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Reviewer: Kiansie (Signed) · Date: 01/06/09 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 3

I love that the ghost of a dog still found a way to help her owner.

On the end where you put FINE it is actually Fin which means End in French.

Good story.



Author's Response:

WOW...someone actually read this. 

Thank you for reading and commenting. I did not know that End was FIN and not FINE..thank you for that.

The dog in the story is patterned after my pooch Roxy who is a Plott Hound. She is still very much alive and hogging my pillow as I type this.

Thanks for the comment. This was my first ever fan fic and I've come a long way since I posted this.

 

~Arie 

Reviewer: rahne (Signed) · Date: 04/10/08 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 3

Sweet and sad. I did cry, as I always do when helpless things are hurt. The story , I liked a lot. The incomplete sentences, missing commas, and tense changes within single paragraphs, I did not. Just be a little more careful with your proofreading. I find speaking the sentences aloud to be helpful in catching these things. Keep writing!

Author's Response: This was my first fanfic. I've come a long way since this. 

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 28/09/08 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 3

Real good, but very confusing to me.

Author's Response: Thank you. What are you confused about?

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 28/09/08 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 2

First of all, if I where I'd say no stay indoors 'cause whom knows where it will take them. I think Sam maybe sick . . . . wjhom knows, but the wonder full writer.

Author's Response: No..he's not sick,just a bit confused.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 28/09/08 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 1

This is getting a bit strange, but I do feel that their is going to be a mishap.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review

Reviewer: nightchills (Signed) · Date: 25/03/08 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 3

I get all teared up when animals die. Good writing.

Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: nightchills (Signed) · Date: 25/03/08 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 2

FYI - calves bawl, hounds bay.

Author's Response: No....a hound bawls. The way a hound barks is called either a chop or a bawl. Sorry. I train, hunt and show Plott hounds. 

Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 08/02/08 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 3

Wonderful tale. I have a beagle so I know the distinct, delightful sound of a hound in full bay. I really enjoyed reading your work.

-- c



Author's Response: Thank you very much. Glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: kansasangel (Signed) · Date: 30/11/07 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 3

fantastic story . did realise what was happening with some great clues . god it was sad

Author's Response: Thank you for reading. 

Reviewer: darthwriter (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 3

Oh, just beautifully tragically sad. Words can not really begin to convey my feelings at this moment so i will just say thank you so much for sharing your talent. kari

Author's Response: Thank you. Talent?? LOL *blushes madly*

Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 3

Very nice.  Would love to see another story.



Author's Response: Thank you. I am working on a couple different ideas right now i hope to have something soon.

Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 3

Awesome ending! Sad but very sweet.

Author's Response: Awesome. Thanks. I was trying to keep the fact that the dog was a ghost a secret. I gave a few hints thru Dean but wanted to keep Sam unknowing.

Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 2

Hey, I think you're doing great with this! You're really good at describing Roxy's feelings.

Author's Response: Thank you thank you!!!

Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 1

Ha, this's funny! And your idea's really different, and I like it that way :)



Author's Response: Thanks!!

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 17/10/07 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 3

Awww, that was really sad, but very sweet! Great ending! I love the twist.

Author's Response: Thank you!!

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 17/10/07 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 3

Too sweet, glad for the tissue warning.  How nice that Roxy new her job even after her body was gone - K

Author's Response:

I figured it was gonna be good when I started bawling while i was writing it.

thanks for the comments 

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 17/10/07 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 3

I knew we were going to find that Roxy died in that crash and that her loyal ghost was saving her beloved master...but I had to stay with the story in hopes I was wrong......I now have a broken heart !!!but.........nonetheless love the tale you have woven........simple, direct and soooo touching!!!!!

Thank you so much, Jackie......Give me some more please.......



Author's Response: Ummm thank you? LOL

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 17/10/07 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 2

She's good...i'll give her that but how she knew where they were staying is beyond me.....Roxy to the rescue!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Ahh see...never underestimate the determination of a determined ghost.

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 17/10/07 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 1

okay...so not sure what made Sam know to turn right but hey what the heck.....is he actually inside the dog's head ???  interesting

Author's Response: Its just that freaky brain of his...lol

Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 17/10/07 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 3

Terrific ending to a very good story.  Certainly a nice, original, different story.  Well done

Laura



Author's Response: Thank you. It wouldnt of turned out as good without your help.

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 17/10/07 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 3

cute ending. totally wasn't expecting the dog to be a ghost though. good job.

Author's Response:

Thank you!! Wanted to keep the dog being a ghost hard to figure out. I did give a few hints thru Dean but thats it.

Glad you liked it. 

Reviewer: eye4u (Signed) · Date: 17/10/07 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 3

That is why a dog is considered to be Man's Best Friend.

 Kudos to you for writing this story! It is very good!

You are correct, the last chapter is definitely a kleenex moment.

Cheers!



Author's Response:

Thank you!! I was thinking of taking the story a bit further but i wanted to keep to keep it to three to follow the title.

Glad you liked it. 

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 17/10/07 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 3

Ahhh, you killed me with the dog actually being a ghost.  I always, always cry at things like this.  ***sniff***

Good write though.



Author's Response:

Awesome!! Thats what i was going for.

Wanted the dog being a ghost a cliffy kind of. The dog in the story is my pooch Roxy...she's still alive though.

Thank you for the review! 

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 15/10/07 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 2

hey. thought i should return the reviewing favor. this story is just so cool. it's such an amazing idea and it's very entertaining. i can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: Sammygirl1963 (Signed) · Date: 13/10/07 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 2

Awesome start!  At least Dean knows Sammy isn't crazy--that his cision about a dog was legitimate!

Looking forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response: Thank you very much! 

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