Reviewer: icestar (Signed) · Date: 24/05/08 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 6

Hi, I like this story so far.  Good penmantship, but I did't like the sibling thing, calling the boys younger and older sibling.  but you dont to that any more, so fine:)

But it's a good story.  keep on writing.:)

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 6

i'm really curious to find out where you're going with this story. Anna being now such a perfect soldier in so little time is kind of weird. Can't wait for the next to chapters to learn more. And i miss Sam too...

Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 6

Am still loving it. I love Anna's gadgets, what an imagination you have. Why doesn't her brother like Dean tho?? I mean, he's DEAN. LOL.


Author's Response:

Yes, he is Dean, but is Joshua really Joshua?

Muahaha...if you need a reminder, go read the epilogue of Dimensions.

Reviewer: naughtyafro (Signed) · Date: 17/12/07 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 5

Gosh Babe! That was some Freakin' Writer's Block!

That was Brillant i love the little 'stepbackandadmirethescenerio' moments, Its awesome!

 Cant Wait For The Next Chapter .. Woop! Extra Long? *PumpsFists*

 Best Keep That Promise! Keep Bringing Us More x

Reviewer: Akasha (Signed) · Date: 04/12/07 03:37 PM · On: Prologue

Honey I gotta say oh my god I wish I could write even half as good as you. You've had me on the edge of my seat litraly. I Started reading Dimentions and hadto print it of so I could read it in a comfy chair. Then I ran out of bloody ink so couldn't print of Damnations Ie the story so far. What are you doing to me I'm Addicted hurry up I don't think I can wait any longer especialy the Mrated version of chapter 4. I will have pleasant deams after that I'm sure. Are you going to Asylumn 2. I would love to meet the geniouse who rote these amzing pages. You should get it published. I'm Seriouse. Keep going babe your making a 34 year old woman very happy. Looking forward to the next instalment with baited breath.

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 16/11/07 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 4

Alanah, you'll never stop to amaze me. Great update, loved it. I'm not a young reader, so i'll probably gonna appreciate that incredibly descriptive and very adult sex scene, though for the moment i'm good with the vision of Dean with a spatula... By the way could have been a ladle, a skimmer, a wooden spoon, i think he's attractive with whatever accessory...

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 12/11/07 01:44 PM · On: Prologue

  So loved the 'I will always, always come back' speech from Dean to Sammy. Damn how good is it to tear that boy's poor heart in two?  You're gonna have me laughing with Joy and crying in anguish all over again aren't you?  Please say yes you exquisitly tallented writer you!  Birdie x

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 12/11/07 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 3

Great job!  I hope we find out more about the thing that posed as Dean earlier.

Author's Response:

um, what are you talking about?

Reviewer: Little_angel_666 (Signed) · Date: 12/11/07 03:05 AM · On: Chapter 4

i really enjoyed reading this chapter and can't wait for the updates.

Great work!!

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 03/11/07 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 3

Okay that deserved a big Awwwwwwwwwwwww. Soooo heartwarming. And happy. And I'm pretty sure it's gonna go uppppp, then waaaaay downhill. So I'm enjoying the happy. Great job!!!!

Reviewer: clynn345 (Signed) · Date: 03/11/07 01:58 AM · On: Chapter 2

OMG I LOVE IT

Reviewer: clynn345 (Signed) · Date: 03/11/07 01:21 AM · On: Prologue

omg I love it and i am guessing the man in leather is dean :D