Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 16/02/09 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 2 Deceitful Old Bag!
Aw, that was awesome! And a little heartbreaking! You know, although this was a wonderful story, I kinda wish someone would make a long one with this same idea..the boys being 2 inches tall, cuz this is just..WICKED! I applaud you for coming up with that, so far I haven't seen another one like it. ;)
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 02/12/07 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 2 Deceitful Old Bag!
Lorraine. hahahahaha! I laughed so hard that I puked! That is just weirdly funny from the trying to take Sam's pants off, to the ring off fire. Hahahah Oh and can I go in next time and remove any jelly babies personally from any part of Dean that they have stuck to? hey, maybe with my teeth? Growl!!! Hysterical! Bird x
Author's Response: so sorry bev did not check my reviews as i had not written anything in ages. So pleased you liked it and took the tine to review many thanks Lorraine
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 12/11/07 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 2 Deceitful Old Bag!
Great job, Lekelly. what an intersting turn of events. very glad you didn't kill off Sam!! very cool ending!! thanks for sharing!! bambers;)
Author's Response: Hi Bambers thanks for the review, could not kill off Sam he`s to sewwt and sexy and... think i`ll stop there. anyway it was a bit of fun to write Lorraine
Reviewer: stranded_chess_piece (Signed) · Date: 27/10/07 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 2 Deceitful Old Bag!
Aw nice way to end it, I'm glad you didn't kill Sam. Thanks for the great read! :)
Author's Response: Hi Kate so glad you enjoyed my halloween fic. Lorraine
Reviewer: stranded_chess_piece (Signed) · Date: 27/10/07 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 1 Warty Old Hag Dean?
Wow I'm really glad you wrote another chapter coz I don't think I could sleep properly not knowing what's going to happen! Great work :)
Author's Response: Hi Kate thank you so much for the review, can`t have you not sleeping. Lorraine
Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 26/10/07 12:45 AM · On: Chapter 2 Deceitful Old Bag!
Aww this was a really good story although I'm sad it's over..but very good none the less! -Bex
Author's Response: Hi Bex so glad you enjoyed the final chapter. Thank you for reviewing, Lorraine
Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 26/10/07 12:44 AM · On: Chapter 1 Warty Old Hag Dean?
Oh woah, I'm glad this isn't a death fic because I would be bawling like a little kid, the ending was so sad! Although I found it funny about Dean being in a helicopter :) Really great job! -Bex
Author's Response: Hi Bex, no don`t want anyone dying. Sorry could not resist torturing Dean. Lorraine
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 21/10/07 03:41 AM · On: Chapter 2 Deceitful Old Bag!
"double, double mint" !!! Kill me now, what a crack up!! Dean's smirk and Sam's "Please tell me we didn't..." the note and the lipstick, and just NO IDEA!! Just tooo funny!! How strange and weird, but how original and hilarius. And you still threw in some angst and hurt!bros!!! Not my usual cup of tea but I appreciated it none the less. Thanks for the giggle.
Author's Response: Hi Cookie, so glad you gave my story a try. Odd thing is i hate comedy, but i do find the boys very naturally funny and can`t resist putting them in awkward situations. Thank you very much for leaving a review. Lorraine
Reviewer: red11 (Signed) · Date: 21/10/07 01:12 AM · On: Chapter 2 Deceitful Old Bag!
Shelly had a great birthday present! Loved the story! Keep writing
Author's Response: Hi Mekissa, thanks for reading and leaving a review. Sam and Dean for a birthday present yum! Lorraine
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 2 Deceitful Old Bag!
Lorraine - I am at a loss for words!! You have outdone yourself, with this funny, witty, original, funny, sexy, did I say funny? story. Absolutely loved every minute of it and if there was a button for 10+ you'd be getting it right about now. Roll on your next fic.!!!
Author's Response: Hi Louy, don`t know what to say.... Thanks. well you asked for another chapter so here it is, pleased you enjoyed it. Lorraine
Reviewer: darthwriter (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 2 Deceitful Old Bag!
Oh, Lelly, Nicely done. Loved the end! Love the group of witches!! too funny. Kari
Author's Response: Hi Kari, so glad you enjoyed my story. Thanks for the review Lorraine
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 2 Deceitful Old Bag!
Okay, I just have to mention this...how the heck did you get the inspiration for this story?! It's so....ODD!!!!! And incredibly hilarious...those mean ol' witches...lol...whoops, forgot the stars and cookies!
Author's Response: As you know this was to be my halloween challenge but grew to long. Then Louy suggested adding another chapter. Maggie is based on my gGan , loved my Gran she was a great character. my mom used to be embarrassed by her, of course us children thought she was great. thanks cat. Lorraine
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 2 Deceitful Old Bag!
L.O.L. Man, oh man, you're amazing l.k.!
Author's Response: Cat your making me blush
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 2 Deceitful Old Bag!
Too wonderful!!! This is soooo funny! I love how this chapter changes the entire flavor of the story! The comment about Maggie's nose being impressive is great! It's hilarious that the old gals play pranks on one another. So glad that Sam and Dean are back to normal---adore the lipstick kisses and the double-double mint. What an incredible way to get revenge on the Winchesters!
Author's Response: Thank you so much my friend, really value your insight and support. Lorraine
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 2 Deceitful Old Bag!
And love and kisses for the wonderful read - Angela, Fudgesicle, Jelly Bean, and Cupcake - alas my only companions for the morning are cats!
Author's Response: Thanks Angela you made me laugh, so pleased you enjoyed War. Hey don`t knock it cat`s make good company. Lorraine
Reviewer: buttercup (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 2 Deceitful Old Bag!
very funny!! I hope you write more in the future. sophxx
Author's Response: Than you Soph very kind of you. Lorraine
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 2 Deceitful Old Bag!
utterly awesome, lorraine.... So glad it was just the witches having fun...though so sad to see the boys in both physical and emotional pain,,,,guess the liquid drops erased the memories... Thanks for a really enjoyable tale...
Author's Response: Thank you Jude i put them back good as new and had a bit of fun at their expence lol Lorraine
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 2 Deceitful Old Bag!
Oh, that's just too funny. I LOVE the 4 different lipstick kisses and the note. A double, double mint? LOL Great ending, Lorraine.
Author's Response: Thanks vanessa, lipstick kisses wouldn`t you want to leave a reminder lol" Double, double mint" could not resist using it lol Lorraine
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 2 Deceitful Old Bag!
Liked the witches, great characters lol, very cool to play on the way we watch the boys every week, Lorraine. Too funny. Congratulations on your first complete.. yay, you.... K
Author's Response: Thanks so much kel Maggie`s character was based on my Gran. glad you enjoyed Lorraine
Reviewer: nicky199172 (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 1 Warty Old Hag Dean?
im interested :) great story i love it
Author's Response: Hi nicky thanks for letting me know you like it, Lorraine
Reviewer: darthwriter (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 1 Warty Old Hag Dean?
Wow, what an action-packed start. I was holding my breath nearly the whole time. Can't wait to read the next chapter so please hurry and post. Kari
Author's Response: Hi Kari, so glad you liked it , remember breathing is essential lol many thanks Lorraine
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 15/10/07 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 1 Warty Old Hag Dean?
Great job Lorraine! I can't wait to read more! Love the chapter title and the banter between the brothers over the witch.
Author's Response: Thanks shannon, for all your help and support. Lorraine
Reviewer: ItMeYouThem (Signed) · Date: 11/10/07 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 1 Warty Old Hag Dean?
ok I'm hooked
Author's Response: Hi Bree, thank you so much for reading and letting me know that you like my story. Look i have not written anything since i left school 20 plus years ago. So if i can give writing a go so can you. All you need is a little encouragement and help and you will find plenty of both on this site. Go on give it a try you have nothing to loose. Lorraine
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 11/10/07 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 1 Warty Old Hag Dean?
OK... I was laughing about the boys being dools. I love the idea-especially about Dean's reference to diapering Sam as a baby, Too funny. Well funny is over- they're in trouble- of course you have to continue - this is too good !!!!! You create a perfect picture with your words . Great writing-you capture the reader. Please update SOON!!!!!!! thanks for sharing your obvious talent. BRAVO!!!
Author's Response: Hi Recca, thank you so much for your lovely review. Really pleased you enjoyed reading it Lorraine
Reviewer: Little_angel_666 (Signed) · Date: 11/10/07 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 1 Warty Old Hag Dean?
Ah come on you've let a couple of snot nosed kids take out Sam. But i will wait for the next chapter to see what happens.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, i think lol. All will be revealed in the next chapter. This is supernatural after all no one stays dead for long. Lorraine
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