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Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 13

love the conversation between John and Bobby in the cafeteria. It would be nice to see a little bit of Jealous!John. And Sam "protecting his young" was written really well.

The doctor telling Sam about his own family seemed a bit strange though. And when John told Lilith she had "tortured his son....." the wording didn't quite sound like John. He was back to himself when he grabbed her wrist.

Still LOVE the story!



Author's Response: tossed the dr part in for my son, that's his alter ego.  it was all for him. John was trying to make a point, that's why he said what he said, that's all.

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 13

great chapter! Especially loved this line, "Sam turned and gave his father a look he’d never seen come across his son’s face. He looked like a mother ready to kill the predator that threatened it’s young." Hope Dean will wake up soon...

Author's Response:

thought that line would be a little corny, thanks for letting me know it worked!

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 13

Okay....so at this point it's strictly a medical problem then, awesome!!! strigo, you have made me so happy!!!!!

Author's Response: well...not sure about that yet

Reviewer: Live1970 (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 13

Poor Dean, you really need to stop torturing him.  It's just cruel (but i like cruel, so keep it up)



Author's Response: I live to torture Dean!

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 12

Wow, nice! Lol, love it!

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 17/10/07 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 12

I don't know what I love more.. Bobby or John and Sam rehashing just what John's deal did to Dean.  Great chapter - K

Author's Response: thanks.  I have a soft spot for Bobby, he's like the uncle they should of had.

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 17/10/07 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 12

Oh goodie !!! Maybe now that Lilith is FREE she won't mind being haer usual, lying, two-faced self...and screwing over the other Demons by saving poor Dean..........

Thanks for the quick updates



Author's Response:

you never know

Reviewer: Dean494 (Signed) · Date: 17/10/07 07:14 AM · On: Chapter 12

I'm so curious about what Lilith said to Bobby. Is this going to help Dean, and are we going to have all Winchesters back again? Please update soon. I love your story Strigo. Great job. Gabriela.



Author's Response: Oh, i have a feeling it'll come out, eventually.

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 17/10/07 04:50 AM · On: Chapter 12

Ahhh, another chap - but I'm more than happy with that. Another great update strigo.! Enjoying this one a lot!

Author's Response: thanks, i guess the end was farther away then i thought

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 17/10/07 03:26 AM · On: Chapter 12

lol, and another chapter to come, looks like this story took a life on its own and doesn't want to be ended! Anyway i won't complain, i'm enjoying it and i really could do with a few more chapters...

Author's Response: it's like pringles, once you pop, you just can't stop

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 17/10/07 03:15 AM · On: Chapter 11

three Winchesters plus Bobby, i'm a happy girl...

Author's Response:

There's nothing better, is there?

Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 15/10/07 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 11

Yay! Didn't expect John and Dean both there and I love a surprise!

Author's Response: i love a good surprise too! Thanks much!

Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 15/10/07 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 11

I can't wait to see is Dean really Dean or not! Interesting.

Author's Response: Sorry, you'll have to wait and see

Reviewer: Dean494 (Signed) · Date: 15/10/07 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 11

Oh I did not expect John alive. Great turn. Where is Dean and Lilith? Please don´t keep us waiting too much. This story is getting even better with each chapter.

Author's Response: Glad your liking it, thanks for reviewing it!

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 15/10/07 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 11

Hey you know what I'm easy, You've just managed to reuinite the guys, I'm happy as  a clam for this one to go on..lol  Great update - K

Author's Response: thanks again!

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 15/10/07 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 11

Wow, interesting twist.  Can't wait to see if Dean is still Dean.  And freak that I am, I'm still enjoying the Hurt!Dean aspect of this story.



Author's Response: I'm a sucker for it too.  Guess that makes me a freak right with you.

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 15/10/07 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 11

Great way to bring John back, still loving this - keep it coming.

Author's Response: i always hated what the did to John, in my world he's still here

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 15/10/07 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 10

Arghhh - what a place to stop the chapter, you are an evil genius! Thankfully I can press next. Moving on.

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 15/10/07 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 9

This is a fantastic chapter Strigo, - and I'm so happy that I can go straight to the next one as I've missed a few. Moving on!

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 15/10/07 05:38 AM · On: Chapter 11

lol, can't wait for the ending!!!!! great chapter...hmmm, Dean not in there anymore? grrr...gotta fix that!!! lovely suspense here, strigoi...

Author's Response:

i'm really glad it's still working, thanks for motivating me!

Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 15/10/07 04:15 AM · On: Chapter 11

Hi strigo, i liked it very much many thanks Lorraine

Author's Response: glad it's still entertaining, thanks

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 14/10/07 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 11

Yes! John's back! Yay! I was really bummed out when you said that it was the last chapter....but I'm glad that it isn't over yet! Yay! Nice work!

~Kayla



Author's Response: thanks again! And thanks for reading

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 14/10/07 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 11

we can be patient even if it takes TWO more chapters to finish your tale....          If a job is worth doing it's worth doing right......as my mom would say.......

Lilith is somewhere....and if she's not in John then it's in Dean which would be dreadful



Author's Response: my mom would say the same, thanks.  And Lilith, hmmm.....

Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 14/10/07 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 10

Why would I be mad that there's more of this?  Looking forward to the ending

Author's Response: me too, even i'm starting to feel sorry for Dean now.

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 14/10/07 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 10

awesome, i really enjoy this story! Can't wait to read the last chapter, which should come soon as you update regulalry, and that's very pleasant too.

Author's Response: thanks, hoping by Sunday night or Monday, once football's over

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