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Reviews For Picking Up Where We Left Off

Reviewer: alena (Signed) · Date: 07/10/07 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 1

I'm sorry to hear that you're discontinuing this story. I hope that you do return to it someday as it is good. Anyway-all the best to you

Reviewer: alena (Signed) · Date: 02/10/07 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 2

I've been popping in here hoping to see chapter 3. I have now managed to catch it on fanfiction and I'm still thoroughly enjoying this story.

Author's Response: Thanks, but there's a reason I didn't update here. I dropped this story. There will be no more updates in the foreseeable future, if at all. I'm done with this story.

Reviewer: alena (Signed) · Date: 26/09/07 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 2

Whoa- anti psychotic drug overdose- poor Dean! And the cop's just worried about his paperwork (- tough on him?!) and now he's trying to be all nice to John and sound sympathetic.
I liked the descriptions of the two drug/ hospital experiences overlapping in Dean's mind.
Can't wait for the next chapter1

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. I'm working on chapter 3. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: alena (Signed) · Date: 26/09/07 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great start! What on earth's happening to Dean- losing 5/6 days? I'm glad they managed to get in touch with John. At least now he'll know Dean was messing him about.
Off to read the next chapter now!

Author's Response: Thanks! Hope you enjoy chapter 2.

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 25/09/07 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 2

Dean wasn't the only one attacked? Hmmm, very interesting. I loved how John got around telling the receptionist Dean's name, instead waiting for his Alias to appear. Very clever!
~Kayla

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 24/09/07 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 2

There's so much to love about this chapter. The stream of consciousness from Dean's point of view is amazing! I felt like it was happening to me.
I also liked the know-it-all cop got put into his place by the doctor.
"A brightly lit episode in a TV horror show," great line! Hmmm...maybe cued from Hollywood Babylon?
Yes, what do you mean by did this to them? I know---read and find out.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. And yes, that line is inspired by Hollywood Babylon ^__^

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 14/09/07 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 1

Good start! The cliffhanger is going to make me wonder until the next update.
~Kayla

Author's Response:
*evil grin*
That? That's just a tiny little cliffie. Not even a really evil one... hee. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 14/09/07 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great beginning! I enjoyed the cops predicament and the way you increased the urgency of it. Also love the cliffhanger! Eager to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 14/09/07 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 1

Very exciting! Can;t wait for more!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 14/09/07 12:32 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oh woah this has definately caught my interest..I really love the start of this, can't wait to find out more!

Author's Response: I'm glad this has caught your interest. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

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