Reviewer: PenguinLova0720 (Signed) · Date: 02/10/09 01:42 PM · On: Promises
I've read this story many times already and I keep rereading it when I'm in the mood for a good brotherly story. I love this chapter. You did a great job describing Dean's thoughts during the flight. Only for Sam would Dean take a plane through a storm :) ~Vicky
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! This is a favorite of mine as well. I've often wondered what Sam's fear would be if the situation was reversed. Thank you again! Huge hug, Muffy
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 13/04/09 03:46 PM · On: Impala
What a lovely story. Glad it made it to Sam's reading list, or I may never have found it and that would have been a huge shame. Thanks.
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 13/04/09 03:28 PM · On: Comeuppance
I loved you describing Dean as perky, and as for Sam feinting fainting - that had me laughing out loud. Thank you for the smiles. Off to read the rest now.
Reviewer: Pandora Jazz (Signed) · Date: 06/04/09 12:52 AM · On: Impala
Muffy, I saw that this story made the recommended to read for the month and I always love to read it, so thought I would take time to say thanks again for sharing it with us. I think you already know this is my favorite story out of the ones you have written. There were so many great scenes. Dean on the plane, just trying to concentrate on getting to Sam and survive the flight. Sam remembering Dean's phone number and at the end needing to get 'home', back to the Impala. Of course the scene in the motel as Dean waited for Jason and Lisa to come see Sam, he was listing all the ways he could kill them, always smile when I read that section. This story makes me smile, no matter how many times I read it. This is the one that I can and have read more than once. Thanks again for sharing it with us. Take care.
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 13/07/08 03:55 PM · On: Impala
shit, Heather's a name that doesn't exist here, so no chance Dean'll come hunt here... Nice and entertaining story for a quiet sunday evening, thanks.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! You never know, a Heather could visit and then Dean could follow! I'm glad you enjoyed this one! It was fun to write! Hugs
Muffy
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 13/07/08 01:40 PM · On: Promises
great first chapter, loved all the italic comments, and some more than others, like... What’s that noise? Did a wing fall off? I think I just felt a blood vessel explode. Stay down, food, I mean it.
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 08/07/08 12:07 AM · On: Impala
“Welcome home, Sammy,” he said softly. - Sweet ;) Thanks for keeping me entertained tonight... kel
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 08/07/08 12:02 AM · On: Comeuppance
I could kill them with the cookies, that might be fun. - he he he ;)
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 07/07/08 11:54 PM · On: Together
Just lovely, great story ;) Kel
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 07/07/08 11:43 PM · On: Alone
Okay you've now stolen hours of sleep from me :( Oh, well I'll forgive you I guess. Great seeing Sammy's thoughts - Kel ;)
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 07/07/08 11:28 PM · On: Promises
*sigh* makes me wish I was a Heather ;) Dean heard someone screaming. Oh, please don’t let that be me screaming like that. - Loved this line...lamo funny. ;) Kel
Reviewer: Kumaproogey (Signed) · Date: 09/01/08 08:37 PM · On: Impala
Nice idea, Dean would definitely get on a plane to get to an injured Sam sooner. I liked the thoughts on hot Heathers – that was amusing. You wrote Dean's fear – his irrational and scattered thoughts well, it really came across how petrified he was to be flying – and in bad weather too. You kept my curiosity peeked b/c I was eager to find out how Sam got injured. You did a good job portraying Sam's confusion and fear in chapter 2. Sam's realization of how Dean got there & that whole conversation was adorable. You got the banter (both spoken and thought) between the brothers down really well. -This little section in Chapter 1 confused me a bit: “They say flying is safer than driving. What’s wrong?” Apparently Heathers were perceptive, too.“My brother—he was in a car wreck,” Stay down, food, hear me?“I’m so sorry, that was rude of me.”- It was confusing b/c he had already mentioned his brother & that's why he was flying. I think the question "What's wrong?" needed to be rephrased or he just answered it incorrectly, which didn't come across to me. It was unnecessary b/c it was a repeat of the previous conversation.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really love this story and the way it came out in the end! It started with telling a friend about a similar flight and grew into this. I understand your confusion a little, but I think Dean had said Sam was hurt, but not how, when he was first talking to the hot Heather on the plane. Hot Heather's might confuse hom a bit, especialy on a plane LOL
Reviewer: garvaldmains (Signed) · Date: 21/11/07 08:21 AM · On: Impala
you have a gift! Dix
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much *blushing* I'm so glad you enjoyed this story.
Reviewer: JennieC (Signed) · Date: 19/11/07 07:18 PM · On: Impala
What a great story! I love Dean's inner monologues, they are just teriffic. I can understand how that could have happened to Sam, getting caught up with his old 'friends' before realizing what was actually happenning. I'm glad Dean said what he said to him before he left. Great fun how Sam pretended to pass out, knowing his brother so well like that. And even more fun that Dean found it funny (in the end). I look forward to reading more of you stuff!! hugs jen ps - Dean's plane ride was just CLASSIC!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And it is so easy to get caught up with old friends or our old life before we realize that maybe that isn't the best place for us to be! Thank you again!
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 30/09/07 03:35 AM · On: Impala
I found this fab little story while surfing and I absolutely LOVE it. It spoke volumes about the boy's connection. I loved your running commentary along side the dialogue, and I loved Dean reaction to the "friends" (payback's a bitch!) Sam reverting back to his childhood fobia was heartbreakin' and I felt you surfaced a real, ongoing fear. Dean's gentleness and patience with Sam was so poignant and I felt like we were insiders to thier privacy. The impala as home is just brilliant and so real - we just get it. Stunning piece of writing.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am just speechless from your lovely comments! Thank you!
Reviewer: eye4u (Signed) · Date: 24/09/07 10:04 AM · On: Impala
Lisa and Jason are bitches! Good thing Dean sized them up even just one time!!! Just darn lucky Sam faked fainting, if not Jason might leave the room with only his tongue unharmed! heh heh!!! Nice story!!! Kudos!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 23/09/07 09:46 PM · On: Impala
I enjoyed this story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really enjoyed writing this one.
Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 23/09/07 09:31 PM · On: Together
I liked the flashbacks.
Author's Response: Thank you! I love flashbacks, I think they give such a lovely context, and I love the younger Dean and Sam so much!
Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 23/09/07 03:50 PM · On: Impala
Back where they belong! Great dialogue and characterisation, A very enjoyable story. Thanks J.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 23/09/07 03:47 PM · On: Comeuppance
Loved this. Homicidal Dean - made me laugh, very funny.
Author's Response: Thank you! I had so much fun writing this chapter. I could hear Dean in my head the whole time!
Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 23/09/07 02:58 PM · On: Alone
Oooh, they were mean to Dean. I loved the way you portray how hard it is to mix friends and family and stay loyal to both. J
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It is hard to mix the various elements of our lives. And for Sam college and his other life would be so different, there would have to be friction. Thank you again! :)
Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 23/09/07 02:03 PM · On: Promises
Great start - really enjoyed the double dialogue on the plane! Can't wait to read on... J
Author's Response: Thank you! This story actually grew from a conversation I had with a friend about being on the last plane out in front of a tropical storm. And then Dean just popped into my head and kept up that stream of thought! :)
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