Reviewer: BritLit (Signed)
17/09/09 05:59 PM · On:
BJ, You've done it again!
I needed a light piece after reading Fortunate Son and how delightful this is---you track the metaphor beautifully---not a word goes wrong and it rings true through the very last line!
Dean is so adorable---hard, tough, and yet so complex emotionally with his deep feelings that must out sooner or later...and maybe Sammy's the only one paying attention---Let us hope someone else happens along to help Dean deal; doesn't he deserve it?
Well done again! :)
Author's Response: Thanks again! This was one of those that just came to me and after tinkering with it a bit, it was done. Dean is so very complex and this was written when he was first revealing all those vulnerabilities and intriguing dichotomies. I'm really happy you found something lighter, but that still resonated as true. Take care, B.J.
Reviewer: birdie (Signed)
03/12/07 02:16 PM · On:
Well we all know that the Dean is so delicious he's edible! Haha made me laugh and smile. Hey does that make Sammy a freaky tall jelly BABY? Bird x
Author's Response: Hmmm, I hadn't thought about writing a Sam version. LOL Yes, that crossroads demon sure knew edible when she saw it! Thanks again, B.J.
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed)
08/10/07 07:44 AM · On:
Just delicious alright! Love the way you had Dean describe his centre as needing to be hard, tough so he can be strong and reliable - classic Dean in a cute, yummy fic! Clever concept, well written.
So glad you liked it! I do think it sums up Dean in a different way, but totally fits with how he is. And he is both cute and yummy. Thanks for reviewing, B.J.
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed)
01/10/07 10:30 AM · On:
oh, very awesome!! loved it!! very cool that Dean would think of himself like all the layers of chocolate!! nicely done!! bambers;)
Author's Response: Thanks bambers, Yeah Dean is definitely a very layered man, so much just below the surface and even more buried down deep. Take care, B.J.
Reviewer: nicky199172 (Signed)
30/09/07 03:30 PM · On:
i liked this alot and i think you have done a great job
well done i give this 10/10 :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I appreciate it. Later, B.J.
Reviewer: fredo (Signed)
30/09/07 04:23 AM · On:
I saw the title and thought, hey, I have to read that! And I don't regret, very nice piece of writing. And I was in the States for the first time two weeks ago and discovered the Take5 bars, damn delicious, so seing them associated to Dean Winchester, even more delicious...
Hey fredo, welcome to the states. I hope you enjoyed your visit. Take 5 bars might be good, but I doubt they could possibly be as delicious as Mr. Dean Winchester! LOL
I think he deserves his own candy bar with lots and lots of layers. Thanks for reviewing, B.J.
Reviewer: Nilah (Signed)
26/09/07 05:30 PM · On:
I definitely couldn't pass this morsel by. Sinfully delicious, and I can absolutely see Dean coming up with this.
Author's Response: Sinfully delicious does kinda describe Dean, doesn't it? Thanks for the lovely review, B.J.
Reviewer: eye4u (Signed)
24/09/07 06:34 AM · On:
Hahaha Nice one!
I do hope it isn't marshmallow or a maraschino cherry! Correct!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I'm sure that it's not. Dean most definitely has something substantial at his core, even if he isn't sure of that. Take care, B.J.
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed)
24/09/07 04:11 AM · On:
MMM, my two most favourite things mixed together in one delicious fic. This is great, well done!
Author's Response: Thanks, it does make for a tasty dessert. Thanks for reviewing, B.J.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed)
23/09/07 09:42 PM · On:
Excellent! Not only funny, but thoughtful!
Author's Response: Thank you. Jensen might see Dean as an onion and I like onions, but I love chocolate! Dean is just so very complex and layered. Later, B.J.
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed)
23/09/07 09:14 PM · On:
Wow! This is really amazing...yeah...perfect. Great job! Lol, Dean as chocolate...mmmmmmmm....taaaasty...
Author's Response: Thank you. Dean is mighty tasty and so introspective! LOL Take care, B.J.
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed)
23/09/07 09:11 PM · On:
Very nice look into our favorite chocolate morsel that is Dean Winchester! Great work and nice analogy Dean is definitely yummy like a chocolate!
Author's Response: Yes, he is definitely quite edible. LOL Thanks, B.J.
Reviewer: theldybg4u (Signed)
23/09/07 08:58 PM · On:
this is really good
Thank you for reviewing.
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed)
23/09/07 08:42 PM · On:
Wow--this was great. You've (or rather Dean) described him perfectly. Loved the part about him not wanting to be a freakin' marshmallow or piece of fruit at his center.
Yeah, Dean would most definitely want to have something hard at his core. Take care, B.J.
Reviewer: bayre (Signed)
23/09/07 08:40 PM · On:
Off to find chocolate bars now.
Author's Response: Thanks Laura, save some chocolate for me! Later, B.J.