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Reviewer: iheartjensen (Signed) · Date: 11/12/07 11:49 PM · On: Epilogue

this is such a good story! i really like how you made it go into season one so perfectally. most stories cant do that!!! it was really a good story!

Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 01/10/07 04:18 PM · On: Epilogue

What a thoroughly clever and exciting alternate start for the show. I've just read it all in one sitting, I'm so pleased it was complete as it was a really gripping fast-paced story and I was totally caught up in it. I loved the way you've tied in all the storyline points in a completely different set-up.
I'm just off to look up your other stories. Thanks J.

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 25/09/07 02:17 PM · On: Epilogue

That was a great alternate begining for the show! I am sad that this story is over however. I really did enjoy reading it. See ya around soon!
~Kayla

Reviewer: eye4u (Signed) · Date: 24/09/07 11:26 PM · On: Epilogue

Wow! Putting that earthquake story as part of the Pilot!!! Nice job!!!
clap! clap! clap!
Just read it right now, I was not able to leave my PC, even if I had to take a pee! That is unusual even for me!!!
Good one!!!

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 24/09/07 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 5

Very nice.
Can't wait for the epilogue

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 24/09/07 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 2

Aww geez. This is really good. love the use of imagery. Poor Sammy.

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 24/09/07 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 1

Ooooooooh demon suit dude.....Nice.

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 24/09/07 08:52 AM · On: Prologue

Very good

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 23/09/07 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 5

ooo awesome! love the way you tie it into the pilot. really curious what the epilogue is gonna be like.

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 23/09/07 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 5

aww, I'm sad that this story is almost over! :0( But I'm looking forward to the epilouge! :0)
~kayla

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 22/09/07 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 4

You are killing me with these cliffies! I have to know what happens!
~Kayla

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 22/09/07 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 4

Oh, great job here! Excellent, fantastic, etc.! Can't wait for another incredible chapter!

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 22/09/07 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 4

Ooohhh, can't wait for the next chapter! Good stuff!

Reviewer: naughtyafro (Signed) · Date: 22/09/07 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 4

Wow! Amazing! I Love It!
Great Job! :D

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 20/09/07 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 3

Oh no!! Sam was so close to getting help! So close!!!
~Kayla

Reviewer: d6l2j7 (Signed) · Date: 20/09/07 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 3

I am absolutely loving this story!!!! I want to jump into the computer and help poor Sammy myself. Dean had better find that poor boy soon.

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 20/09/07 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 3

Oh goodness! These are incredible cliffhangers you've got going on here! Wonderful job! Can't wait for another chapter!

Reviewer: buttercup (Signed) · Date: 20/09/07 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 3

I am absolutely loving this story!!! You seem to be a natural writer... and i have never known an author to update as regularly as you do and i thank you for it. Although i'm going to be going out of my mind waiting for the next chapter.
...i mean dean heard sam talking right...he knows he is alive!?!?!?! ooo i just can;t wait.
this story really is golden.
Bxxx

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 20/09/07 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 3

KILLER chapter!no pun intended:-D it totally made my day that you updated this and i am impatiently awaiting the next one! totally hanging on your every word here

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 19/09/07 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 2

dude absolutely heartbreaking! i totally didn't know what to expect from this story but it is awesome and i love that you had dean meet jess and neither one knew who the other was. i also liked that you showed how upset and scared dean really is...cannot wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 19/09/07 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 2

I can't believe that someone saw through Dean's lies! lol. Doing great so far!
~Kayla

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 18/09/07 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oh no! Sam is trapped! How is Dean going to find him? It seems nearly inpossible!
~Kayla

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 18/09/07 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 1

Lol...I love how Dean gets into Palo Alto...and it's really cool how you have him run into Jessica along the way! Great job with this second chapter! Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: lindi (Signed) · Date: 18/09/07 04:42 AM · On: Prologue

Fantastic. I`m loving it. Cant wait for the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 17/09/07 06:07 PM · On: Prologue

Oh wow! What an interesting idea! hey, was this posted on ff.net before? 'Cause I think I've read it there...anyway, great job! Looking forward to seeing the rest of this up!

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