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Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 03/03/08 04:02 AM · On: Chapter 12

Ahhh, happy ending. I love 'em. Great story. Like your work.

--c 



Author's Response: Thanks so much, I was totally surprised when I saw my inbox this morning.  Thanks for making my day.

Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 03/03/08 03:44 AM · On: Chapter 7

Oh crap. No girl for Sammy. :(

But the story is great! It's like a roller coaster and I'm headed for the final stretch, wheeeee!

--c 



Author's Response: Hee Hee, keep your arms and legs inside the car and enjoy the ride!!

Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 03/03/08 03:32 AM · On: Chapter 3

Ohh! I hope Sammy gets the girl. He never seems to get the girl. :)

--c



Author's Response: Sorry to say, I just don't think that's going to happen.

Reviewer: red11 (Signed) · Date: 03/12/07 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 12

Loved the ending! Great Story and Thanks for the enjoyment of reading it..

Author's Response: Glad you liked it, thanks for reading!

Reviewer: yankeefan87 (Signed) · Date: 17/11/07 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 11

just read this and awesome!!! pleaseee update : )

thanks, you're great - love all your stories! 

Reviewer: heather03nmg (Signed) · Date: 28/10/07 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 11

Oh that was just evil to leave us with a cliffy like that!

Awesome chapter, Dan has completely redeemed himself.

Loved the hurt Dean. Update soon! 



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad Dan has climbed out of the cellar in everyone's eyes.  Thanks for the rate too!

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 28/10/07 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 11

that was a cruel ending! glad alex is finally dead though. thanks for that. just don't kill anyone else...please?  I can't wait for the next chapter and dan really does kick ass. damn.

Author's Response:

I'm sorry, but cruel is my middle name.  gotta get just a little more pain, for good measure.  Sorry about Dan too, i know he's not your favorite, but in some world he has to be a good guy, right?

Reviewer: red11 (Signed) · Date: 28/10/07 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 11

Great chapter! My fav. so far. I really like these characters you write them well. Thanks!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: thanks much, i kinda feel like i know them.  Thanks for reading and enjoying!

Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 21/10/07 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 10

slowly still not sure about him.

Author's Response: He'll get better, i hope

Reviewer: heather03nmg (Signed) · Date: 21/10/07 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 10

Well I had to hate Dan for a bit, since he did attack Sammy, but I think he has redeemed himself. Plus I give the man credit for drugging up Dean and keeping him from the fight...too bad the fight seems to be coming to him.

Love the story, hope we see a rescue soon! 



Author's Response: Yeah, Dean is just a trouble magnet, isn't he? Glad you like it.

Reviewer: Little_angel_666 (Signed) · Date: 21/10/07 06:33 AM · On: Chapter 10

Yes Dan's grown on me, he's turned into a nice bloke.  Can't wait till the next chapter!

I no longer want to clean his clock, but i hope you take that bird Alex out soon.



Author's Response:

Yeah, she's getting on my nerves too. Thanks

Reviewer: red11 (Signed) · Date: 21/10/07 01:00 AM · On: Chapter 10

Great Chapter. Can't wait for the next one. And Dan is starting to grow on me. I like how he is a take charge kinda guy. He fits in well with the Winchesters.



Author's Response: oops, little slow on the response. (sorry) He may yet surprise, thanks

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 11:43 PM · On: Chapter 10

dan's growing on me slightly and i totally can see the massive mountain that is dan scott have no issue picking up dean like a feather. this was a good chapter and i'm anxiously awaiting the next one

Author's Response: ty, glad you liked it.  i try to find redeeming qualities in everyone, even when they're not there.

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 14/10/07 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 9

mean. you are very mean! seriously driving me nuts with all the cliffhangers here! this chapter was so good and then you have to go and end it like that? hurry up and post the next one cause i really wanna know what happens and i hope the boys find a way to kill alex coz she's just annoying! and yay for dan actually being helpful and not hurting anyone this time!

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 11/10/07 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 8

Like it??? Loved it!!!!!!

AWSOME  AWSOME  AWSOME

Dan is a real butt head-but, he may yet redeem himself.

Lou  is great- she  always has the right answers.

Your words  have woven a web that has caught me totally.

I can't wait for the next update. Please make it soon !!!!!!!!!!!!!

BRAVO!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks, i'll try to make it quicker

Reviewer: red11 (Signed) · Date: 11/10/07 12:42 AM · On: Chapter 8

I really liked this chapter and wasn't expecting Alex to show up the way she did.I hope Dean and Dan finish the job quickly. I'm looking forward to the next.



Author's Response: When it involves a Winchester, nothing happens quickly.  Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 10/10/07 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 8

love this update, hate your cliffhangers! always with the cliffhangers. you're absolutely killin me with those! i can't wait to find out what happens.

Author's Response:

Sorry for the cliffs, but they do make life more fun, don't they?

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 04/10/07 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 7

Ok ... ths is a great story. You can tell Lou is a Winchester...same Dean like attitude and mouth.

Your words have totally pulled me into this one- poor Sam, leave to a guy to mis-interpert .

Since this "thing " has already made reference to wanting Sammy next- I see trouble coming

You have great style and rhythm - it draws trhe reader .

Thanks for sharing your awsome talent!!!!!!!

please update soon...I can't wait!!!!

BRAVO!!!!!!!!!

a fan.

 



Author's Response: Thank-you very much for all the kind words. It truly means a lot to me to know that the time and effort was all worth it! 

Reviewer: red11 (Signed) · Date: 03/10/07 01:05 AM · On: Chapter 7

Dan doing the Grunt work! He should do a lot more. Great chapter! Ready for more please.

Author's Response: Haven't written chap 8 yet, maybe he will.

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 02/10/07 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 7

so mad that dean didn't beat up dan but i'm hopeful he will once they destroy alex. Totally hangin on for the next chapter here

Author's Response: There's still time, it may happen yet.

Reviewer: Little_angel_666 (Signed) · Date: 02/10/07 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 7

this was a good chapter, i hope the next chapter has a little action in it before you kill off little Alex!!

Reviewer: red11 (Signed) · Date: 30/09/07 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 6

Great chapter, I can't wait to read what happens next.

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 29/09/07 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 6

awesome! awesome chapter. can't wait for dan to get his...i love this story!!! totally can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: buttercup (Signed) · Date: 29/09/07 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 6

AHHH What a cliffie!!!! If i didn't love this story so much i would be sooo annoyed...but each chapter just keeps getting better and better!!!!

Dan, ergh....creepy...but well done on creating the character that can cause so many emotions in us mere readers

 Great story...can't wait for more

Soph xxx



Author's Response: Glad everyone likes it so far. Thanks much

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 28/09/07 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 5

i really really hate cliff hangers especially when you do them with lou on the verge of death. that's so mean. as for suggestions, idk what you should do other than let lou live. i think dan and sam should get into a fight and also that the demon or whatever that's attacking lou should go after dan and kill him and leave the winchesters alone. coz of all the people in this story, dan needs to die the most...not just because of his oth evil but just for the pure fact that he's sooo annoying in this story. and honestly, where did he get the emf? he was going through sam's stuff wasn't he?



Author's Response: Isn't death a little too good for Dan?

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