Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 09/10/07 12:21 PM · On: "What Doese Your Mommy Do"

So cool that Dean and John could hear Sammy call out!  The little boys sharing their favorite things with their mom and brother is so cute!  I really loved that part!

Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 09/10/07 04:21 AM · On: Stupid movies and apartment buildings

Hi raven , ok short and swet . Hope nothing is after Dean and Sammy. Many thanks Lorraine

Reviewer: Dean494 (Signed) · Date: 08/10/07 09:08 PM · On: "What Doese Your Mommy Do"

I liked very much the idea of the rawhead making copies. How are they going to find the real one ? Very nice the little guy helping Sam to drift to the protective "big brother". And also Dean´s way to deal with his feelings of guilt (at least this time Jhon did not blame him). Excellent, please go on, and update soon.

Author's Response: yeah i tried to stay away from the john blaming dean stuff

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 29/09/07 08:21 AM · On: What Do You Mean He's Gone!?

I love the bit with all the cell phones, especially the older hunters thoughts.  You would wonder why soemone was using a phone when they were in the same house.

Ooohh!  I didn't expect the rahzac to take Sammy.

Author's Response: yeah i know big twist right

Reviewer: Dean494 (Signed) · Date: 28/09/07 05:05 PM · On: What Do You Mean He's Gone!?

Oh please you can't end the chapter then.  Incredible turn to take Sam (I had bet it was going to take Dean). Please update soon !!!

Author's Response: don't worry i've got at least one more chapter maybe two

Reviewer: SeparateDear (Signed) · Date: 23/09/07 04:04 PM · On: the beginning of a very long day

cool.... more please!!!!!

you know... rahzack sounds like the name of a nasty creture from the movie 'Eragon'... they're really ugly

congrats

~kika

Reviewer: SeparateDear (Signed) · Date: 23/09/07 03:43 PM · On: The Same One

I'm confused, please more!!!!

~kika

Reviewer: SeparateDear (Signed) · Date: 23/09/07 03:26 PM · On: Stupid movies and apartment buildings

oooh, creepy... there were shivers, you have no idea of how much that creeps me out...

i'll keep reading

~kika

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 19/09/07 05:00 PM · On: Through the walls

Spooky.  Can't wait to see why the rawhead vanished.  Can there be ghost rawheads? 

Author's Response: you never know

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 16/09/07 12:56 PM · On: The Fight

Oooh, Dean sounds pissed...wonder what's going on! Looking forward to your next update!

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 16/09/07 12:53 PM · On: Extra Credit

Lol...if only you knew how imaginary these things are...I could so imagine Dean doing this in high school. Great stuff! I'm very interested to see where this goes!

Author's Response: thank you

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 15/09/07 08:36 PM · On: Stupid movies and apartment buildings

Love the shivers up the back of both boys.  when my grandmother passed away I happened to look at the clock at the exact time of death.  I found out later that my brothers and sister did the same thing.  Spooky how life works sometimes. 

Author's Response: wow that is kinda spooky