Supernaturalville
Reviews For Our Separate Ways
Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 16/09/07 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 11

I liked Chapter 11.  That was a nice touch that Dean sent Sam a cellphone so that he could keep in touch.  It is nice to see some of Sam's college life too.  I am loving this story.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 16/09/07 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 10

I like your word choice.  I like that you are showing Dean's and John's perspectives about the four years when Sam left.  

Reviewer: wolfsnight (Signed) · Date: 16/09/07 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 1

This is an awesome story! Good job. 

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 15/09/07 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 3

Oh, how sad.  Sam is alone for the first time in his life.  I like how easily you describe his emotions.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 15/09/07 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 2

This is a different take on Sam's leaving (well, getting expelled from the house).  I like it very much!  I like that after it's over, John realizes his mistake and is remorseful.

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 15/09/07 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great start! :0)

~Kayla

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 15/09/07 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 1

What a great beginning!  You know you're in trouble when your parents use your full name.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 15/09/07 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 1

This is a good start to what I think is going to be an interesting story.

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