Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 21/10/07 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 6 Mooning and Spooning
Gosh, this is an absolutely fantastic update, Jude. I loved every minute of reading this. You've answered every bit of my challenge. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. I love it that little things are starting to wear on Dean--the blood loss, the cold, etc. He's gonna be hurting soon (more than he already is, I mean).
Author's Response: Vanessa ...you sadistic little minx, you........ are you waiting for him to fall over...?? Glad it is making you sooo happy
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 21/10/07 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 6 Mooning and Spooning
Lol...wow, this story is different. I absolutely love it. Spoons!!!! Poor Dean...poor Impala...poor jeans...of course, that means that Dean is in his boxers... :D
Author's Response: Knew the boxers would catch your attention, Shiny... Poor sweetie Dean....all he wanted was to pick up Sam at the library and get the heck out of Dodge while munching his Peanut M&Ms.....thanks for the review....
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 5 Dances with Dogs
MMMM...Dean without pants...man that ;s a sight to see! Tho the poor thing must be in pain! Can't wait to see where you take this! Hopefully there will be a great description of Dean's beautiful legs! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: working from imagination here, Gen.....not a lot of great leg shots out there..... well pretty soon we'll have to rescue him...gotta be hungry, tired and VERY sore...
Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 5 Dances with Dogs
And now the pants come off...lol Great chapter! Laura
Author's Response: thanks, Laura, for being kind enough to not only read but review....... wasn't for prurient reasons..( Not ME!!).......just needed to ditch the dog and IT had gotten awfully attached to those jeans
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 5 Dances with Dogs
well, i'm definitely a cat person. Lol. And a Dean person. Especially a Dean without pants person! Good job so far Jude...
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it so far, Fredo... Personally I think he NEEDS a darned good, long, hot shower.....
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 5 Dances with Dogs
Hi jude, you an vanessa are certainly not making things easy for Dean. Just a thought Jude,a very naughty thought is Dean going to come out of this with any clothes? lol not that i would complain Lorraine
Author's Response: Lorraine, you evil child, just because I tore off most of Sam's clothes in Mesmerized does NOT mean I could put our gorgeous hero in such an undignified position........yeah right!!! All that oil and gunk sure point towards a shower scene.....don't you think....?? :0) jude
Reviewer: darthwriter (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 5 Dances with Dogs
Once again you have outdone yourself, Jude, I am practically speechless here. Many words come to mind to describe this chapter, but I think I will just stick to Masterful. Kari
Author's Response: Thank you once again, Kari....truly appreciate your generous reviews....glad you enjoyed it... :0) jude
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 5 Dances with Dogs
Action packed update Jude. I've seen some nasty dogs, but this one takes the cake...lol. And Dean without his pants, always a good thing ;)
Author's Response: A hellhound for sure, Kelly.....maybe if Dean can outrun this one he can survive his one year deal......... Definitely wish we could see the boxers.....those cute legs......heheh...thanks for the R & R :0) jude
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 5 Dances with Dogs
Happy I am indeed. LOVE this new chapter! Throbbing Dean head, throbbing Dean ass. What more can a girl ask for? Well, knowing me a LOT more. LOL
Author's Response: Awwww....... Vanessa, you make feel me feel so good ...........Thanks I'm so happy you're enjoying it...It's been a lot of fun to write for you...
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 5 Dances with Dogs
Can our luck get any worse? I'm thinking yep, if you've got anything to do with it Jude. Awesome chapter - could see it all playing out right here in my head. Update as soon as possible, loving more of this!!
Author's Response: Lou......thank you for all the lovely stars......you are so kind... I did like this one....a bit darker....and the next two are a bit worse...but it's always darkest before the dawn.......and Dean had better be outta there before dawn!!!! Always worried about my descriptive skills...so thanks so much
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 5 Dances with Dogs
lol, rump roast. Poor Dean...wow, Jude...I'm lovin' this. Can't wait to see how they get the Impala back!
Author's Response: Thanks, Shiny....so very much.......it gets a bit darker after this.......but I promise SHE won't become a recycling block!!!
Reviewer: darthwriter (Signed) · Date: 15/10/07 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 4 Crushing My Love!
What an intersting story so far. Poor Dean! Oh, the spoons, whereever did you come up with the idea for this story. I just started writing my first story and just think it is so cool that people have written so many. Would love to have half your talent, thanks for sharing. kari
Author's Response: Kari, how sweet of you.... I only started writing in May so I'm pretty new too.......This one came from me loving Metallicar as much as Dean does... Vanessa, the young writer the story is dedicated to wanted Dean worried, Dean hurt, Sam's bloody handprint somewhere, and for Dean to use a SPOON in a different manner.......I figured losing the Impala would get things started and from there the story formed itself......Glad you're enjoying it so far...
Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 14/10/07 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 1 Wish You Were Here!
Oh, now I see where the title comes in, (for some reason I was thinking of Orange Crush, the soda?) I do hope that those junkyard jerks get what's coming to them, and the cop who had the Impala towed as abandoned must be in on the scheme, too, right? Loved visualizing Dean's acrobatic climb up and over the fence, and landing on the tire pile. Sue
Author's Response: yep, Sue...you know our hero... anything for Metallicar...... It started out silly and a silly title and chapter titles seemed appropriate Glad you're enjoying it so far
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 14/10/07 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 4 Crushing My Love!
Soooo not going anywhere near that bitch! I’d give my left nut for some insulated wire cutters right now! LMAO that was frickin funny! This chapter was really funny! I'd love to be the one to patch up that booboo on Dean's butt lol! Ok all caught up now!! You'd better update soon! lol or I may have to hound you! I love you Mom hope to catch a chat with you sometime soon...good to see you posting again!
Author's Response: Hound me like the Hound of the Baskervilles at the junkyard??? Thanks, Gen, gald you reviewed ...i miss you
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 14/10/07 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 3 Spooning in the Backseat with Dean
lol anotherhilarious chapter! Sitting Dean between the two kids...hehehe had me giggling up a storm! You had me worried with the title for this chapter tho...very clever...spooning in the back seat lol! Okay on to the next chappy!
Author's Response: New version of 'spooning' heheheh.... wee'd all kill to do the real thing in a backseat with that dollboy...hey??? Glad it made you giggle chapt 5 comes Thursday
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 14/10/07 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 2 The Scarlet Letter
lol Man Halloween really isn't Dean's day! man you'd better not hurt the Impala Mom or you'll have a LOT of angry readers! This one included! That car is almost as sexy as Dean is! Okay moving on to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Now, Gen, you KNOW that I love that car..........I have the big metal model I won as a centerpiece in my writing area........... I'd start campaigning against ever celebrating that holiday EVER again..
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 14/10/07 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 1 Wish You Were Here!
Oh No! dun dun duuuun! lol Oh boy do I feel bad for the person who took Dean's baby with his peanut M&Ms in it too boot! You know that dirty faced little one at the beginning was Audrey right lol! Can't wait to see where you go with this! Great job so far Mom!
Author's Response: Thanks, so much, Gen......yeah, can't Dean not wanting to kick some butt on this quest...... And NO that was not our Audrey....
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 14/10/07 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 4 Crushing My Love!
"Your jeans on the other may have died a valiant death!” Lol. They soooo need to save the damsel. And if the dog is a female, Dean should be alright, i'm sure his charm works on the furry and four legged one too...
Author's Response: thanks, Fredo, for the read and review......this is one of those few tales where being positivley gorgeous and charming will not work to our sweet Dean's advantage....between OLD crotchety librarians, yucky, sleazy junkyard guys, screaming kids and a mean ol' junkyard puppy...poor Dean has his work cut out for him...... WINCHESTER LUCK, you know.....
Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 13/10/07 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 4 Crushing My Love!
Well as long as it's not his right nut. Hehehehe.....great chapter.
Author's Response: we do like Dean a little nuts and with his little nuts intact......Thanks so much for floowing my story, Laura
Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 13/10/07 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 3 Spooning in the Backseat with Dean
LOL....preschool claws....and here we thought Dean liked children. Poor guy getting beat on with a wooden spoon (I can sympathize). Great chapter. Laura
Author's Response: thanks, laura, for not only taking the time to read but also making the time to review.... Dean, I think, likes kids but finds they usually try his patience... he marched=s to the beat of a different drummer (NOT the one using the SPOON)
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 13/10/07 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 4 Crushing My Love!
Yup, I wanted angst, Hurt!Dean--with grunting, groaning, and moaning--oh and a back arch or two. Dean finding a creative use for a spoon. And Sam leaving a bloody handprint somewhere. LOL I've got a weird, weird mind. And I'm so very glad YOU don't mind that, Jude.
Author's Response: ooo, forgot the bloody handprint........... probably Ch 8 or 9........... Glad you seem content so far, Vanessa.....should see next chapter on Thursday..... and actually the weird mind is very atuned with mine.....have had many friends astounded by my rather bloody weird Mesmerized..........I guess grannies aren't supposed to think like that!!!
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 13/10/07 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 4 Crushing My Love!
Too funny how the spoon keeps popping up.. lol thanks for the read Jude - K
Author's Response: Well, Vanessa wanted her spoon....think there's a little Missouri Moseley lurking under those blond curls of hers...more spoon to come..... Thanks for continuing to read along with me, Kelly
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 13/10/07 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 4 Crushing My Love!
lol cujo is looking for supper rump steak winchester style. Good update Jude
Author's Response: Yep, Lorraine...... a sweet juicy rump roast..... POOR pained-in-the-ass DEAN......
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 13/10/07 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 4 Crushing My Love!
OMG! You mutilated Dean's BUTT?? LOL Umm--ouch! I can just hear the grunting and groaning now. I love your update.
Author's Response: So very happy you like YOUR story, Vanessa.......next comes doggie dealings ....and then ch 6 .......Ta da!!!! The Return of the Dreaded SPOON.........
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 13/10/07 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 4 Crushing My Love!
Feel.......sick..can't.......breath! You're gonna do WHAT to the car????? This is great and I look forward to every update so bring em' on dude!
Author's Response: It actually hurt to write that crushing line.......like I couldn't breathe...... Next update should be around Thursday...I think.....I'm glad you all seem to be enjoying it so far...
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