Reviewer: bhoney (Signed) · Date: 28/01/09 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oh, this was just heartbreaking. I've thought about this too, that Dean surely expected he'd have his dad by his side when he had to face Hell. Poor Dean, without John OR Sam...Good job with this!
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 21/12/07 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 1
I think you really captured the way Dean felt in your words and I could tell by the use of words that you really thought the whole thing out. And what he did for Sam, you just know that Dean felt it was his duty to do that for his brother like his dad did for him.
Author's Response: Sharky, Thank you for reviewing this little piece of mine... I was so haunted by that pained, heartsick look on Dean's face in that show......This was just what i thought might be going through his mind... A lot of people think Dean runs on instinct only...I see him as thinking all the time but his family comes first and duty to family is everything to him....:0) jude
Reviewer: elprimouno (Signed) · Date: 02/12/07 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 1
Beutiful! Allmost like poetry from a non-believer. To give one's life to save other and having the hope to still meet another. I do like your writing.
Author's Response: thank you, my dear friend..... You know you will always be El Primo with me...... Kind words like yours make my day!!! :0) jude
Reviewer: kansasangel (Signed) · Date: 27/11/07 06:40 AM · On: Chapter 1
Im now an emotional wreck . that was so powerful I cried like a baby ! loved it your really good at the emotional stuff keep writing . I ll just get a tissue !
Author's Response: Oh, Angel, I'm so sorry.....I didn't do it to be mean honestly.......It's just the way I read that 'broken' look on Dean's face........Can I ship you a box of Kleenex???
Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 15/11/07 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 1
I think your fic just helped me to one of those light-bulb moments... I definitely noticed the different responses from the boys to their father, but what a fantastic, insightful, heartbreaking explanation. You get right inside Dean's head here, the way he sees his father as an infallible hero and is so oblivious to his own sacrifices. Absolutely bought the line "fighter father, solider son" and can see it coming from Dean's mouth. Loved how raw the monologue was - you just know it is never going to leave the confines of Deans head- the admission and plea at the end reminds me a little of when Jensens voice breaks when he leaves a message, asking for help, on Johns voicemail during the episode Home.
Author's Response: Thank you for your very detailed review CW.....I actually chose Dean's "HOME" phone call as the theme for my "Thank God For Voicemail" drabble......To me these reflect the only chinks I've really seen Dean exhibit in that protective armor he has worn day after day.......
Reviewer: zerosbabe (Signed) · Date: 27/10/07 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 1
great job and so true to what he had to be thinking
Author's Response: Thank you so very much for taking the time to read this little thought bubble.....ZB one of those things that just nag at you til you put them into words
Reviewer: supernaturalpass (Signed) · Date: 27/10/07 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 1
Don't know how I missed this one Jude but it was great! This story was realistic, we all know how much Dean doesn't like to be alone and you did an excellent job with that!Great story Jude!!
Author's Response: Jennifer, Thank you so very much for reading it NOW.....I really appreciate hearing your opinion of it....... Really do see Dean as having a fragile side somewhere in there........ Knew he wanted to save Sam but really figured he'd be a companion to John at same time..
Author's Response: Jennifer, Thank you so very much for reading it NOW.....I really appreciate hearing your opinion of it....... Really do see Dean as having a fragile side somewhere in there........ Knew he wanted to save Sam but really figured he'd be a companion to John at same time..
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 1
I'm so with you on the tortured eyes! I'd never considered Dean's looking forward to meeting up with John in Hell as a perk, only in his conviction that saving Sam was a relief that he did not regret. Loved your take that he and John could rule the roost down there - and I bet they would! You painted a sad picture of Dean alone for eternity, revealing a fragile brother and son. Awesome job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Cookie, for the lovely review........I think Dean is a lot more fragile than what we see on that "I'm fine!" surface of his.... everytime I see that episode it moves me to tears....It's that 'little boy lost' look that kills me......he was so broken when he knew John was in Hell....why would he NOT be overjoyed to see him FREE?? i think this is why.....
Reviewer: bunnykins (Signed) · Date: 16/10/07 09:59 AM · On: Chapter 1
Yeah, I wondered about Dean being alone in hell too. Good story, thanks.
Author's Response: thanks, bunnykins, so happy you enjoyed it ............ :0) jude
Reviewer: darthwriter (Signed) · Date: 15/10/07 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow, just Wow, i never even thought of Dean thinking his Dad would be waiting for him. Once again I am just blown away by your awesome insight into the boys. Could you possibly suggested other writers that i could read, it would be so helpful? Thanks again, and keep on writing and i'll keep on reading! Kari
Author's Response: once again, Kari, thank you for being so kind and reading and reviewing.......... :0) jude
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 05/10/07 02:56 AM · On: Chapter 1
Aww, that was really good, you have Dean down to a tee. Whenever you see a glimpse of his vulnerable side, you just wanna hug dont you:(
Author's Response: I felt like he desperately needed a hug in that scene...could not believe the confusion in his eyes..such pain.....tore me up.... Glad you enjoyed it, Schelz.... :0) jude
Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 02/10/07 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 1
Such a great portrayal of Dean and how he feels, the things in him we don't see sometimes, but pop out anyway. Laura
Author's Response: Dean may not say it in words, or sometimes even facially, but Jensen sure can reveal the turmoil of his character with those awesome eyes...Never seen so much pain and confusion in in his eyes before........ Really tore at you to think beneath the surface. Thanks so much, Laura for your kind review, :0) jude
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 01/10/07 12:48 AM · On: Chapter 1
Very intersting idea, Jude. i'd really never given much thought to Dean thinking he would be seeing his dad in hell...very cool that someone did!! glad to see you posting again, bambers;)
Author's Response: Bambers, Thanks for the read and review....always appreciated... You should know by now that my brain is wired a bit oddly ........I see Dean a bit differently than some people do........hmmm ...***usually seeing handcuffs in my view somehow***sighs.........
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 30/09/07 10:32 PM · On: Chapter 1
How sad. Poor Dean is so frightened and vulnerable. An excellent piece! Wonderful expression of thoughts and emotions!
Author's Response: Thanks, Shannon......so tickled that you liked it..... wasn't sure if i captured HIM...had told Bayre this had been bouncing around my blonde brain for awhile and she kicked me in the shins and pushed me to give it a shot! I don't think of Dean as a scaredy cat but he'd have to be a damned fool NOT to fear hell !!! And our hero is anything but a fool !!
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 30/09/07 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow- awesome drabble- and you can definately know that Dean was probably thinking that his Dad would be waiting on him when he got to hell. Not that it would have changed what he did- but still, so sad! You did a beautiful job Jude!
Author's Response: Thanks so terribly much, Tree, for finding this little piece and making the time to R & R.... Just one of those crazy things that got stuck in my odd little brain....might be the blonde showing its silly little head........Dean knew he had to SAVE Sam but after seeing earlier shows and Dean's inability to accept what his Dad had done to save HIM..I think he would have seen the CR Demon deal as dual duty...saving Sam and trying to make it up to his Dad for the sacrifice.... We all know he would have done it for Sam ALONE...but I still think John was like a fringe benefit.... Thank you so very much for your kind praise
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 30/09/07 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 1
good job here Jude. And nice to see you posting again.
Author's Response: Thanks, Fredo, hopefully another story will post tomorrow....for Vanessa... I'm happy to be posting again too...
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 30/09/07 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 1
Nice job Jude, I like how you put this together, especially that last line - Thanks for the read and it's nice to see you posting - K
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to R&R, Kelly...... ..yeah..work's been busy and what with the Challenge, the auction piece i owed Vanessa and a 'new' hunt I'm working on this piece haunted me enough to do a quick drabble..... Even Dean has some fear buried down deep!!
Reviewer: IHeartSam (Signed) · Date: 30/09/07 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 1
hey i really liked deans thoughts-very interesting insight! good job!
Author's Response: thanks, aliyssa, for not only reading but taking the time to review..................as I've mentioned Dean felt not only responsible for Sam but for John in so many ways...... Glad you enjoyed my off the wall thoughts.....
Reviewer: gaelicspirit (Signed) · Date: 29/09/07 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 1
Jude -- I hadn't really thought about the fact that Dean might consider Hell not such a bad place to be if his father had been there... what a concept! Nicely done. :)
Author's Response: Yep, what can I say....my REAL name is Abby.....Abby Normal............ Unlike other normal folks my weird brain spins off on different tangents.........I just felt Dean saw a 'need' not only for saving Sam but saving or at least providing John with some form of backup ....just as in 'hunting' Thank you so very, very much for making the time to review my piece
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 29/09/07 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 1
Very nice look into the mind of our fave hero brother....it'e true now that I think of it he really doesn't smile as widely as he probably should when he sees his dad. Great job always nice to see the inner workings of the sexy Winchester mind...lol
Author's Response: No matter how many times I've seen that episode, Gen, that "look" just makes me feel as if there is just a bit of mixed emotions at play in Dean's head and heart Thanks for reviewing xoxoxo
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 29/09/07 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oh wow! This is incredible, Jude! I love it!
Author's Response: Shiny, so glad you saw this little piece and took the time to not only read but review and even give me some SHINY new stars..... You're always a sweetheart....This thing has been stuck in my head since the season finale...glad you enjoyed
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