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Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 05/03/09 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 20

Once again, just....wow...you amaze me..I mean seriously..just *stands and applauds*..You are awesome! ;)

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 20/09/07 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 20

Good ending. Fabulous story! Very enjoyable!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 20/09/07 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 19

Cute chapter. Jess is so good for him.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 20/09/07 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 18

I love that you added this episode with Cassie. I didn't even think about her being part of this time period. Dean just can't catch a break.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 20/09/07 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 17

I'm guessing this is Jess. I'm glad Sam has someone to fill Dean's spot, but disappointed that Dean has no one. I know that's all Kripke's doing, but I still don't like it.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 20/09/07 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 16

Poor Dean. His life really sucks. Sam and John are doing what their deluded minds tell them is best, leaving Dean caught in the middle to endure the mental anguish.
I think it's bizarre that even when we get what we want, it isn't what we want.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 20/09/07 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 15

The foolish things we think. Isn't it funny how what we need to be independent is actually to be interdependent instead of cloisterd and alone. Sam will learn. Another great job of expressing Sam's opinions and feelings.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 20/09/07 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 14

How horrible! Marvelous job expressing Dean's shock, his pain and Sam's fear, as well. It's a wonderful chapter, but it's so sad. I almost forgot that I know what eventually happens in the end.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 20/09/07 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 13

Okay, so time isn't healing their wounds. What a marked difference from one person's perceptions to another's! Super technique!
Oh no, Sam! Don't do it!!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 20/09/07 09:07 AM · On: Chapter 12

We see the passage of time weave it's healing magic. Darn stubborn men!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 20/09/07 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 11

My favorite chapter so far! Yay! Sam and Dean---together again (sort of)!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 20/09/07 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 10

Great tension! I found myself gripping the arms of my chair as I read. I didn't realize it until I finished reading. I'm loving this!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 20/09/07 08:29 AM · On: Chapter 9

Oh, poor Sam. It's like he's doing the bunny hop---two steps forward, but one step back.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 20/09/07 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 8

I love your writing style! It isn't bogged down with unnecessary, flowery description. Every word has an importance, conveys meaning.
This is another great chapter showing us the desperate internal struggles of the Winchesters. Wonderful!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 20/09/07 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 7

I like that you alternate the points of view between Sam and Dean.
Your story is not just entertaining, but well-planned. It's a joy to read!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 20/09/07 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 6

You described Dean's predicament superbly---his fear, his hope, the anguish of his decision. You really brought out Dean's conflicting concern for his father and brother. I think this scene truly portrayed that Dean is the backbone of his family. Excellent!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 20/09/07 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 5

I"m glad Sam is thinking of Dean and wanting to keep in touch. It's interesting to read his comparison between this trip and the many others he's made in his life.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 20/09/07 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 4

Good representation of emotions!

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 16/09/07 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 20

I liked this story. It had a good ending.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 16/09/07 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 18

I felt bad for Dean for trying to be honest with Cassie and her not believing him.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 16/09/07 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 17

I liked how you are showing how Sam felt about the first time he met Jessica.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 16/09/07 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 16

Good insight about how Dean think John feels about him

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 16/09/07 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 14

Sam constantly trying to fit in. I can relate to that. I think that a lot of people can. It is hard to fit in even when you have a relative normal family.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 16/09/07 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 13

Sam sleeps with a knife under his pillow just like Dean. How interesting! I like the short chapters.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 16/09/07 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 12

Chapter 12 was another good chapter. I liked that it was written using Dean's perspective. You get to see how Dean was feeling when all this was happening.

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