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Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 09/10/07 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 2 A hunt of my own.

Wow you certainly know how to crank up the tension louy. Well done Lorraine

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 06/10/07 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 3 Enough for one lifetime

yeah, i think John could really do something like that... Nice story, keeping an eye open to catch the next one...

Author's Response: Yeah, I reckon John is where Dean gets his dark side. Thanks for the review fredo.

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 06/10/07 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 2 A hunt of my own.

i like how it matches up with Bearer, very nicely done. Straight to last chappy...

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 06/10/07 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 1 And the thunderheads rolled in.

ooch, that hurts. Emotionaly broken, and now phisically. That's bad on so many levels...

Author's Response: Hope thats 'bad but in a good way' lol Thanks for the review fredo, sequel is planned out already.

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 05/10/07 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 3 Enough for one lifetime

"He was there, and he was open to it, and he was bleeding emotion like it was his life’s blood."

That's a terrific line bulletbabe. Enjoyed the whole story, thank you! 



Author's Response: Very glad you liked it ciel, started on a the sequel to 'Bearer' and there may well be some references to 'Meeting' in there. Thanks for the reviews, they mean the world to me.

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 05/10/07 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 2 A hunt of my own.

It's great to know the backstory for "Bearer" Reading on....

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 05/10/07 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 1 And the thunderheads rolled in.

Wow. Fabulous description of the emotional build up for both John and Dean - and awesome cliffie! I'm reading straight on....

Reviewer: bunnykins (Signed) · Date: 02/10/07 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 3 Enough for one lifetime

An interesting story, I really enjoyed reading. Keep on writing it's a talent I wish I had. 

Author's Response: Thanks bunnykins, If you keep reading, I'll keep writing.

Reviewer: Armaita (Signed) · Date: 30/09/07 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 3 Enough for one lifetime

1. Yay for real Winchester hugs! (Have you noticed that the brothers don't ever hug? That it's only a father-son thing?)

2. John is scary when he goes up against Jacob, but I still found this believable. Great job! Keep writing!



Author's Response: Yeah, I've noticed that, the boys only hug when one of them is dead, how sad is that. lol Glad you liked this, thanks for the review and the rating, it's what keeps me going!

Reviewer: Armaita (Signed) · Date: 30/09/07 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 1 And the thunderheads rolled in.

Like this so far. I agree...Dean has to have a breaking point, and it doesn't surprise me at all that John could push him past it. (All the Winchester men are way too stubborn, each in their own way!)



Author's Response: I agree, John would probably be the only person, who was able to push Dean to that point. Glad this worked for you and a huge thankyou for the rating!

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 30/09/07 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 1 And the thunderheads rolled in.

Just caught up with this one.  Great write!  It was the perfect companion piece to "Bearer".

Author's Response: Glad you liked it V. and glad you're back, we missed you!

Reviewer: heather03nmg (Signed) · Date: 30/09/07 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 3 Enough for one lifetime

Wow, another awesome story.

Loved this little add on to your other fic.

Amazing job writing John, I loved seeing him in overprotective dad mode.

And you wrote in a father-son hug. That was such a sweet aww moment.

Look forward to reading more fics from you. You have such talent! 



Author's Response: Ahhhw, thanks. I loved writing this one, as I love John as much as the boys. Glad the overprotective dad thing worked for you, I was wondering how that would go down. And thanks for the review and the rating Heather, they mean the world!

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 30/09/07 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 3 Enough for one lifetime

short but very good!

Author's Response: Yeah, not sure if it should have been longer, I like fast paced stories but sometimes I rush things. Ah well, still learning! Thanks for the comment, I apreciate it.

Reviewer: StrigoiVii (Signed) · Date: 30/09/07 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 3 Enough for one lifetime

Good story.  John always kicks ass!

Author's Response: Two reviews for the price of one. I agree John always kicks ass and I can feel more kick ass John comming on pretty soon. Thanks for the review Strigo.

Reviewer: StrigoiVii (Signed) · Date: 30/09/07 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 3 Enough for one lifetime

Good story.  John always kicks ass!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 30/09/07 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 3 Enough for one lifetime

So great!  I love the confrontation between Jacob and John as much as the tenderness John showed Dean.  Both illustrate the passion in him.

Author's Response: I'm a bit of a John fan, and I think JDM has done a fantastic job showing his weakness and passion on the show. Glad you thought this was believable. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 30/09/07 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 3 Enough for one lifetime

WOW! Awesome, bullet! I love how you portray John in this story, as it seems so much truer to what he seems like on the show. A lot of people portray him as downright mean sometimes...but you really got it down! The torn emotions: he wants Mary there, because he doesn't know how to talk to his kids and raise them right, but he has to protect them and make sure they can survive in a world that no one was ever meant to survive...it's really cool how you show that. Aaaanyway...love it, as always. Great job! Haha...no cliffy this time...of course, I'm still waiting for you to finish that other story...

Author's Response: Thanks Shiny, loved writing this one. Damn, Dean's still flying out the window isn't he, better get on that one!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 30/09/07 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 2 A hunt of my own.

Boy, did you fool me!  I thought the hunter would be a good guy, who just did something foolish to make Dean go back to hunting with his father.  I didn't think of the hunter being a creep out to get Dean from the start.  Great idea!  Reel me in---I'm hooked.

Author's Response: Yeah I love doing that, twisting the plot is almost as good as a cliffy - but not quite. Thanks for the review Shannon

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 30/09/07 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 1 And the thunderheads rolled in.

Very good beginning!  I love the way you express the characters' emotions, especially the line where Dean hates every person he passes because of their normal lives.

I like when John pulls out a picture of his young family and wonders why he's alone.

My guess is that Dean's beat down will be intervened by the new hunter.



Author's Response: You're not wrong, but not all is as it seems! Thanks for the review Shannon.

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 29/09/07 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 2 A hunt of my own.

Very interesting. I like the Jacob character. Well, not exactly "like" but I like how you wrote him:)

Author's Response: Thanks for that, I'm glad you thought Jacob was believable, always hard writing made up characters and I'm still experimenting! Thanks again.

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 29/09/07 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 1 And the thunderheads rolled in.

Aah, the angst. That was a good place to break the chapter. Liking it so far.

Author's Response: Only one more to go, Quite a short story really but last chapter's the doozie. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 29/09/07 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 2 A hunt of my own.

Another cliffie? ANOTHER ONE?!?! Whyyyyyyy??? *wails in torment* Pleeeeaaasseee put up the next chapter soooon!!!!!!!!!! I'm dyin' from all these cliffies....

Author's Response: Breath Shiny, breath!!!! lol Promise the last chap will be up in a day or so and all will be revealed. Thanks for the rating.

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 28/09/07 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 1 And the thunderheads rolled in.

AHHHHH!!!!! You cliffie MASTERMIND!!!!!!! Lou, I swear...why do you do this to me? You write this fantastic, attention-grabbing, hook-line-sinker thingy and then you leave me out to DRY!!!!! *glares*  Grrrrr....write more, or no cookies for you!!!!!
Argh, I'm sorry! Cookies in abundance!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Gimme cookies now or he hangs there in the air indefinately!!!lol Thanks Shiny!



Author's Response: Promise I wont do that to him, even as a HD fan,  there's only so many beatings the poor boy can take!

Reviewer: devonshire (Signed) · Date: 28/09/07 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 1 And the thunderheads rolled in.

thank you so much, Lou :) i really do love this story, love seeing a bit of dean and john after sam left. keep up the great work!!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it Maggie. And thanks, yet again for all your efforts to help me out.

Reviewer: StrigoiVii (Signed) · Date: 28/09/07 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 1 And the thunderheads rolled in.

LIke it so far, looking forward to reading more.



Author's Response: Thanks Strigo. Keep watching this space, next chap will only be a day or so.

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