Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 08/11/07 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 8 What a Dope!
Ah, now it's all falling into place, all the high security, the Impala getting scrapped and Wanda leaving early. So very cleverly done!! Chop shop and Meths Lab, I feel this scrap yard boss and his allies really deserve whatever's coming to them. Very touching scene when Stanley recalls his cousins death. He is turning into a very likeable character, it looks like Dean could use some help about now! Great chapter. Thanks J.
Author's Response: I wanted my little Stan to be a sweetie...Dean really needed an ally since Sam was out of reach....Was hoping you guys would like Malone being a REALLY big crook.......
Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 08/11/07 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 7 Daddy's Little Girl
Thank goodness he's under that fence - once again the spoon to the rescue. I'm still chuckling over the "Look like some damned 'swamp monster' off the horror channel." Stanley seems very sweet. I've got to go and find out what's beyond the doorway. Thanks Jane
Author's Response: Jane...again so enjoying the fact that you are enjoying my attempt to entertain... Thanks again for so sweetly reviewing.... :0) jude
Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 08/11/07 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 6 Mooning and Spooning
A real Cujo moment with the back door!! This rolls beautifully from one hurdle to the next, so much tension but just so much humour. I love the way you have Dean pulling out all the stops to convince Sammy that everything's fine, when underneath (literally) he's almost running on empty. The time updates are working really well too - gives an almost "24" feel to it - well the clocks ticking so I'm off to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Jane, thank you so much for your lovely heartfelt reviews.......Thank you for appreciating my attempt to keep the clock running as Dean slowly creeps toward saving his girl.......
Reviewer: Thru Terrys Eyes (Signed) · Date: 08/11/07 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 10 We Meet Again!!
I think i liked this chapter the best so far. great descriptions!
Author's Response: I feel badly the rest weren't as strong......but sooooo glad you liked the descriptives here......Thanks so much, Terry, for making the time to review....I know how busy you are..... miss you............ :0) jude
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 08/11/07 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 10 We Meet Again!!
YAY!! You worked in my bloody handprint! I had fun thiinking up a list of "items" to see in my story and you've done an absolute superb job of incorporating them. I only hope that you had as much fun writing my story as I have had reading it! I love anesthetized Dean. His uninhibited "Love you so much, Sammeeee" was incredibly sweet. So next Gran will be patching him up. Ya know, some people might think a butt wound is nuthin'--no big deal--but seriously, you know that has to hurt so very much! ((sigh)) And just think how much stitches hurt anyway and then to have to sit on 'em. Oooohhh, poor Dean. :-) With all that dirt and oil too that's likely gotten into the wounds, he's just not gonna be a happy camper for awhile. Did I mention how much I love my story? 'cause I do. Looking forward to the wrap up. Even if I am sad to see it come to an end.
Author's Response: Yeah, i agree....no fun to butt wounds....no way to get comfy......been there... Vanessa, you have no idea how much i've enjoyed writing this for you....I was terrified I would disappoint you......I AM SO PLEASED THAT I MADE YOU SO HAPPY!!!!! I had such fun making sure I covered your specifications......hope Mom enjoys it as well...........thanks for my stars....... :0) jude
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 08/11/07 05:25 AM · On: Chapter 10 We Meet Again!!
Not only hurt Dean but drunk and about to be showered Dean - can this get any better?
Author's Response: thank you for my stars, Lou......I cannot tell you how much fun this story has been to write...
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 08/11/07 04:50 AM · On: Chapter 10 We Meet Again!!
Aw, great update. I love it. What do they say: drunks tell the truth... yeah, Dean sure loves his Sammy. Wonderfully written. Can't wait for more :) Thanks!
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 08/11/07 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 10 We Meet Again!!
What a wonderful update jude, drunken Dean is really sweet, he so loves his Sammy.Looking forward to that shower scene jude so hurry up and write it . Many thanks Lorraine
Author's Response: lorraine...stars...yummy.... I figured I'd let the "real" Dean out to play.... Afraid shower scene may be disappointing...not fair to take vicarious advantage of an injured hero.............it's all written will post Saturday a.m. Thanks!!!!!
Reviewer: yankeefan87 (Signed) · Date: 08/11/07 01:01 AM · On: Chapter 10 We Meet Again!!
loved it! update soon? thank you : )
Author's Response: Glad you like it, Yankee....next update will be Saturday morning....it is the Final chapter !!
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 05/11/07 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 9 I've Got You, Babe!!
Wow - like action much Jude? What an awesome chapter - and LOVE your new banner for this story. Just keeps getting better and better, please update soon.
Author's Response: Lou, you like me....I'm seeing stars...LOTS OF STARS....thank you... Really, I'm so glad you're enjoying the story as it rolls along...I have so enjoyed all of your encouragement.....Dean is a righteous dude so he couldn't drop this thing.....besides they were going to crush his girl..... hell hath no fury and all that !!!!! :0) jude
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 05/11/07 04:47 AM · On: Chapter 9 I've Got You, Babe!!
Go Dean, go!!! Oh, wonderful story! I'm curious how this one will wind up. More please soon! Thanks :)
Author's Response: Dagmar, Thank you for the 5 stars and the great review....so nice to feel like I can touch people with words....... I've had so much fun writing this one for Vanessa and all you sweet readers...... :0) jude
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 04/11/07 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 9 I've Got You, Babe!!
sorry sorry, i'm so late in my readings... But having three chapters to read in a row is really pleasant. And looks like the brothers and their new friend are up fore some more troubles...
Author's Response: Glad you're still with us on this trip, Fredo......we'd miss you....... Just two more to go......just finished the last one...
Reviewer: buttercup (Signed) · Date: 04/11/07 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 9 I've Got You, Babe!!
Getting better every chapter!! Absolutely loving it great job sophie
Author's Response: Thanks, Sophie...... nice to know that I'm not just entertaining myself...... though I must say that I'm really enjoying writing this little tale of Dean's frustration..... 2 more chapters and we can kiss this one goodbye...
Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 03/11/07 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 5 Dances with Dogs
I love the way you've combined the immense tension with the incredible humour. Oh and the visuals just keep getting better and better. J.
Author's Response: so happy you're enjoying this........ I tried very hard to maintain a bit of humor just like our hero always does.... Again Jane, so wonderful to see your nice reviews thank you...I'll keep writing...if you will !!!! :0) jude
Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 03/11/07 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 4 Crushing My Love!
I've only just realised that everything they ever need is in the Impala - including the M&M's!! Poor Dean, I can't believe he's damaged that gorgeous butt. I'm loving the visuals here. J
Author's Response: hopefully the visuals will only get better..... poor Dean ...no sugar fix....no medical attention thanks for sticking with us.... Jude
Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 03/11/07 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 3 Spooning in the Backseat with Dean
Oh the plot thickens and the mission just gets harder and harder. I loved the car journey, the line, "Dean noticed 'it' was grinning at him" still has me chuckling. Great job. Thanks J.
Author's Response: Jane, thank you for finding my story and sharing your thoughts.... we all know Dean adores kids
Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 03/11/07 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 2 The Scarlet Letter
Oh Lord, how could they think that beautiful car was abandoned?? This must be Dean's own seventh level of hell. I'm loving this story, all the bad luck is so much fun!! Thanks J.
Author's Response: love how he gets when he's frustrated or challenged....thanks for the nice review, Jane
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 03/11/07 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 9 I've Got You, Babe!!
Ha ha...great banner, guys. Oh my god...ammonia...poor Dean...that stuff smells NASTY...and Molotovs? Wow, you like your alcohol, Jude...lol...wait. You are talking about the cocktail, right? Ooooh, I have such a hard time reading slowly...I'm sure I misinterpreted it...because cocktails don't make sense...eeek, I'm totally getting off topic...okay...beautiful job, Jude. I'm seriously hoping the Impala isn't injured in any way, shape or form. Dean's gonna have a lotta ass-kicking to do otherwise :D
Author's Response: So happy you're enjoying it, Cat.....thank you for the stars Molotov's seemed the safest way to do damage without anu of our 3 guys getting injured further....heynow, Dean like his alcohol...
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 03/11/07 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 9 I've Got You, Babe!!
Hi Jude, love the new banner, staring Deans bum. Vanessa is a clever girl. I have a feeling Stans Gran is going to remind me of someone i send pictures to. Still very much enjoying Crush Jude. Lorraine
Author's Response: thank you for my pretty stars and all the nice pix.....yeah, love Vee's banner..... Are you hinting grannie may be like MOI ????!!!!! you're so perceptive, Lorraine....
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 03/11/07 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 9 I've Got You, Babe!!
Yay!!! They liberated the Impala. Woooo hoooo! Is it really bad that I was sad Dean had to wake up so soon. lol I really like Stan; he's quite a kid. Would love to see him make a reappearance some day. Can't wait for the next chapter when Sammy gets to see how beat up Dean is. Looking forward to all that brotherly love and hurt/comfort.
Author's Response: Vanessa....guess this means you REALLY like YOUR story............Can't begin to tell you how much I'm enjoying your response to each chapter..... Oh yeah Sammy will have to look
Author's Response: sorry, Vanessa, meant to say thanks for all those gorgeous stars
Reviewer: Thru Terrys Eyes (Signed) · Date: 03/11/07 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 9 I've Got You, Babe!!
Very exciting! You better make Dean's ass perfect when this is over!
Author's Response: Can't improve on PERFECTION, Terry.... Ahhhhh!!!! I promise I'll get him put back together......Got an angel of mercy all lined up.......
Reviewer: Thru Terrys Eyes (Signed) · Date: 03/11/07 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 8 What a Dope!
Loved Dean kicking open the door. macho all the way!
Author's Response: of course, would our gorgeous tough-guy hero do it any other way ??!!
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 30/10/07 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 8 What a Dope!
Oh Jude, this is hilarious :)What a great read so far! Poor Dean, this boy can never get a rest, can he? Wake up man, time for your baby is running out... :) Help him Jude, will you? - lol. Thanks for this entertaining story.
Author's Response: Dagmar, Thank you for your kind words and your lovely stars.......it means so much ...I've had so much fun with it so far... When Vanessa specified an unusual use of a SPOON and angsty, hurt Dean somehow only a tale like this fit the order....... I promise we'll rescue them both....!!
Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 29/10/07 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 6 Mooning and Spooning
Hehehehhee.....poor Dean can't even get over a fence without trouble. Great chapter! Laura
Author's Response: Thanks, laura.......but the important thing was that he tried, eh?? our poor boy
Reviewer: firefly (Signed) · Date: 29/10/07 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 8 What a Dope!
Wow, a chop shop/Meth lab. Think the fumes from that would just about kill someone. luckily he is Dean. Dean can never die. Nice job. Deb
Author's Response: Thanks so very much, Deb .....for taking the time to toss a cookie..... Glad you're enjoying it so far....Hope you'll come back for the final two chapters and let me know how I stood up to your expectations
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