:: Supernaturalville

Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 29/12/08 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 1

...*lets out breath*...Damn...I think I had my breath held this entire story, at one point I even thought that one or both would die...cant imagine how they felt...anyway, very nice story..once again. :P

Author's Response: Thanks so much.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 18/11/08 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 1

WOW!!!!! Damn you, this was extrodinary good. All my sense where in the same place as the character of SAM. I am so going to make a copy of this and only start to read your material. Cause this one was trully a kicker. Thank You.

Author's Response: Wow...I'm flattered. Thanks so much.

Reviewer: angelica (Signed) · Date: 06/08/08 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 1

I was gripped from the first sentence.
Your awesome babe.Much love

Author's Response:
Well thank you so very much!
Laura

Reviewer: nightchills (Signed) · Date: 16/03/08 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 1

Per my job, you take a breath thru the nose and let it out thru the mouth to calm down, but minor detail for future reference. Good writing and characterization, kept my interest. Poor Sammy. That was a lot of grenades!

Author's Response: I'll remember that! Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 07/11/07 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 1

Well written, the great suspense... Very good job! So this won the second place? Congrats :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 23/10/07 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 1

Fantastic! Heaps of suspense, angst and Winchester bro moments. I was on the edge of my seat with your graphic description and Sammy's delusional and exausted self talk.
Congrats on the second placing, well deserved. Thanks for the great read!

Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
Laura

Reviewer: darthwriter (Signed) · Date: 15/10/07 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oh, you are so talented, I don't understand why this didn't win first place in the contest you entered it in. My heart was literally pounding! You are amazing. Kari

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Alexandra Martin (Signed) · Date: 17/09/07 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 1

I'm glad Sam and Dean aren't sushi. That would just be plain gross. But we'd love them anyway:)
Great story!

Author's Response:
Way gross...then I'd just have to clean it all up. Too lazy for that, so no boys go boom...lol
Thanks for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: katie_kiss (Signed) · Date: 14/09/07 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 1

love it!! =D

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 13/09/07 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 1

Very interesting! Lots of tenison and suspense! Love the Winchester sushi lines. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Noelani618 (Signed) · Date: 13/09/07 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 1

Aww! Brilliant job Laura. Dean and Sam's perceptions of what was going on were very in depth and true to character and I must say I enjoyed reading it very much. Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks so much Tamara!

Author's Response: Thanks so much Tamara!

Reviewer: POOKEE (Signed) · Date: 12/09/07 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 1

BAYRE,
NO MATTER HOW SHORT OR HOW LONG YOUR STORIES ARE EACH ALWAYS SHOWCASE YOUR WRITING TALENTS.
THE PLOT SURELY KEEPS THE READER ON HIS/HER TOES, BUT THE SUBTLE UNSPOKEN WORDS BETWEEN THE WINCHESTER BROTHERS ALWAYS CAPTURES WHAT TRULY BRINGS VIEWERS TO THE SHOW AND NOW READERS TO YOUR WORK!
GREAT WORK.

CARRY ON WAYWARD AUTHOR.
POOK

Author's Response:
Thank you, what a kind thing to say. I very much appreciate it.
Laura

Reviewer: SUPERNATANGEL67 (Signed) · Date: 12/09/07 04:25 AM · On: Chapter 1

Great story. Glad they didn't turn in to "Winchester sushi" !!!!

Author's Response:
Yeah, that would have been messy...and a waste of perfectly fine boys.
Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 11/09/07 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 1

OMG, breathtaking. Awesome job Laura, and this, "Both of them had all appendages attached.", excellent line.

Author's Response: Thanks so much Fredo, I'm glad you liked.

Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 11/09/07 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hi Laura, good story, glad they are not sushi, many thanks Lorraine

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: eye4u (Signed) · Date: 11/09/07 02:27 AM · On: Chapter 1

Whoa! Whew!
Same thinking, on how a ghost can attach Sam with bombs!!! lol! At least they are not winchester sushi!!
Nice story!!

Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 11/09/07 01:15 AM · On: Chapter 1

winchester suishi...LOL
Nice story.

Author's Response:
Hehehhee...yeah I kinda like that phrase too.
Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 11/09/07 12:34 AM · On: Chapter 1

Such a great tension filled story, Laura...think you should've gotten first place..........Thanks for sharing...

Author's Response: Thanks so much.

Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 11/09/07 12:21 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow. I really can't think what to say, Laura. I just...wow. Edge of my seat. I think this should have won that comp. ...Jules

Author's Response: Many thanks!

Reviewer: akumabarai (Signed) · Date: 10/09/07 11:39 PM · On: Chapter 1

Yowza...that was heart pounding. Well done!

Author's Response: Thanks so much.

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 10/09/07 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow, that was so heartpounding, adventurous, and of course exciting as hell! :) Great job
~Kayla

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it...thanks so much.

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 10/09/07 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 1

Are we sushi..lol. good story Laura

Author's Response: Thanks Kelly!

Reviewer: zerosbabe (Signed) · Date: 10/09/07 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 1

great story..loved the angst and torture but with a good ending

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 10/09/07 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 1

A super entry and deserving winner. Congratulations, Laura.

Author's Response: Thank you so much.

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 10/09/07 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 1

ooooh- a story after my own heart- boobytraps and grenades- gotta love it- well- except for the lack of gore- hahahaha! But no Winchester sushi- so I'm good with that!

Author's Response:
Hehehehhee..thanks for your help with the technical stuff.
L

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