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Reviews For SLIGHTLY STUPID
Reviewer: 0kieD0kie (Signed) · Date: 10/12/08 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 1

I absolutely loved this story! When Sam was calling out "Dad?" when Tom was helping the boys in the woods broke my heart. I love the boy's relationship with Tom, and how much he is like their father. I'm so happy he became a hunter! Lovely ending! A joy to read!

Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 06/12/08 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 24

Lovely ending, just beautiful, couldnt of thought of a better one myself. :)

Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 06/12/08 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 21

I just gotta say here, before I continue, that I laughed my ass off at the end. *wipes away tear* Still laughing...Best scene ever!

Reviewer: TuckerCat (Signed) · Date: 29/08/08 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 24

YEAH!  I liked this story very much, I like that they found a friend and someone to also hunt the bad stuff.  I would like to read another story about Tom.  very good work!

Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 19/03/08 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 24

Awesome story! Love Tom and his resemblance to John Winchester. He sure got the two brothers figured out fast. I liked how Dean took to him pretty much right away and how Sam in the end did also. You always keep me going with your fics. Hugs, Vonnie

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 14/11/07 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 1

Am so liking Tom - what a nice guy. Worried tho' that you might kill him - don't know why? Irrational fear??

Next time can you beat Dean up a bit more, one little broken ankle is not enough to keep the gorgeous boy down!

Gonna read Catch me when I fall now.  Thanks for a great read.

Birdie x

Reviewer: Rodymenia (Signed) · Date: 30/10/07 12:38 AM · On: Chapter 24

 I'm sorry the story, is over.  Everyday I would check on it.  i really liked the character of Tom.

I'm glad to see He may be coming back.

Thank you and Happy Halloween!

  Roda

Reviewer: d6l2j7 (Signed) · Date: 29/10/07 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 24

I really enjoyed this story.  I liked Tom as well.  I am looking forward to the sequel.

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 29/10/07 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 24

WOW... .............

AWSOME  AWSOME AWSOME STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tom is just what the boys needed in  so many ways. Everything about him  was what John could have been . It was heartbreaking to see how much Dean related to Tom as "dad".

Dean was at his best  in "big brother"mode. It was a pleasure to see Dean actually  relate to a non hunter and really like the person.

You have woven this story so perfectly that it all just flowed and made the reader feel just great!!!!

I was totally excited when I saw the additional chapters - you made my day!!!!!

The bar was tooo cool!!!! Down time with the Winchesters and friends...even Debra..got to love it.

OUTSTANDING piece of work-kudos to you for an incredibly wonderful story.

Can't wait for a sequel..???!!!!

sorry this is so long- I really liked this story.

BRAVO!!!!!!!

a #1 fan

 



Author's Response:

As I said before.  You ROCK!!  Thanks for the rave review.  I was not sure if it was too long.  But you know, you have to get all the facts in if you want to make sure we have enough of Sam and Dean to go around.  Sequel is planned.  Just posted a one-shot today.  Not quite ready to write another long one just yet.  Thanks...

supernaturaldh

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 29/10/07 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 24

very cool ending. i like that your gonna turn tom into a hunter. he's just awesome. you totally need to do a sequel coz this story was absolutely amazing and i loved every bit of it!

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 29/10/07 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 24

Oh, good!  Tom's gonna become a hunter.  I love it.  This was a great story.

Reviewer: shelby02 (Signed) · Date: 29/10/07 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 24

Since I couldn't review on fanfiction.net I came here to let you know how much I enjoyed your story.  I thought the boys developing relationship with Tom was great and I loved all the limp!Sam.  I was sorry to see the it end.  I look forward to your next story!



Author's Response:

Thanks loads for the good review, and the extra effrort giving it.  I do plan a sequel, just got to find the time. 

supernaturaldh

Reviewer: soapsuds4 (Signed) · Date: 28/10/07 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 23

i really like this story

i would like to know more about toms kids...

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 28/10/07 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 23

aww poor tom. the rest of this chapter was hilarious though! i freakin love debra threatening to tell their mothers. HAHA!! this story rules and a sequel is so totally necessary!

Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 28/10/07 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 23

A sequal would be a good idea

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.  I agree, had some good interaction between Tom and the boys.  Love them boys.

supernaturaldh

Reviewer: mickey (Signed) · Date: 28/10/07 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 22

Trained as a soldjer from childhood and more than 10 years expereance hunting Dean's not stupid or sloppy in confrunting evil and never incompatant and often  plays out as the hero, nor is he lazy doing his share of investigating, simply not the same way Sam does. Dean is hot headed over zellos and occationaly shortsighted but NEVER STUPID!  Sam can be sactimoneous, intilectualy arrigant and selfish but he is never juvinil, petulent or winy.  We love flawed heros, perfect one are boring but please girl I love these boys the way they are don't recreat them.  Oh and proof read.  (sorry dysexic and no spell cecker)

Author's Response:

Well, I definitely need a beta, but can't find anyone to step up to the job.  Sorry if the beginning and title gave you an issue.  It basically means Dean likes to have fun, while Sam take everything way to serious.  I love these boys, and this show.  Guess you have to read between the lines sometimes.  Thanks for your input and for reading it.

supernaturaldh

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 27/10/07 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 22

LOL that was a hilarious way to end the chapter. so true too. i absolutely without a doubt love this story! just cant get enough of it

Author's Response:

Thanks Magos186, I appreciate the good review.  I hate for it to end. 

supernaturaldh

Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 27/10/07 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 22

Cute ending to a great stroy. Loved the way you had Sam use "the look" on Tom, loved it even more that Tom fell for it. "Oh yea, you aint seen nothing yet" -what a hoot, Tom thinks he knows the boys, well just let him watch now that Sam's not too sick and Dean's in full throttle. Fantastic sory, thanks heaps, I've enjoyed the ride.



Author's Response:

Close, but  not the ending just yet.  I need to wrap it up in a neat little package.  Keep reading, shouldn't be too much longer.  Thanks for reviewing, it's what keeps me going.

supernaturaldh

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 27/10/07 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 22

Nice ending!  I'm sorry to see this one over too.

Author's Response:

Not quite the end, almost.  Just have to wrap it up.

supernaturaldh

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 27/10/07 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 22

great ending......Tom is the very reincarnation of John......

please use him in some more stories....



Author's Response:

I agree, Tom will definitely have to make another appearance.  Thanks for reading my story.  I appreciate the good and bad reviews.  It is definitely something you learn from.

Thanks, supernaturaldh

Reviewer: soapsuds4 (Signed) · Date: 26/10/07 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 21

i love this story, its sooo good.   Tom is so nice i love him

Author's Response:

Thanks soapsuds4 for reading and reviewing.  It keeps me focused.

supernaturaldh

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 26/10/07 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 21

WOW!!!!!!!!

i can't get enough of this story.It's GREAT!!!!!!!!!!

Tom has earned a place in my heart for taking care of the boys. He's really a good man.

 I love how he came back at the doctor for being so nasty to Dean, and glaring at Sam. His parting words to the doctor said it all.

I hope you use him again with the boys- they make a great
"family" tableau.

Wording , delivery, setting, danger, brotherly love, father figure - it was all here wrapped up in anOUTSTANDING STORY!!!!!!!

I just want more..more...more

BRAVO!!!!!!

a fan



Author's Response:

ReccaF - you rock!!  I love the fact you like my story.  It has been a great ride and I hate for it to end.  Maybe Tom will just have to make another appearance in a future story, 

supernaturaldh

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 26/10/07 11:25 AM · On: Chapter 21

lol! seriously tom is the best dude ever written! i freakin love him to death! he cracks me up! i so cannot wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 26/10/07 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 21

I would love to see another story with Tom Baldwin in it.  I just really like the guy.  :-)  Not as much as I LOVE our boys though.  Great update.

Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 26/10/07 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 21

Did I just hear Tom call Sam "SAMMY" !?!?!?!?!

 



Author's Response:

I just could not resist Tom calling him "Sammy", and then Sam not saying anything about it.  He was too caught up in "Tom reminds me of Dad" to even notice.

Keep reading. 

supernaturaldh

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