Reviewer: kezza2kerri (Signed)
01/01/09 05:35 PM · On:
i like that you added the make sammy happy to the list
Reviewer: Kumaproogey (Signed)
09/01/08 08:32 PM · On:
Awww…that was so sweet!! You portrayed the boys perfectly!! I love how they interacted and what they said, it was very true to the show & the characters. This was very well written and I felt touched by it. The ending was perfection!! Loved it! Loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the really lovely review! It means so much to me that you felt it touched you. It is always good to know that my portrayal of the boys is in line with how others see them too. thanks for taking the time to let me know....
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed)
06/01/08 07:20 PM · On:
This is just stunning. I'm sitting here with a lump in my throat that's making speaking and breathing difficult. OMG!!
I love the way you wrote each brother understanding the other by reading and interpreting the subtle nuances. But their reactions to each other, to having the list out in the open was outstanding, phenomenal! Your scene was poignant, gentle, private and I loved everything about it.
The shared understanding about visiting Mary's grave *long sob* You words just broke my heart.
Your list was just so Dean!! Amidst my tears and hitching breath I actually laughed at some of them - the impala on the Nascar track, eating the worm. Fantastic!
Visiting the Grand Canyon is an understanding we all get, and the firing of the Winchester rifle just makes such sense to all dean!girls, heck to all tri-winchester's!!
And of course, in Sam's addition *trying to sswallow* you showed his desperation and conviction that he can - will - beat the deal. This was the pinnacle of your beautiful little fic.
And I've never before wanted so much to be a twin...
Thanks so much, you had me in the palm of your hand.
Author's Response: Cookie ~ thank you so much for your very detailed review. I've seen your reviews for other people and been very jealous of them, so I am thrilled to get one from you. You will never know how much receiving this review today has brightened my day. I am so pleased that I was able to convey the emotions that I had hoped to ~ would that we all had that kind of bond to share with a sibling....
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed)
06/01/08 04:50 AM · On:
I love the last item on the list. I think he needs that!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! Yep - we are all on the same page - some way or some how, Sammy has got to save our Dean!
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed)
06/01/08 12:46 AM · On:
Awww Man that last line just made tear up something fierce! Great job! I like how you worked in the "double mint" action and revisit the top 5 hottest "nights" in from the show, gave continuity to the story. And the other stuff on the list was so totally Dean. You really are a Deangirl among Deangirls!
Author's Response: GENGEN!!! Thanks so much for the review! and stars! the Deangirl in me blushes just a little bit. Is it wrong to admit that I made myself cry with this?
Reviewer: alwaysateen (Signed)
05/01/08 11:21 PM · On:
That is so sweet!
The list is awesome and so Dean, lolll.
I personnaly love what Sam add at the end, hope that part will come true.
Reviewer: Rosilee (Signed)
20/12/07 06:59 AM · On:
i love it! especially sams addition to the list!
Reviewer: garvaldmains (Signed)
03/12/07 06:12 AM · On:
BRILLIANT 'Make a new list' so spot on!
Loved it, you star
Reviewer: calUK (Signed)
25/11/07 11:51 AM · On:
Fantastic story - so simple, but really moving. Seems to be something about sunrise over the grand canyon - can't think of anytime it got mentioned as sunrise, but it's turning up in a lot of fics at the mo!
Reviewer: JennieC (Signed)
25/11/07 10:04 AM · On:
So well done. I can see this playing out on screen.
#11 was the perfect touch.
Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed)
18/11/07 06:11 PM · On:
Oh. Wow. This's wonderful piece of writing. Truly touching and the end is awesome. Amazing job.
Reviewer: SupernaturalGeek (Signed)
02/11/07 05:12 PM · On:
Wow. I was totally aching for both of them anyway and then that final line? I actually teared up. And I don't do chick flick moments.. Brilliant story and totally in character. Can't wait for S4 when Dean can make that new list! ;)
Reviewer: IHeartSam (Signed)
13/10/07 09:25 PM · On:
awww thats such a cute ending! *sniff* lol and dont say sammy puppy eyes cause youll have me (and a million others) drooling onto our keyboars and causing short circuits lol! i really liked the bit in this where you said about dean allowing himself to want things was very poignant. great job!
Reviewer: Swellison (Signed)
13/10/07 02:03 AM · On:
This is a fine little slice of life, slice of angst. Love Sam's addition to the list. Sue
Reviewer: Meadows (Signed)
10/10/07 01:27 AM · On:
Wow. So simple and as previous liked the fact Sam added the 11th item - does this mean he gets saved at the 11th hour? Brought a lump to my throat. Thanks
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed)
09/10/07 09:40 PM · On:
I'm a bad reader-fairy...(hangs head in shame). I read this a few days ago but I wasn't logged in, and I was in my usual "peruse and run" mode before work, so...BIG SUPER SIZE COOKIES FOR THIS ONE.
This was beautiful, Lisa. It was more beautiful the second time around. I loved the fact that point number 10 had a tell-tale smear on it, and adored that Sam added a point 11. I really, really hope Dean gets out of the deal - the show needs both of them - and both of them alive, not a ghost.
Thank you so much for this - it has made a dark, stormy day (full of grumpy office people) so much more bearable...Jules
Author's Response: Thank you soooo much for the lovely review - and stars!! Love me some stars... I think I'm officially starting to worry about Dean making it out of the deal. I was sure that he would get out of it, but I've been being naughty and reading spoilers and while nothing says he doesn't, I'm just starting to get a bad feeling.... Though I do have some interesting theories on how he could get out too.... Not like I spend my whole day thinking about this or anything.....
Reviewer: DShelli (Signed)
08/10/07 09:38 PM · On:
That was so touching. I love the list, I love that Sam can help add a few check marks, and I love Sam's addition. I wonder what would be on that new list.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I'm thinking a lot more than just 10 items.....
Reviewer: supernaturalpass (Signed)
06/10/07 04:25 PM · On:
Great job! Sam's right, Dean'll need to update his list, lol! Loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! We all have to keep the faith... One way or another that boy is going to need a new list....
Reviewer: Purehalo (Signed)
06/10/07 03:59 PM · On:
You can have my WHOLE batch of super chocolate cookies for this awesome story!!
Author's Response: Awww! Thanks so much for the review and the cookies!!! Now I have the sugar and energy to get back to the keyboard....
Reviewer: Katieelessar (Signed)
05/10/07 11:47 PM · On:
*sob* Oh my, that last line was killer. Just so right, so perfect and so Sam. Refusing to give up.
I adored this fic. 10/10. So touching and well written!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the really awesome review - and stars!!! I'm soo glad that you liked it. The last line came to me fairly early in the writing process - at least I knew where we were going!
Reviewer: StrigoiVii (Signed)
05/10/07 05:44 PM · On:
Very good, very sad. Let's all go to the Grand Canyon together.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! It's a date! Really, someone has to organize a Grand Canyon, Supernatural event....
Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed)
04/10/07 10:44 PM · On:
Beautiful. Made me all teary. Great writing!
Thank you so much for the review! I'm so glad that it touched you.
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed)
04/10/07 05:17 PM · On:
OMG..... bawling here, because of this...
The simplicity of the things that Dean wanted made Sam's heart ache.
He couldn't face Mom when he felt responsible for Dad's death and for Dad being in Hell.
11. May 18, 2008 - make a new list.
Have mercy woman! Beautifully done!
Author's Response: Aww. Thanks so much for the lovely review! You know how much I love it when people pick favourite lines. I'm almost ashamed to admit that I made myself cry with the ending.... Seriously, every time that I had to read it to edit and whatnot, I teared up.... I blame it on the boys....
Reviewer: kwater (Signed)
03/10/07 11:22 PM · On:
Lam did you set out to break my heart cause you did...Thanks for posting - K
Author's Response: Thanks Kel! Didn't set out to do that but.... Is it wrong to admit that I had myself tearing up at the end every time that I went back in???
Reviewer: Dean494 (Signed)
03/10/07 09:57 PM · On:
It´s a great list, each item is Dean´s style and just the perfect final item added by Sam, because is the only way to make sure he´s going to be happy and safe. Gabriela.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review and the stars! It's so great when someone tells me they "got" it!!! Yep, that is the only way that Sam will be happy for sure.