Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 18/03/09 02:17 AM · On: Chapter 3 Enough for one lifetime
Thank you and you JOHN WINCHESTER. As a character with a bit of heart after your wifes death is understandable , but to over power and use your kids is low. When DANGER ATTACKS a WINCHESTER or any other well know to a WINCHESTER. Then you are an arcangel awaiting for further instruction of civil distruction against YELLOW EYE.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 18/03/09 01:36 AM · On: Chapter 2 A hunt of my own.
This bastered is seriously going for a worse betting and not from HELL either . . . it would be in a form of a huge ass bare, mixed in with the flavor of a GREAT WHITE that has not been feed nor slept, and last but not least a little bit of demon jin n' juice.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 18/03/09 12:23 AM · On: Chapter 1 And the thunderheads rolled in.
This is simply un-unfair dilema that DEAN has to take all for the cause of his father being a bigger jerk and throwing out SAM when all he ever wanted was answers.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 24/01/09 03:03 AM · On: Chapter 2 A hunt of my own.
This New Guy, is realy become to be a little Bitch, but I like that. I dought that this character knows not to screw masivly with a Winchester AGAIN!
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 23/01/09 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 1 And the thunderheads rolled in.
An extense boudry with siblings can go far, but how far will Dean allow it to puncture his feelings towards the father.
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 08/09/08 12:42 AM · On: Chapter 3 Enough for one lifetime
Wow..... I thought John was going to beat the crap out of Jacob, but shoot him...? Not that I could blame him. Jacob obviously didn't care about Dean's life - and let's face it, if the demon he was after was that evil, Dean's chance at survival probably equalled that of a snowball in hell. No wonder John did what he did. Great moment between him and Dean, though. It must have been hard for John to bring up Mary, and admit to his son that he was struggling as a parent. But I think he needed to do it to bridge that gap between himself and Dean, and get his son to listen to him. And stop Dean from being suckered into a hunt that would leave him either dead or seriously damaged. Great work. Thanks for sharing this. Jules
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 08/09/08 12:33 AM · On: Chapter 2 A hunt of my own.
Oh, no - the bar fight was a set-up to get someone to do the dangerous work for this Jacob bloke. And he sounds like a real piece of work. John's not going to be happy..... Jules
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 08/09/08 12:29 AM · On: Chapter 1 And the thunderheads rolled in.
That was a beautiful line - Now he sat hunched in the safety of the black car, looking at the image of the three most beloved people he had ever known, and wondered, how come he was sitting alone? You've captured Dean's pent-up emotions really well. All that resentment he must have been carrying immediately after Sam left, just waiting to come boiling out. And sure enough, it did, with devastating results. Hope there's an eyewitness to the beating, and a Good Samaritan to haul the mongrel off Dean before he does some serious damage. Jules
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 01/01/08 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 3 Enough for one lifetime
Lout. Oh John's crying, that just breaks my heart! He could so have been a real good Dad but he's broken! And they're hugging oh Tears! And the killer line? 'Dean stared at his Father, eyes wide' oh and a girl could be lost forever in those eyes! Loved it Lout, just loved it! Full of tortured pleasure Bev xxx
Author's Response: Again I agree, John could have had it all going on, just had too many issues of his own, breaks the heart...Thanks for the reviews Bev, you rock!
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 01/01/08 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 2 A hunt of my own.
'Dean felt his ribs grind under the violent onslaught' Ah crepetic pain is music to my twisted soul! Oh God this Bastard if after our boy! Where's Papa Winchester, we need a rescue here? This is compelling Lout, reading on! Bev xx
Author's Response: Crepetic or just good old crunchy bones, both work well for me...lol
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 01/01/08 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 1 And the thunderheads rolled in.
Bullet. God I love the raw pain of this piece. 'brimming over with inner rage' I can see those green eyes smouldering and it's a beautiful sight! Then you go and hit me with a 'heavy lidded lop sided grin'! It's more than I deserve Hun but thanks! Reading on! bev xx
Author's Response: ...green eyes...oooh (sighs wisfully)...it's all flooding back...lol
Reviewer: clclemmons (Signed) · Date: 13/12/07 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 3 Enough for one lifetime
Lou, another gem. You know i LOVE me some John Winchester. Nobody messes with his boys. I know he would kill for them. Absolutely fabulous. Crystal
Author's Response: Know what you mean. Always thought John was a whole lot darker than any other Winchester and I do love him for it...Thanks for the review Crystal
Reviewer: garvaldmains (Signed) · Date: 28/11/07 04:25 AM · On: Chapter 3 Enough for one lifetime
you are so good! Shite, I should be working - I'm as obsessed as you are! Dix
Author's Response: I've been in trouble at work myself over reading he he...for me it was devonshire's stories - check them out if you get a chance, they're awesome! Especially the 'Shadow stalker' series!!!! Thanks again for the R&R Di, you've made my day!
Reviewer: Rae666 (Signed) · Date: 16/11/07 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 3 Enough for one lifetime
Ooo, brilliant story... :) I'm really excited about reading further into your imagination with the sequel and your other stories. Thanks for the great read!
Author's Response: Thanks again Rae - I hope you continue to enjoy!
Reviewer: Rae666 (Signed) · Date: 16/11/07 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 2 A hunt of my own.
I decided to read this one before I went any further with your sequel and you have me seriously intrigued... I really love your writing, you're descriptive in a non-boring way, really poetic and I love it :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much Rae, it's always nice to get reviews but it's great to get one from someone whose work I love. Thank you!
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 09/11/07 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 3 Enough for one lifetime
got worried with the" cold black eyes" description....relieved to see the only thing possessing John was the need to protect his offspring
Author's Response: You are the first person to pick up on the cold black eyes line - which is nice because I had thought about having a posession subplot in the mix but thought better of it. I guess I believe that sometimes the worst demon is the one that's already inside us, and wakes up when we need it the most. And John's personal demon is the kick ass kind.lol Thanks for the review and the stars Jude. They mean a ton to me!
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 09/11/07 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 2 A hunt of my own.
so kindly jacob....isn't......poor Dean....fallen into a trap and not even aware of it....Thank God, as usual, for Bobby Singer...........
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 09/11/07 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 1 And the thunderheads rolled in.
oh boy, poor baby...as if a hangover wouldn't be enough trouble for our drunken young hunter....
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 04:58 AM · On: Chapter 3 Enough for one lifetime
And everyone was worried Sam would go darkside!! LOVED the darkside John protecting his boys. "You were going to do nothing, while that thing sank into my boy and took hold, leaving him helpless and scared" - this is where I thought "o-oh" Jacob's in major trouble! Go menacing!john! Well written.
Author's Response: Thanks Cookie6 - it's always a great compliment when readers are convinced by the story. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 15/10/07 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 3 Enough for one lifetime
Loved that Bullet can't wait for the next - K
Author's Response: Thanks K, Started to write the sequel to 'Bearer' already! Might just make them all a series. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 15/10/07 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 2 A hunt of my own.
Really liking this bullet. Great job. - K
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 15/10/07 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 1 And the thunderheads rolled in.
Great start bullet, moving on.. K
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 11/10/07 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 3 Enough for one lifetime
Always thought John had a lot more dark side potential than either of his boys. Whatever it takes. Enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Always nice to have someone agree! Thanks for the review danrac - lots more John to follow in other stories, I'm a fan!
Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 09/10/07 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 3 Enough for one lifetime
WOW -- Daddy W. does mean business. Good story - poor Dean. Will he talk with Sam at all?
Author's Response: Funny you should ask that, as I'm planning the sequel to 'Bearer' and there will be flashbacks, so you'll find out! As always thanks very much for the review mtee.
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 09/10/07 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 3 Enough for one lifetime
thought the last chapter was good this was even better. John has a ruthless streak a mile wide where his sons are concerned. Well don louy. Lorraine
Author's Response: Thanks Lorraine, it always means so much to get reviews from people whose work I love. Thanks!
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