Reviewer: GloomyAngel (Signed) · Date: 23/06/08 12:46 PM · On: 6. Carry On My Wayward Son

Hey Winchester-girl :D

I really enjoyed reading your story :) You did a great job!! The idea is awesome!! You wrote the Winchster-boys very true to their characters. Deans comments.... awww, such comments only can come from Dean.  "You're forehead's too hot" - " I know I'm hot. Alwas have been" I smiled when I read it. I love all the dialogs between them :)  Dean had a date with handcuffs. Again. :) Awww, it was so great. The idea is super, because if Sam hadn't done that Dean wouldn't rested in the car. And the fearsomely demon. How is the name? um...um... Ajatar?^^ What's the Finnish-legend about?? I'm snoopy :D  And the hurt Dean. Aw, I'm a little hurt/sad Dean fan and that's why I like the part, where Dean had fever and headache.Omg, the scene, where Sam carried Dean... so cute and of course at first Dean wasn't glad about Sams plan, but he didn't have a choice. I loved the part <3<3 Dean didn't sleep, felt bad all the time? Poor boy :( I really love it, that Sam cared all the time about Dean and wanted the best for him. All the halucinations. Dean must be really confused. Omg.... when Dean slept and talked to his Dad, but he forgot, that he's dead. :/ So sad. And the end was fabulous :) An happy-ending.Happy Sam, healthy Dean :D:D:D:D "I'm always okay." With you.:) Such a great sentence. What do you want more?^^

Hugs, Nessa :) 

PS: I would be glad, if you write more FF's :) 

Author's Response:

Hey Nessa! I love it when people tell me what parts or lines were their favourites, so thanks a lot for taking time to write them down. I'm thrilled you think I did great job! I try to write Winchesters as true to their characters as I can and I like writing dialogue, so these are huge compliments :) Well, if you're interested, you should look Ajatar up in wikipedia. "Ajatar ist ein böser Waldgeist." it says in German. Thanks for the encouragement! It's much appreciated :)

Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 05:40 PM · On: 6. Carry On My Wayward Son

Really enjoyed this, would never know this was a first story in English, eagerly awaiting those next efforts

Author's Response: That's very nice to hear. Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 15/10/07 05:24 PM · On: 6. Carry On My Wayward Son

Very nice ending.  I could just feel Dean's heartbreak when he thought Sam was really dead and it was the ajatar talking to him.

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot! I'm very glad so many people liked the ending!

Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 15/10/07 04:23 PM · On: 6. Carry On My Wayward Son

GOod job

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 15/10/07 08:07 AM · On: 6. Carry On My Wayward Son

Very nice job for your first story Scan, I really liked the banter for the brothers in this last chapter and the Ajatar was a pretty cool bad guy.  I'll be keeping my eye out for your next one - thanks for the read _K

Author's Response: Thank you K! I appreciate your kind reviews very much :)

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 07/10/07 10:05 AM · On: 5. Fight The Good Fight

O*M*G*Sam died, it can't be true. Poor Dean, how he can live without his little brother. I'm so riveted by this story, I can't wait for more.

Author's Response: You'll see when you'll see... Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 06/10/07 07:36 PM · On: 5. Fight The Good Fight

Very surprising!

Author's Response: Thanks! It's nice that I wasn't too predictable. 

Reviewer: jensenluva28 (Signed) · Date: 06/10/07 02:55 PM · On: 5. Fight The Good Fight

OMG that was really good. please don't let anyone die, just a little beat up. lol. keep writing can't wait for the next chapter. :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're satisfied.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 30/09/07 06:48 PM · On: 4. Stranglehold

The worst pain that doesn't even really exist---great line! 

Wonderful chapter, very interesting and mysterious!  I love learning about unique paranormal creatures!  The cliffhanger is especially good!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked that line! Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 30/09/07 08:31 AM · On: 4. Stranglehold

Terrific chapter Scanilla. Dean is connected to the Ajatar, how they're going to get rid of it without killing Dean. Captivating story, can't wait to know what'll happen next.

Author's Response:

All your reviews have been so kind. Thank you very much.

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 29/09/07 09:32 PM · On: 4. Stranglehold

Lol, you're teaching us to swear in Finnish?? Hee hee...wonderful job again, Sanna! Gotta love those random mythological creatures that pop up and start attacking Dean...looking forward to another chapter unraveling this mystery!

Author's Response:

Lol, of course. Rainer just is that kind of guy who says 'perkele' every once in a while. So, no I'm not teaching you... Unless you want!! :D But whatever... Thanks Cat!

Reviewer: Dean494 (Signed) · Date: 17/09/07 09:05 PM · On: 3. Laugh, I Nearly Died

Excellent job. The last dialogue is so tender, very nice way to let Dean show his feelings, and Sam acting like Jhon to let him know he loved them. Waiting for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm very glad you liked the last dialogue.

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 17/09/07 04:19 PM · On: 3. Laugh, I Nearly Died

Dean is weakening. In his delirious state Dean thougth that Sam was his dad, poor Sam, so hard for him. And Sam still didn't know what's wrong with his brother. I'm so loving this story so far, update soon Scanilla. 

Author's Response: It is really wonderful to hear that you're liking this so much! Thank you.