Reviewer: SUPERNATANGEL67 (Signed) · Date: 03/04/08 05:52 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Twilight Zone
I just found and read your little fic. I am so glad I did. It was simply wonderful. I think now I will read Shotguns & Crutches cause I know it will be great also!!!!!
Author's Response: wow thank you! i hope you enjoy shotguns and crutches and i know it's incomplete, but i'm just so busy with school that i won't be able to write the ending til the beginning of may at the earliest probably. But thanks for the review. you totally just made my night.
Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 19/02/08 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Twilight Zone
good job want more please Thanks
Author's Response: i'm glad you want more, but you have to give me a plot line cause i'm all tapped out of ideas at the moment...ideas for this story anyway.
Thanks for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed my little ditty.
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 14/02/08 12:08 AM · On: Maggie- New version
nice flashback honey! very sweet! Looking forward to the ending!
Author's Response: thanks gen. the ending's already done all that's left is to post it so i'll probably get around to that sunday.
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 08/11/07 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Falls on Me
Very nice chapter Magos! I enjoyed the character development and the relationship development. Good Red Lodge comment I always like stories that tie in with the show! As for ending the story here I say NO WAY! LOL you can't drop a bomb like the energy ball came from Dean and then just leave us hanging! Now you've got your work cut out for you explaining that one! Look forward to futre chapter! Great work I enjoyed it a LOT!
Author's Response: lol. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter so much and if you really want me to...i guess i can write another chapter, although it might take me a while, but i'll do my best. thanks for the awesome review gen. totally made my night
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 08/11/07 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Earth, Wind, and Hellhounds
this is really pretty interesting ...can't wait to continue
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 08/11/07 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 1- Too Stubborn
great tale so far....but it almost seemed too easy.... hope your instructor wasn't too upset
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 08/11/07 07:32 PM · On: Prologue- What did you do
recognized the name...favorite movie.... Can't wait to find out what did this to the boys....
Author's Response: I'm happy that you're enjoying the story, but i don't know what movie you're talking about. The title actually came from the Barenaked Ladies song One Week coz that's what i was listening to as i was writing this.
Reviewer: Little_angel_666 (Signed) · Date: 08/11/07 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Falls on Me
I really liked this chapter can't wait for the next one to be updated!!!
Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 08/11/07 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Falls on Me
keep going please
Reviewer: romy2205 (Signed) · Date: 30/10/07 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 3 - How Bizarre
real person? meaning her feeling mattered his didnt? or he isn't "real" after the whole yellow-eyes thing? im confused a lil... im i reading into it
Reviewer: romy2205 (Signed) · Date: 30/10/07 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Earth, Wind, and Hellhounds
hmmmmm kinda mad im gettin so into this grrrrrrrrr
Reviewer: romy2205 (Signed) · Date: 30/10/07 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 1- Too Stubborn
Long, but I guess it kinda had to be... good story... still shocked you figured out the bullet thing... the attention to detail is a lil OCD actually HA!
Author's Response: i am a diehard fan of the show missy so maybe it is a lil ocd but i don't care. i'm really glad you're enjoying though.
Reviewer: romy2205 (Signed) · Date: 30/10/07 03:58 PM · On: Prologue- What did you do
OOOOO CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT STUD!!! P.S. God is supposed to be capitalized! It's a name. As well as all other words talking about Him. (the H in him too SEE!) :)
Reviewer: bonnie (Signed) · Date: 15/10/07 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Earth, Wind, and Hellhounds
Please state he is not gone. It would be unbearable. I give it a rate of 200+ I loved it. It felt like i was part of the situation. Keeep going for the finaly. Do you think this whould be good for 3rd season?
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 15/10/07 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 3 - How Bizarre
Ya had me goin' there for a bit in the beginning....thinkin' Sam had died. Shame on you....old woman like me can't take that kind of stress....LOL this is really good. Keep it coming.
Author's Response: LOL. I'm so sorry you thought he died. Now I may be a tried and true Dean girl, but there's no way I'd just up and kill Sam, so keep that in mind. Sorry I worried you. I'm really happy that you like it and I'll do my best to update soon.
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 15/10/07 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 3 - How Bizarre
Magos, Magos, Magos...this was quite the twist! Dean married all this time...hmmm...I like Maggie so far and the Sam back story is interesting too...was a little lost at first with the whole Maggie/Isabella thing but it was nicely explained. Very unique idea! I look forward to the next update! gengen
Author's Response: thank you very much Gen. The idea actually came to me out of nowhere to give Dean a wife and I thought she would just fit into this story perfectly. I'm glad you like her.
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 15/10/07 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Earth, Wind, and Hellhounds
Awesome. I really like it. As far as the next chapter should go...maybe have Sam pull Dean into his coma...into the woods and they have to fight to get back.
Author's Response: thanks for all the reviews. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. And i like the idea about the coma thing, but I'll have to save that idea for a rainy day cause I already have the beginning of the next chapter done. if all goes well, it should be up sometime tonight.
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 15/10/07 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 1- Too Stubborn
This is an awesome chapter. I loved it.
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 15/10/07 10:29 AM · On: Prologue- What did you do
YAY Wisconsin!! Sorry i live in WI...lol This is really good. Love the start.
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 09/10/07 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Earth, Wind, and Hellhounds
Intriguing. I like Lee's character - from both stories. So, which one of our fellas is making her boohoo?
Author's Response: thanks i'm really glad you like Lee cause she's gonna be around for a while and the one making her "boohoo" is not who you think it is
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 07/10/07 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Earth, Wind, and Hellhounds
Very interesting chapter...Not sure about Lee she seems a little too...well too much I would give her one or the other power...interesting back story on how she knows sam tho...but yeah I'd ease up on all those powers...maybe choose the irish thing or the italian thing...Keep it up!
Author's Response: thanks for the criticism. it is greatly appreciated. and i did take your advice and got rid of the irish thing so she's just a strega who's somewhat psychic. Thanks for the review. And if you like the backstory, definately check out chapter four of shotguns and crutches coz she explains her relationship with sam. Thanks again for the help gen. I really do appreciate it.
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 07/10/07 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 1- Too Stubborn
Cool! I liked the way they got Dean out of the deal and this doozy of a revelation...Johnathan Winchester and his twin boys Samuel and Dean...very intriguing Okay I'm waiting to see what happened to sland them in the hospital now!
Reviewer: Shade (Signed) · Date: 06/10/07 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Earth, Wind, and Hellhounds
AAAAHHH!!! *pulls hair out* Your cliffhangers are driving me insane...but in a good way. (if such a thing is possible) PLEASE update soon!! I'm running off to read Shotguns and Crutches as I write this, so I don't exactly have any suggestions for the next chapter, but whatever you do, don't stop writing. This story's fantastic, and I'm dying to know what happens next!
~Shade
Author's Response: LOL thank you very much! i'm so glad you're liking this. This story just started out as me having a bad day and needing to take it out on someone (so naturally i decided to beath up sam and dean). I never really thought to write much passed the prologue and now you're demanding an update...i love it. Thank you so much for the excellent review and i promise i will try to have the next chapter up by this weekend. It will be the only thing I work on this week.
Reviewer: jensenluva28 (Signed) · Date: 06/10/07 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Earth, Wind, and Hellhounds
OMG i wanna know what happened huryy keep writing...!!!!! :)
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 06/10/07 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Earth, Wind, and Hellhounds
I'm a sucker for good dialogue and a well thought out plot and this has both. There's so much info here, you obviously research a lot. Great job and I'm looking forward to the next chapter already.
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