Great end to that!!!!!!!!! great tale......who knows...maybe TOM will appear again in another story of yours DH....

Author's Response:

I am receiving so many great responses for Tom Baldwin.  I guess I need to work up another story with Tom and the boys.  Love that everyone is enjoying this one.  Hate for it to end.

supernaturaldh

OK, I’m gunna experiment with a reviewing style coz I want to comment on each of these awesome men: Dean: Loved his recognition from Sam's childhood that the rocking is a sign of fever and distress. Your little journey into his past with “his Sammy” was very cute.  

My fav scene: "It's okay Sammy, I gotcha.  Come on...Lets walk together, Sammy, come on."  Dean lips curved up in a smile when Sam rested his head on Dean's shoulder, eyes drowsily looking over at him; his feet shuffling in an attempt to move.” Say no more...

 Sam: Pushing Dean’s buttons, playing him, the perfect little-brother-don’t-be-mad-at-me-ploy. Of course it would work. Always has! Loved the way you let Sam consciously play this card.

Tom: “kiddo”, "Dean, stand still, while I get you're brother". "I got this". “…Check your god damn computer"???? He even talks like a Winchester!! No wonder we are falling for him!! Boy, I miss John…………

great stuff!

we all like this guy....almost like having all 3 winchester men together again...

awesome i love it so far!

A great action chapter. Tom already know that Dean's priority is always but now he has seen first hand that Dean actually puts his own safety second to Sams, is actually willing to risk his life.

Yep, loved your Tom more in this ch. Finally Sam sees what Dean sees: a resemblence to John, a need to protect the boys plus an admiration of them. Loved seeing Tom the soldier in action. He'd make a great hunter!!

Your doing a neat job!

 

Author's Response:

Thanks, your review means alot.  I just love the interaction of these three characters. 

Keep reading, more to come.

supernaturaldh

What are you thinkin’ Sam? You got him so outa wack (blame BEKi of Dorvan for my use of that word!!) that he’s just not in hunter nor brother mode at all. I can only take your word for it that he’s influenced by either pain or meds (as you had Sam say “you can’t have everything”) But jealously??? Are we seeing the belligerent, argumentative Sam that went up against John all those years ago surfacing while he is vulnerable post injury?I loved how you had Dean sensing Sam before he even sees him. Your words “…sudden awareness washing over him, fear so great it threatened to stifle his breath” brought a sudden spike to the intensity of this chapter and gave us a promise of trouble to come – although I think Sam’s greatest threat may be his brother rather than the chupacabra.I have to say however, in Sam’s defense, that I would have chosen the chupacabra over Debra Bruno too!!! This is a fab story and you have my gratitude for the entertaining read as well as enabling my Winchester habit.

Uh oh.  Sam's in trouble!!  With Dean or with the Chupacabra--either way he's in trrrouble.  :-) 

Great update.

ok.. I really love this story. The interaction between the brothers is top notch.

I like this Tom...but..I still have a funny feeling about him. Want's to get to know the boys better...????

I guess I'm just too suspicious...

especially where the boys are concerned.

Sam is feeling hurt by what he heard- he doesn't get the Tom and Dean re;ationship.

Your visual words are the best. Your storytelling skills-OUTSTANDING

BRAVO!!!!!!!

 

please post soon.

a fan

 

OK, I wasn't at all sus of Tom until Sam started to question (after all, he has that "spidery" thing goin' on) and that last line "... he definitely wanted to get to know them better" Has Sam just made me paranoid???? Tom is just noticing things we already know - Dean as the protector, the father figure, the intense connection between the boys - please let him not go from hero to monster and let it just be Sam's meds and his need to feel safe alone with Dean !!! You've got me on the edge of my seat. I've got HEAPS to do today and here I am heading for that "next" button instead...

oh, now we are in serious deep sh**  ...........since when is Sam such a huge MORON???

WOW great story! That scene of Sammy waking up all by himself in such a terrible state...sob... but I'm sure glad you had Dean fix it up, as only Dean can. Your description of Sam feeling bad was heartbreaking, your description of Dean realising he felt bad and blaming himself was even more heartbreaking. Yep, I'm glad you retrieved the impala- can't have the three of them separated for too long! Your "visitors" had a humungous "icky" factor and I loved the way you Dean rescue Sam from them. Oh, and can I say agian, I love your Tom. If he's OK by Dean, he's OK by us. His similarities to John with his need to protect and comfort our boys sucks us all in.

So, yeah you're on the mark - big time. I'm thrilled "it's taken on a life of it's own". Looking forward to finishing the ride with you.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  My computer has been down, but I just got it up and running again.  Should have a couple of chapters this weekend.  Please read & review.

supernaturaldh

a volkswagen ??!!! ooohhh the poor baby car..........

I'm sure Sam doesn't mind sharing Debra with Dean....sounds like there's plenty of her to go around...certainly too much for just ONE Winchester....    Great update