Supernaturalville
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 05/10/07 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 5

You're doing great! I'm completely hooked on this story!

~Kayla



Author's Response: Thanks, was a little worried about chap 5. kinda wrote it at work today with the boss away

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 05/10/07 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 5

Oooooh, nice!!!!! You're very good at those riddles!!! Looking forward to more!

Author's Response:

Thanks, always loved a good riddle.  And we all know Dean's smarter then he looks, right?

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 05/10/07 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 5

I am sooo hooked on this story - please keep it coming.

Author's Response:

Thanks, i'm glad everyone likes it so far.  wasn't too sure about it at first

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 05/10/07 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 5

oops forgot your rating......sorry

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 05/10/07 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 5

oh this is mysterious...my mind is fried ...used to be really great with riddles...obviously not anymore 'cuz this one has me stumped

Author's Response:

couldn't make them easy, right?  That'd be no fun.

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 05/10/07 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 3

okay as long as he doesn't drown in that RIVER we'll be happy....oooo what a meanie!! poor Dean and poor Sam

Author's Response:

he can't drown, i'm not done torturing him yet

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 05/10/07 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 4

very original story, looking forward for more...

Author's Response: Thanks.  I need all the positive feedback I can get.  I write it and sometimes it sounds a little weird to me. Thanks for letting me know it's on the right track

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 05/10/07 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 3

a river maybe? Okay, bravo, i'm hooked...

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 05/10/07 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 2

well, i have to admit that a naked Dean is a pleasant thought...

Author's Response: 100 % agree!

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 05/10/07 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 1

well, it's a nice intro, i'm very curious now....

Reviewer: Live1970 (Signed) · Date: 03/10/07 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 4

you have a really warped mind, don't you? I like it.



Author's Response: you don't know the half of it

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 03/10/07 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 4

Is it the demon?

Author's Response: What do you think?

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 03/10/07 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 4

Very good!  Nasty cliffhanger.  Ugh!

Author's Response: TYVM/always gotta have the cliffie

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 03/10/07 01:04 PM · On: Chapter 4

Ha, I'm going to keep my eye out for this one, great job - thanks for the read - K

Author's Response:

Thanks.  Glad to return the favor.

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 03/10/07 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 3

Okay I was gonna stop here and save the next chapter for later, but now I'm hooked..lol.  So moving on - K

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 03/10/07 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 2

Or Mousetrap, that was one of my specialties. - lol.. also as to the naked thing hey we suffer through it you know...lol - K

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 03/10/07 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 1

Nice start, I'm gonna read on.. oh, and the fillings and pins.. ugh really weird, nice touch - K

Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 03/10/07 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 4

the moon? ah will have to wait and see. many thanks Lorraine

Author's Response:

grateful you like it. tyvm

Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 03/10/07 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 3

Ah a river good one, nasty side effect sam recieing pain ten fold. oh great another chapter. Lorraine

Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 03/10/07 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 2

i will have to read your other stories, naked Dean yum.  Wonder what the demon bitch has in store for Dean. many thanks Lorraine

Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 03/10/07 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 1

oh my god what have the boys stepped into this time. great off to press the next button. Lorraine

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 03/10/07 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 4

Ahhh, this is a great story so far.  Definitely some interesting twists.  I'm a Hurt!Dean fan too but I LOVE when both brothers get hurt.


Author's Response: i did way to much hurt dean already, need to give a little to sam now.

Reviewer: Live1970 (Signed) · Date: 02/10/07 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 3

Way cool, loving it so far.

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 02/10/07 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 3

Like how Sam is going to experience everything Dean does.

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 02/10/07 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 3

Well, if you're making it up as you go, keep at it! This is FASCINATING!!!!!! Can't wait for another update!

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