Reviewer: badassmcgee (Signed) · Date: 27/01/09 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 1: A Fated Reunion
Great job....can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks! So glad to see you're still on board. Peanut M&M's to you!
Reviewer: badassmcgee (Signed) · Date: 27/01/09 05:27 PM · On: Prologue: Blood Ritual
Pretty good my friend. Your wording is so beautiful however I feel at times you start to slack and the story seems quite amatuer. For the most part though I love it. It has made me want to read more which is saying alot because I hate reading. Well done ol' chap!
Author's Response: Hey bam, love the name by the way! Thanks for your review and for taking the time to read, especially since you don't like to read. Sorry about the amateur bit, I guess it's because I'm a novice at writing. Hopefully, that will improve with time.
Reviewer: kitten25 (Signed) · Date: 10/01/09 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 12: Are We There Yet?
Just to add, I'll be putting you in my favourites, it's nice to find a good romance once in a while.
Author's Response: Ooohh! I'm very honored to be added to your favourites. Thank you sooooo much! Shannon
Reviewer: kitten25 (Signed) · Date: 10/01/09 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 12: Are We There Yet?
I'm sooo loyal to Dean/Camyll series by FantasyCatcher but ooooh, I'm now a fan of ASHER! You've pulled it off, her characterization and interaction with the boys was incredible. This story was like a book I couldn't put down, I think Asher is so nice and she's a real person. Fantasy recommended you to me and I'm not mad I listened, well worth the read. Maybe you and Fantasy should do something together. lol obviously without Camyll and Asher, wouldn't want them wrestling over Dean, though I'm sure he wouldn't mind if they agreed to do it in a mud pool. Loved it! Kitten x
Author's Response: Alli, Thanks for the review! Peanut M&M's to you! I'm so glad you've embraced Asher. She's a combination of my sister and my daughter and her little sister Allie is my younger daughter so it's easy to make her real. I'll have to check out fantasy's Camyll. I think even Sam would enjoy two beautiful women wrestling in a tub of mud (or maybe oil). Hee! Thanks again for giving me a chance! Hugs & Holy Water, Shannon
Reviewer: violettestars (Signed) · Date: 13/07/08 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 12: Are We There Yet?
I really liked this. I can't wait to read more from you.
Author's Response: Hi dawn! I'm glad you liked it! The fact that you want more tells me I'm doing something right. Peanut M&M's to you hun!
Reviewer: danny (Signed) · Date: 30/06/08 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 4: Confession
ah poor sam, how could dean bring up jess after everything he's been through that was just cruel, but loving the story. Danny xxxx
Author's Response: Yeah, it was cruel, but Dean's lashing out. Sam's a big boy---he can take it. He's every bit as self-sacrificing as his big brother. Thanks for the review! I hope you continue to enjoy it. don't worry about Sam. It gets better.
Reviewer: violettestars (Signed) · Date: 29/06/08 06:16 PM · On: Prologue: Blood Ritual
oooh this is very good! On to the next chapter! :)
Author's Response: So glad you like it! I hope you continue to enjoy it. I've been engrossed in your work also.
Reviewer: EmSyd (Signed) · Date: 22/02/08 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 12: Are We There Yet?
Brilliant.
Author's Response: Brilliant? Gee, thanks Emma. I'm really glad you liked it!
Reviewer: PoseidonsChickadee (Signed) · Date: 12/01/08 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 4: Confession
*sniffles* Awww! Gah! Thank you for giving me the right to kick this Dean's ass. Hell I wanna kick his butt in general, nice as it is, for being such a poophead. Bet she's tougher than he gives her credit. That's the thing with Dean, he puts people on pedastals. On the other side, when he gives them a chance he lets them go it on their own like a good mama hen lol So hopefully he gives her a chance. Again GREAT characterization. Dean was good, but Sam was terrific. I always seem to find Dean as usually the better written. It's rare to find, at least for me, to find Sam as good or better. Sam was damn good. I could just see his 'angry-huffy face'. It's two steps up from his annoyed-huffy and one a half from his, 'I'm sogoing to kick your ass'. You had every bit of tension of that in your story, I could just SEE it. Great job!
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks so much for your kind words. I think it's easy to write Dean because he's so in your face. Sam is a little more difficult for me. I'm tickled that you think I did him justice! I hope you continue to enjoy the story!
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 10/01/08 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 10: Aftermath
A great read Shannon. You're great at setting the scene, loved all the detail in the hospital. Wish I could do that. Lol I was worried for a mintue when Shane was questioning Dean. Having two big brother's of my own I know how protective they can be. Luckily for Dean, Shane remembered him as a hero! Good chappy hun. Schelz
Author's Response: Thanks schelz! I don't have older brothers, but my younger brothers were overprotective enough that it didn't matter. No matter how heart-broken Asher was when Dean left, I knew a brother wouldn't forget that he'd saved her from far worse than a broken heart.
Reviewer: PoseidonsChickadee (Signed) · Date: 02/01/08 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 3 A View of Normal
Grrrr. Dean. Love that boy to pieces. Great character to watch (aside from Jensen Ackles salty goodness-ness) and a wonderful one to right. But that boy deserves a swift kick in the arse sometimes.
Author's Response: Yeah, he definitely is a bit thick headed at times. You can do the honors with the swift kick. Thanks again for staying with me and leaving your golden nuggets!
Reviewer: PoseidonsChickadee (Signed) · Date: 02/01/08 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 2: The Family Secret
Great characterization. The mannerisms of the brother were really good, down pat. As were the words.
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks for the compliment! That's the best thing anyone could say! M&M's to you!
Reviewer: PoseidonsChickadee (Signed) · Date: 02/01/08 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 1: A Fated Reunion
Oh gosh. I love this. It was so serious, with the vision (which by the way, Yay! Sammy) and then you put in that profile bit. And while I should have been all worried about the monster you had me laughing. Then you had be all wistful and sighing as Dean regretted Sam's lack of life while forgetting that he'd barely been a kid too. Just like they do in the show. Very nice. And like I thought. You answered over HALF of my questions.That's very good. I like drama and angst (Sometimes). But I do love drama and being kept guessing as much as the next person, sometimes more, but I can't stand it when a good story leave me hanging. This is a good story. Ya didn't leave me hanging. Yay you! lolMy only problem? Shortness. But that's just cause I like it.
Author's Response: I'm so glad I'm getting your questions answered. Can't do them all in one chapter---that wouldn't be any fun. Hopefully, more answers to come. I think even when things get bad a little humor is life's defense, especially with our boys. So happy you think I did them justice!
Reviewer: PoseidonsChickadee (Signed) · Date: 02/01/08 09:16 PM · On: Prologue: Blood Ritual
Whoa. Whoa. Whoa. Me likey lol I'm ALL kinds of confused but I can truly say. I liked it. It was very well written. I have questions, but I won't ask them yet. Want to see if they get answered next so I don't have to ask and sound like an over eager puppy lol
Author's Response: I'm so glad you likey! I hope I'm able to answer your questions as the story progresses. Thanks for reading and reviewing! Cookies to you!
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 29/11/07 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 9: Life Blood
Great chaper Shannon. I was biting away my nails, dying to get to the end and see what was going to happen. So glad Asher and the tot are okay! I knew they'd save her, it's the Winchester way:) Schelz
Author's Response: Thanks for the read and the review! I hope you still have fingernails left. :-) Winchesters aren't always able to save everyone, but this time they had to triumph!
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 29/11/07 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 8 Unnatural
I was smiling non stop at the start of this chapter, the whole family thing is so sweet. Love the cliff hanger!!! Great chapter Shan:) Schelz
Author's Response: Thanks Schelz! Glad I could make you smile!
Reviewer: garvaldmains (Signed) · Date: 28/11/07 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 12: Are We There Yet?
Brilliant. so nice for d to have some sort of normality! Dix
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and the lovely review! I'm glad that you agree Dean needs a touch of normal in his life.
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 21/11/07 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 7: I Need a Hero
Gotta love Dean, definitely a hero, no doubt. Liked this chap, we got to see a different side to Asher, got to preview her past. Allie is just adorable:) Schelz
Author's Response: Yeah, gotta love our hero, Dean. At some point it had to come out how he and Asher met. I'm so glad you like Allie. The bit with the string is actually how my brother learned to walk. Thanks for the lovely review!
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 20/11/07 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 12: Are We There Yet?
I like this chapter, Ilike the whole story and I'm glad Dean found someone he loved.
Author's Response: Thanks you for reading and reviewing my first solo story. Your kind words mean so much!
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 20/11/07 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 11: No Escape From Normal
I really like this chapter and I'm glad Asher was alright.
Author's Response: Dean deserved to catch a break. Thaks for sticking with me!
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 20/11/07 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 10: Aftermath
This chapter is good lovin it.
Author's Response: Thanks! Cookies for the review! :-)
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 20/11/07 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 9: Life Blood
This chapter is really interesting, I wonder what's going to happen to Asher.
Author's Response: Yay! You're still reading! *evil laugh* Asher....hmmm...life or death?
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 20/11/07 01:15 PM · On: Chapter 8 Unnatural
This chapter is really eye grabbing and i love it.
Author's Response: Oooohh! Eye grabbing---thanks a jillion! I'm delighted that you are still enjoying this. You're reading faster than I can respond.
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 20/11/07 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 7: I Need a Hero
I like the way Sam felt like he had to protect Asher and Allie from the goddess.
Author's Response: First and foremost, Dean is a hunter and protector. And he has a vested interest in these girls. Thanks for the review! M&M's to you!
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 20/11/07 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 6: Mother and Child
i like the emotional side to Dean.
Author's Response: Thanks! Emotional Dean is good for a change.
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