Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 16/06/08 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 12
First of all, the prank was a killer intro. Secondly thank you for having a character by the name of Alyssa, because my husband was happy to know that her daughters name was famous. Thank you!
Author's Response: No problems! And Alyssa is a great character, and a great name. Glad you liked the prank war - it was fun to write...Jules
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 16/06/08 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 11
Too intesive, but great literature to read. Which I just might continue in reading more of your stories.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm really honoured. Glad you could stick with this one....Jules
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 16/06/08 03:28 AM · On: Chapter 10
This is to close for comfort. Please no more pain with the 2 big twins.
Author's Response: Sorry about that. There's another break for them coming up...Jules
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 16/06/08 12:51 AM · On: Chapter 9
Seriously, this is getting sizziling by the moment. To almost makeing it to a CHICK-FLICK-MOMMENT. It is good. Thanks for the hard work. ++++++++++++++++++++
Author's Response: No problem. It was a bit of a challenge at times with the four boys and keeping their subtle differences - I kept having to go back to Class Dismissed to see how I wrote the au brothers...Jules
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 15/06/08 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 8
Dame it, those punked DEMONS are not going to give up. If only I were in this sene, I'd be cruzing around the block to warn them. DAMEEEEEEEEEEEEEE, see you even made me have a visual encounter of this chapter. VERY GOOD.
Author's Response: No, they won't give up so easily - the boys have quite a fight on their hands. Thank you so much for your reviews - they are gold...Jules
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 15/06/08 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 7
This chapter is throwing images to my mind. To where I can see the whole episode happening. Like a first encounter. TO KILLING the DEMONS!!! Wow, this is good. It did make me cry when the other SAM was down and hurt badly. This is to good.
Author's Response: Thank you for that. There's a bit of recovery before the next bit of action - time to get your breath...Jules
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 15/06/08 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 6
I do hope that their is hope for them two and I certanly hope the double DEANS get there in time this is to frantic for me.
Author's Response: There is hope - I don't do death fics. Hope you can hang on for just a little bit longer...Jules
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 15/06/08 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 5
Oh man, whats next?
Author's Response: Glad you're still with me - hope you're enjoying it...Jules
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 15/06/08 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 4
Interesting, the war is just to begin. Very Very good.
Author's Response: Yep, the twins are about to get into some deep trouble...Jules
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 15/06/08 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 3
Although, it is confusing it is getting better. Thanks
Author's Response: Thank you for the review - glad it's getting a wee bit clearer for you now. The "au" in front of their names helps a bit...Jules
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 15/06/08 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 2
Okay, this is getting a bit confusing. I am understanding how their doubles have gone almost through the same situation as the original, but of course, different. This just gets better and better every time.
Author's Response: Thanks for that. I left it a wee bit confusing at the start, sort of to give the reader an inkling of what the boys are going through. It's not every day you meet - yourself....Jules
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 15/06/08 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 1
This is going to be a dejuv episode this is very scary, but it will be very interesting to continue reading.
Author's Response: Thank you - and welcome again. This is a little confusing at the start, bit it will become clearer as we get along...Jules
Reviewer: sammarinade (Signed) · Date: 28/02/08 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 2
Love the chapter note there, "two Deans-one shower-and nowhere near enough hot water"..trust me, I'm reading the next one now!
Author's Response: Ahh, the shower fights. Yes, two Deans and one shower can only mean trouble. Glad you're along for the ride....Jules
Reviewer: sammarinade (Signed) · Date: 28/02/08 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 1
Love the story, I've read the first one too! But I got to admit...took me sometime there to figure out who was who...even with the help of the 1st Dean and 2nd Dean thing going on. Nice start, can't wait to read the rest!
Author's Response: Thank you. Yes, it was a bit confusing. I sort of wanted to reflect the situation the boys found themselves in - the utter craziness of meeting yourself. It gets clearer in the next chapters. Thank you for reading...Jules
Reviewer: yitara (Signed) · Date: 11/12/07 02:24 PM · On: Epilogue
Wonderful story! I loved your characterizations of Sam and Dean (both sets!) and the differences between them after the realities diverge. I can't wait for your next story.
Author's Response: Thank you. I had to keep going back to Class Dismissed to make sure I had the au brothers right, with their tiny little differences. I'm glad you loved it so much - makes all the hard work worth it...Jules
Reviewer: garvaldmains (Signed) · Date: 08/12/07 02:17 PM · On: Epilogue
I've left it til the epilogue to comment - as i couldnt stop reading... You are so committed and so good. Well done honey. Thank you for this, I so enjoyed it. Di x x, Buckinghamshire, England
Author's Response: Thank you, Di. Oh, I see you're from England - my wonderful friend and beta, Sarah, is in Surrey. A long way from Australia, but thank heavens for email and MSN! Thank you so much - I'm chuffed that you enjoyed it. I love to write, although I am a Nervous Nellie when it comes to posting. It thrills me when people review. It's been a wonderfully crazy ride with this one. Thanks again....Jules
Reviewer: eye4u (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 10:11 PM · On: Epilogue
What a nice ending to your very good written story!!! Bravo!!! clap clap clap!!! You are right! This is the longest story!!! But it is worth it!! Kudos!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I couldn't believe how long this one got. I kept asking my wonderful friend and beta if it was too long, and she bluntly told me to stay away from the delete key! Thank you so much for going the distance with it...Jules
Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 09:19 PM · On: Epilogue
oh that was such a good story. i'm so sad to see it end! it was the perfect ending though...absolutely perfect. and i loved drunk sam... totally made me laugh when he believed dean that bobby wouldn't notice. this was an awesome story and i loved every minute of it...even if you had some of the most evil cliff-hangers.
Author's Response: Thank you, hon. I did have some very evil cliffies, didn't I? I think the warehouse blowing up was an even more evil cliffie than the one of Dean falling over the edge of the three storey drop in Who You Gonna Call. I outdid myself there.... I loved writing drunk Sam - that scene was actually one of the first things to be written, believe it or not. Thank you so much for your awesome reviews throughout, and thanks for lasting the distance on this very long ride.....Jules
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 08:59 PM · On: Epilogue
Oooh, I'm looking forward to reading the next story. I'm sad that this one is done. This was truly a fantastic story. I loved every bit of it! ~Kayla
Author's Response: Thank you, Kayla. It was fun, scary, angsty, hair-tearing frustrating, but once I got to drunk!Sam I knew I was in the home stretch. I'm glad that it was so well received. It's funny - up till Class Dismissed, I'd never written a long story before. And now the sequel is even longer. Wonder if the au universe is affecting me.....LOL. Thanks hon...Jules
Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 07:16 PM · On: Epilogue
Great job can't wait for the next one
Author's Response: Thank you, and thank you for the reviews and the encouragement. I hit a bit of a rough patch there for awhile, and your words really meant a lot. Glad you liked it so much....Jules
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 05:12 PM · On: Epilogue
awesome Jules, and you wrapped it up perfectly. I loved everything in this story, including its lengt. And will be there for the next one of course. Thanks for the terrific read my friend.
Author's Response: Thank you honey - and thank you for all the bribes and incentives you sent me. I have saved every one of those yummy Dean and Jensen piccies, to drool over when I need inspiration. Thanks for hanging around until the end - whew, this was a long one, wasn't it? Goodness me...anyway, the next one is hitting the boards very, very soon. Thanks, my dear friend....Jules
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 12:13 PM · On: Epilogue
This is a beautiful story. Sorry to see it end, but there's nothing in this chapter I'd have changed. I certainly look forward to your next. Thank you, Angela
Author's Response: Thank you, Angela. I must get over to yours during the Christmas break - I'm intrigued by My Name Is Jessica, so I'll have a peek at that one first. I was worried that I'd made our Dean too chick-flicky at the end, but my beta threatened to cut my fingers off if I went anywhere near the Delete key, so.... And in my defence, he did brush Sam's hair away from his eyes just before he died in Dean's arms. It was just a continuation of that emotion that I tried to convey. Anyway, so glad you could come along for the ride. Thank you....Jules
Reviewer: Stock1210 (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 10:37 AM · On: Epilogue
Beautiful....I await your next story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. The next one is not too far away, and it's much shorter than this one - lol. This one almost wore my fingertips down. But I'm glad you enjoyed it....Jules
Author's Response: Thank you so much. The next one is not too far away, and it's much shorter than this one - lol. This one almost wore my fingertips down. But I'm glad you enjoyed it....Jules
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 10:17 AM · On: Epilogue
OMG.... this was FANTASTIC!!!!!!!! I don't know where to begin- you are AWESOME!!!!! I totally loved the story. It was AMAZING. Your timing, tone, verbage-the inter action of the doubles-the poignant moments throughout the story. The pain of loss and impending loss-so real, so now- it brought tears as i read it. The Deans total love of the "kids" - heart breaking. You have a TOYAL package here that defines what a writer hopes to accomplish. YOU ARE A MASTER WRITER AND STORYTELLER !!!!!!!! BRAVO
Author's Response: Oh my goodness! I don't quite know what to say. I'm blushing. Well, first of all, thank you so much for that awesome review. And all the pretty stars, too. I'm really glad you loved it so much. I had a battle with this one, and my beta was just about to clock me over the head if I'd asked one more time if she was sure I should leave in the scene where Dean is stroking Sam's hair while he sleeps off the alcohol. But it was fun to do as well, such as the two Sams having THAT conversation...LOL. I'm glad that it was so well-received and that it entertained you so much. That's my reward, if I've made people happy. Thank you...Jules
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 08:38 AM · On: Epilogue
Ah, Jules post and post fast cause I'm not sure what to do with myself if I don't have one of your stories to read...This was so well done I can't begin to tell you, anytime you wanna go back and visit those AU-Winchesters I'm game. As for the length I gotta be honest Inever even noticed - Great Job and thanks for the read :)
Author's Response: Thank you Kel - lol. This story grew to a surprising length, and I ended up with a beta out of it, too. I might peep in at the au brothers again some time. After all, if there's a raven amulet in our reality, then..... Thanks for the support - it really means a lot...Jules
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