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Reviews For KISSING CHAOS
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 11/04/08 01:05 AM · On: Abandoned

what a great3 chapters when are you going to do number 4????
also chapter 2..............YUMMY.

rbliss 

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 27/02/08 05:18 AM · On: Abandoned

Hmm...hope you're gonna finish this one! Sounds like all kinds of fun...

Author's Response: Yes, I am going to finish this one, I promise!  As soon as I finish "Don't You Dare Pee in the Impala!".  Thank for noticing this one; it's not one of my more popular ones.

Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 22/11/07 10:26 AM · On: Lured

Hmmmm, um, well, yeah , hot vanessa

Reviewer: lostatc (Signed) · Date: 11/11/07 12:25 PM · On: Abandoned

Loving this story and can't wait for more.  Hope you update soon.

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 14/10/07 06:53 PM · On: Abandoned

Oh Er! V. this is very good stuff, I want to know everything - you've got me, on this story;  hook, line, sinker and copy of angling times. Please update soon!!

Author's Response: Wow--well, thank you very much.  I really, really wasn't sure how this story was going to go over.  It's not one of my most popular, but I'm having a good time writing it.  Poor Dean is in for a rough time of it on his journey back to Sam.

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 14/10/07 06:47 PM · On: Trapped

Jeez, I cant believe you're writing this either - but its just so damn hot - keep it coming girlfriend!!!

As a dedicated Dean addict I'm giving this the seal of approval!!



Author's Response:

I am very, very, very glad you approve and that you're enjoying the read.  I love writing erotic stuff.

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 14/10/07 06:41 PM · On: Lured

Wow V. this is positively naughty!!! Enjoying it a lot so far, moving on to next chap.

Author's Response: I was in a naughty mood when I started writing this one.  (((grin)))

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 14/10/07 05:42 PM · On: Abandoned

very very interesting. can't believe he's walking out in public in only a sheet and blanket though. hilarious

Author's Response:

Poor guy is stuck between a rock and a hard place.  No clothing, no money, no phone, and it's in the middle of a stormy night.

Glad you're enjoying the story.

Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 14/10/07 03:53 PM · On: Abandoned

Well you sure got my attention! A well written story always puts vivid imagery in a readers head and you did a great job with your description, so thanks for the treat! Obviously all is not well, not to mention walking back through a strom wearing bed linen. Loved the sinister anticiaption... Looking forward to Sam's reaction!

Author's Response: Thank you, Cookie6.  I'm very glad you're enjoying this story.  Wasn't sure if many would.

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 14/10/07 12:00 PM · On: Abandoned

Oh my. XDIf only the sheets had been taken too...then he would have had to walk around naked...Lol, nice, Vanessa! Can't wait to find out what this is all about...it's veeeeeeery mysterious! Continue soooooon!:D :D :D :D

Author's Response: Thank you, Cat.  I'm glad you've stuck with this story.  :-)

Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 20/09/07 04:22 PM · On: Trapped

Wow Vanessa, that was intense, my mouth and eyes were wide open. Mate this is well written, I enjoyed it and can't wait for the next. :)

schelz

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 19/09/07 09:40 AM · On: Trapped

Wow, short but what an image..lol.  Thinking the afterglow won't last long.  K

Author's Response:

Thanks, Kell.

Yep, I think you're right about the afterglow.

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 18/09/07 10:05 PM · On: Trapped

But damn, I'm glad you ARE writing this - I'm hitting the shower now... maybe I'll find hubby first....

Author's Response:

ROFL   I have a folder full of erotic poems I've written.  The people in my online poetry group dubbed me the "Queen of Erotica" and they used to say the same things as you. 

Thanks, lam.

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 18/09/07 09:48 PM · On: Trapped

I can't believe you STOPPED...LOL

 yeah like i'm gonna get any sleep now...LOL



Author's Response: Ooops--my comment to your review of Chap 1 was supposed to go with this one.  lol

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 18/09/07 09:46 PM · On: Lured

*is a redhead*

yeah...just what i need to read before going to bed....LOL 



Author's Response: LOL  Yeah, that's what I thought after writing it.

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 18/09/07 07:48 PM · On: Trapped

still got me wanting more...well written nice imagery tho I'm wanting to know where all this is going...

Author's Response: Thank you, gengen.  More to come soon.

Reviewer: POOKEE (Signed) · Date: 18/09/07 07:01 PM · On: Trapped

VANESSA,

I CAN'T BELIEVE I'M READING THIS!

I NEED I DRINK AND A COLD SHOWER.

OF COURSE, I'LL BE WAITING FOR CHAPTER THREE.

POOK



Author's Response: LOL  A drink and a cold shower, eh?  I did all right then.  :-)

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 18/09/07 06:44 PM · On: Trapped

Wow...I can't believe you're writing this either...lol... um, okay...ignore the fact that I'm underage for a second--lol, I loved it! WOW, you're descriptive...ummm...yummy?? Creepy cliffie...creeeeeeeepy. Why does Dean always seem to get knocked out while in the middle of doing "that"? It's a theme, I think...and um...I'm hoping you'll write more soon, because, uh...yeah...drool...looooots of drooool...

Author's Response:

Yeah, drooling is the order of the day.  :-)

Reviewer: DEANFAN (Signed) · Date: 17/09/07 11:35 PM · On: Lured

This is really good so far, can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 17/09/07 09:53 PM · On: Lured

Very interesting start will watch for an update...Good job so far.

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 17/09/07 02:58 PM · On: Lured

interesting...i just don't know what other word to use to describe it.

Author's Response:

Well, I hope it's interesting in a good way.

Thanks, Magos186.

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 17/09/07 02:57 PM · On: Lured

Oh my God, Vanessa...you really CAN write EVERYTHING! Soooo mysterious. And what a poem at the beginning! Great, great job! Fantastic, really...can't wait to see where this goes!!!!

Author's Response:

LOL  Ahh, thank you, Shiny.  I have to admit that I do have a folder full of erotic poetry that I've written.  In fact, one of my poetry groups dubbed my the "Queen of Erotica".  (((blushing)))

Reviewer: POOKEE (Signed) · Date: 17/09/07 12:27 PM · On: Lured

Vanessa,

First - beautiful poetry.

Second - 0 to 60 in one second.  Even the Impala can't get there that fast.

Carry on poetic author.

Pook



Author's Response: Thank you very much, Pookee.  I'm very, very happy to hear you're liking this little piece.

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 17/09/07 12:18 PM · On: Lured

I think you've already mentioned several of my favourite Dean body parts, so yeah, definitely interested to see where you are going with this....

Author's Response:

hehehe  I've got lots more body parts to mention.  I'm keeping a drool bucket handy as I write.

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 17/09/07 08:53 AM · On: Lured

Well all I have to say is Whew is it warm in here..lol.  Can I say I want an update NOW...lol.  - k

Author's Response:

LOL  Yeah, it was quite warm when I was writing it.  And it's about to get hotter.

Soon, I promise.

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