finally got what she deserved, way to go Sam. What a cliffhanger, we still don't know Dean's fate, can't wait for the epilogue. Outstanding work Strigo.
Thanks, as always! One more cliffie for old times sake, then it's a ride off into the sunset. Thanks for reading, reviewing, and enjoying!
Reviewer: greensheep8 (Signed)
09/01/08 10:54 AM · On:
Okay, so i have been reading this from the start and have to say it is incredible. When the doctor was telling Sam about Dean i was thinking could it get much worse for him; but it sure did :) my favorite parts of the story was when they said about the virus and it was like shapeshifter (before i was going hmmm) and when Sam called jay. I just went NO and gasped-thinking he didnt know, but when he killed her it was beautifully writted and i could see itplay in my head.
Now im thinking that the reason Sam fainted (apart from being VERY tired) was that John was there by Deans bed-though i do hope Dean doesnt die!!
Cant wait for the epilogue-i love your writting style!
Great chapter-best one out of the whole story!
Thanks so much! I had to save the best for last, right? I really am glad you liked it, and I'm thrilled that it entertained.
I'll give a little hint-sorry, it's not John.
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed)
08/01/08 08:48 PM · On:
No need to be nervous about this chapter - it's a great read! Down to the epilogue, hmm... Gives me a guess on what sight dropped Sam, but guess I'll have to be patient to see if I'm right! (Not one of my better skills, actually - lol)
Yeah, down to the epi. I'll miss it. Hopefully it will be a surprise as to what dropped Sam, because I'd hate to think I've become predictable.
Thank you so much for reading too!
Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed)
08/01/08 08:12 PM · On:
This chapter was excellent. It had me on the edge of my seat. I liked the confrontation between Sam and Jay. This was a very emotional chapter. I can't wait to see how you tie this story up in the epilogue. You have no reason to be nervous about this chapter. It turned out fantastic.
Thanks! I'm always nervous when I post a chapter, but this one made me the most nervous. Wasn't quite sure I made Sam badass enough, but in a caring sort of way.(If that's possible) Thanks you for letting me know it worked well!
Reviewer: Eternity12 (Signed)
08/01/08 05:57 PM · On:
YES! JAY IS DEAD
WOOHOO! that was awesome! aw man I hope Dean is ok, I am pumped for the ending. Thanks, its been a great ride!
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope the ending won't be a let down. It's got just one more little twist in it that hopefully everyone will like.
Reviewer: Janger (Signed)
08/01/08 05:56 PM · On:
Yeah!! Sam did it!! At long last that evil bitch has bitten the dust....lol. Seldom have I felt such contentment and joy at the demise of a baddie but OMG, I am so happy to see Jay treated to an unhealthy dose of Winchester style justice.
This chapter was right up there with all the others, outstanding, so why am I surprised that you managed to fit in one final and very wicked cliffie......lol. Dean's list of ailments was scary, and his poor chewed fingers, maybe that shapeshifter blood can do a bit of repairing to him.
I really don't want this to end, so it's great that there's an epilogue. It's been a great ride. Thanks. Jane
Thanks a million Jane! I don't really want it to end either, but eventually is has to, because those poor people in Burkitsville need saving from an evil scarecrow. (Yeah, I sometimes forget that this story only spans like four days, I think. Eventually they need to get out of Rockford and move on.)
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed)
08/01/08 05:51 PM · On:
about time....knew somewhere deep in there your upstairs brain was still viable.........
Hoping that when a shapeshifter dies their bodily fluids expire and decompose with them no matter where they are...*** fingers crossed ****
Yep, Sam's head finally came out of his butt.
As for the bodily fluids dying with them, I wouldn't count on it.
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed)
08/01/08 05:48 PM · On:
The Heimlich would probably not be in Dean’s ribs best interests at the moment, but if he had to, he would resort to it because death wasn‘t in Dean‘s best interests either.
What a great line.....funny but so serious and to the point.........and true
Author's Response: Thanks again! Hm, I must be softening up a little. I could have had fun with the Heimlich. Oh well. too late now.
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed)
08/01/08 05:43 PM · On:
“DAMN IT DEAN, OPEN YOUR EYES!” Sam screamed as he laid a gentle tap against his cheek, knowing he had to keep him conscious, at least for himself. If he was awake, he was alive, and when they got to the hospital he knew he wouldn’t see him for hours, because that’s the way it always went, and he wondered if he’d even see him alive again at all. So, for now, one way or another, Dean was staying conscious, because Sam said so.
Ohmigosh, Strigoi how perfectly Winchester....in thought, word and deed............
Author's Response: Thanks!! That Sam, always the spoiled one...(Just kidding)
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed)
08/01/08 01:05 PM · On:
Ding dong the witch is dead! Yippeee!!!! Awesome job on that one - although I could have done without the evil cliffie- but I'll forgive you that simply because that bitch Jay bt the dust!
*sends virtual high-five*
Come on, had to toss one more cliffie in there, right?
Oh, and by the way, you may want to hold that high five until you read the epi. I got a feeling it may come through as a fist instead *evil laugh and grin*
Reviewer: Nilah (Signed)
08/01/08 12:02 PM · On:
NO NEED TO BE NERVOUS. THIS STORY HAS REALLY BEEN WILD. I ENJOYED IT IMMENSELY, AND TO THINK I HAD BYPASSED IT. IT DIDN'T SOUND VERY EXCITING, AND I'M A DEAN GIRL MYSELF, AND WASN'T UP TO A SAMCENTRIC STORY. (Sorry for the caps) Boy was I wrong! The title fooled me. As a Dean hurt / angst / comfort fanatic, I can truly say that your story had it all. Definitely NOT a letdown. Can't wait for your next story!
Thanks you so much, I am glad you didn't bypass it either. I'm not very good at those story summaries so that's partially my fault. I am obviously a Dean anything girl, just love the guy (You'd never know it by the way I treat him though)
I am really glad you liked the story, and just to let you know, Dean is always hurt or sick in just about everything I write.
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed)
08/01/08 09:00 AM · On:
WOW!!!!!!!! This has been some ride.
Jay finally got what was coming to her. Loved it. Dean still trying to protect Sammy- true Winchester attitude.
Sam tricking Jay- finally he gets it- she's not Jess- he lived up to the Winchester name with his deception-AWESOME piece of writing!!!!!!!!!
So, a cliffe?????? omg what now?????
Can't wait for the last piece.
EXCELLENT.... EXCELLENT story!!
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you. Just had to throw in one more cliffy for the road! Really glad you've enjoyed it!
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed)
08/01/08 08:28 AM · On:
I knew that ambulance ride was gonna be a shocker! Not just vomiting more blood but choking on it first! In front of a terrified Sam! Jeez, you’re killing us slowly with poor Dean!! I so get Sam reacting and yelling at the ambos (Aussie slang for ambulance men) in his panic, poor baby… It’s a wonder Sam’s not dead on his feet with exhaustion and stress, no wonder he was zoning out with yet another shock to witness.
Then to top off my emotional roller coaster ride, you write “…his hand reaching for Sam’s and Sam taking it as he wiped the blood from his lower lip with his sleeve, intent on not letting his brother’s hand go” *sobbing* Beautiful imagery of that precious bond we recognise and love. Awesome, awesome stuff!
When Never-say-die-Dean wants to give up, we know he’s had enough. Dean trying hard to elicit another promise, you showed us Never-say-die-Sam, despite his distress – “No way was he going to admit to himself that his brother was going to die, and making that promise to him was an admission of defeat in his eyes” You wrote of Sam’s classic inner strength smoothly and naturally. I loved this to bits!
And hasn’t your Dr Matthews got steel in her spine. Girl Power!
Your description of the ER was action packed. But it was also sad and poignant and touching. This image, a beautiful example of that mix of intensity and sadness – “Dean had finally broken his gaze with Sam and now just laid there glassy-eyed, staring at the ceiling. His face no longer held any emotion as he stared, almost as if he’d fallen asleep with his eyes wide open, an occasional blink the only thing indicating the he was still alive’’ Sh!t, was Dean serious about giving up?!?! I sure thought so here *hitching breath* Incredible writing, this image stole the show for me.
And amongst all that poking, prodding, injecting, and swallowing (a charcoal drink for God’s sake!!!) this wonderful classic Dean snark - “Tastes like shit” and in this angsty chappie I crack a smile!!
And dang, if Dean wasn’t still in hunter mode despite his physical and mental state. “Dean instantly froze…and Sam instantly knew something was wrong” Both boys alert to the hunt and alert to each other – you add more mystery for us…I’m so intrigued!! What’s in her pocket and what is she saying to Sam that's so terrible?? Wow, that was one hell of a chapter! *wink*
Author's Response: Have I told you how much I love your reviews? I could read them all day and never get bored. Now that the story is almost complete, I am looking forward to reading the one I saw posted there thay you wrote. I love a good John story, but am too chicken to try and write one. And if your writing is as awesome as your reviews are, it will be a doozy! And congrats on it being featured too!