Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 18/11/07 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 1
What an awesome little ficlet! So sad, for both brothers. My heart just crashed when Dean hung up, his fear of rejection so sharp. The way you wrote his emotions as he watched Sammy's smile fade was stunning - excitement turning to fear and then to terrified, leaving him shattered. But still he blames himself for 'spoiling' Sam's 'normal', and his pledge to leave him alone comes not from anger, resentment, but from not wanting to mess Sam's life up. You brought out the best in this big brother. Well written, as a flashback it was perfect of the pilot. I just loved it to bits,
Author's Response: Thank you! It can be so hard to figure Dean out sometimes, but from what I've seen, it's rare that he actually resents Sam and puts himself first. He's always been about what's best for Sam. ~Sierra
Reviewer: clclemmons (Signed) · Date: 13/11/07 12:50 AM · On: Chapter 1
Great little story.
Author's Response: Thank you! :) ~Sierra
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 08/11/07 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 1
That was beautifully written...heartbreaking when Dean called Sam's phone and hung up to avoid painful rejection. (a rejection in itself) Good oneshot SierraN *Fantasy*
Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 29/10/07 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 1
I can see that you have written something earlier too. This's beautiful and well written. You described Dean's selflessness wonderfully. I also liked the flasback. Thanks for sharing your talent :)
Author's Response: I love writing, so I'm just happy that my story turned out to be something enjoyable! Thanks for your review :) ~Sierra
Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 08/10/07 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow, someone who agrees with my timeline for the Stanford years;-) Honestly, this is a great flashback, love how you tied it to Dean in the Impala at the end of the pilot. Now, I want you to write the flashback scene from Sam's POV, please. Set almost 2 months after the pilot, just before Christmas, something Sam sees makes him remember... this would be fine reading, love to have Sam's thinking about this, since he's not exactly the good guy in the flashback.
Author's Response: That's a great idea, I'm deifinitely going to get to work on this, since it wasn't my intention to make Sam look like a bad guy...so I'd like to show it from his POV. I hope you check back when it gets posted, though that might be awhile yet. Thanks for the review! ~Sierra
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 07/10/07 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 1
Sierra....I know you said this is your first story but i have a strong feeling that you meant for SN only. You write a beautiful, polished emotional story. I was moved to tears with the Christmas rejection. Our poor selfless Dean! Whenever I post or come onsite to answer reviews I will seriously be looking for your stories. I know they'll be worthwhile readings. Thank you for this lovely bit of insight. It was a real treat. :0) jude
Author's Response: Yes, I have written fanfics, but never for SPN before this one. I'm so glad you enjoyed it, thank you so much for the thoughtful review! I just posted a new story, but it hasn't been approved yet; check it out if you want to :) Thanks again, ~Sierra
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 06/10/07 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 1
hm.. constructive huh. Well the story was great. The flashback heartbreaking and the whole thing was very well written, Dean's emotions well done. Great story and thanks for the read - K
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I really appreciate it when people take the time to not only leave a comment, but to specify what parts of the story they liked and why. So yeah...thank you! :)
Reviewer: IMTheresa (Signed) · Date: 06/10/07 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 1
Lovely story. I could really feel Dean's emotions as he watched his little brother not answer the phone....I know there's a lot going on with the boys these days, but I'd love to have more insight into their childhood and the fight that Sam and John had before he left for school. Just how did he and Dean leave it between them and why didn't they speak for two years?
Author's Response: Thank you! I, too, would love to see some more flashbacks, and I'm just dying to know how the last fight between John and Sam went down. Maybe Jeffrey Dean will make another appearance someday... *crosses fingers* Anyway, thanks so much for the review :)
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 06/10/07 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 1
Sierra, this is great, you must have writen other fic before cos this is beautiful. I wish this had been in the pilot. The description of Dean's feelings when Sam wouldnt pick up had me nearly in tears and I'm glad he had to watch his brother drive away. Awesome! I'll be looking out for more from you. Thanks for posting!
Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, I have written other fanfics, but never for Supernatural. I'm so happy you liked it, I'm working on a few more now, so keep an eye out :)
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