Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 22/06/09 02:06 AM · On: Epilogue
This is a very determind and creative and I liked it emensly. Very powerful message.
Author's Response: Thank you, not only for coming back, but for commenting again. I'm glad that you liked it just as much the second time around.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 22/06/09 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 17
Through think n' thin I as a reader will follow. I do like the combination of twins telling their verison of SAM'S dream and since they know it was a scam you have been able to acheive the ultimate goal as to acheive different views of the situation and how the other two are able to deal with a situation that has not happen yet.
Author's Response: Thank you for that. And yes, I liked the symmetry of the boys telling their respective twins what happened in the dream, so that they can change the future and their ultimate fate.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 21/06/09 04:40 AM · On: Chapter 16
I do seriously hate that line of the aulet being gone and if those snot nose kide took them. I'd personaly kick wip their ass.
Author's Response: No, it wasn't the kids. The culprit is way closer than that. But don't worry, the amulet will be found - or rather, returned...
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 21/06/09 03:34 AM · On: Chapter 15
I do enjoy what is on your tablet of work. ? How do you come with these images ? I feel that every breath that you take you are writing a sonet as if you are a musican, but in scriptive form and I do appuled you for it. Thanks.
Author's Response: Thank you - I just let my mind wander off, and this is what it comes back with. Basically, I play out the scene in my head based on how I think the boys will react, then I put it down on paper. And hopefully it translates the way I see it.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 20/06/09 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 14
I can not awiat for what lies for the two knuckle heads. When Dean comes around.
Author's Response: LOL. Well, at least with the story finished, you don't have to wait long - just click on the 'Next' button....
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 20/06/09 06:23 AM · On: Chapter 13
This is another time where I' d seriously have to kick your ass. Secondly, what the hell does the demon want with SAM2?
Author's Response: Another kick? I'm beginning to get a wee bit paranoid... As for what the demon wants with Sam2 - he wants them both gone. Both are a threat in their respective realities. But methinks he's bitten off a wee bit more than he can chew....
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 20/06/09 02:29 AM · On: Chapter 12
I don't know if I should kick your sorry ass for being a hell of a creator in structure to stories. Or simply just one cocky, and/or un-upstanding citizen for allowing your scriptive writeing to allow a demon to be able to fruitfully think it has even a penaut of a brain to believe it is victorious. I adire you and thank you for a kick ass story that if I was protrayd as a character of course the HUNTERS SIDE then I would be very happy that you are wirting story's that make a readr not only sense what is happening but aslo becoe a hunter and analyze the situation. So, thanks alot.
Author's Response: Um - oookay - no one's threatened to kick my sorry arse before, so that's a first. But you've said you're still enjoying the story, so I suppose that must be kicking in a good way.....
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 19/06/09 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 11
I can not say that this story is like any other story, but its filled with realism. I do think that is why i'm still reading it to its fullest.
Author's Response: Thank you for that.This story sort of turned into a bit of a monster - even I didn't know that it would get so long and involved. But there was a lot to tell, so I just kept running with it.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 19/06/09 06:40 AM · On: Chapter 10
DAMN, find a way to killjoy the moment of unity. I enjoy the wstablishment of the differances you placed amongest the 4 WINCHESTERS and their surroundings as well as their other associates. Its even scary to me at times to note that the AU - SAM was the weak one and ends up bing a hero to his twin sibling sort of speak.
Author's Response: Sometimes the weakest ones can turn out to be the strongest fighters when cornered. And ultimately, Au-Sam is still Sam, despite the damage done to his mind and body by the YED. He still has that big heart and drive to protect.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 19/06/09 12:53 AM · On: Chapter 9
This is hopefully going for the HUNTERS approvel in kicking some DEMONIZED ASS'S. The way it is established with the scenery is going great. Thanks.
Author's Response: Oh, there will definitely be some demon-kicking in the very near future, don't worry. With four Winchesters, how can there not be? That demon won't know what hit him...
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 18/06/09 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 8
You have made this story incredibly strong. You have me very anxouis and my ind is sensing the situation and being a part of the story itself. I'm not even a hunter go figure . . . I'd like to be though.
Author's Response: Thank you. I've done my job as a storyteller if I've pulled you so deeply into the tale. Hope I can keep you there till the very end.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 18/06/09 08:19 AM · On: Chapter 7
This is very educational for Dean that not only does he do a deal with the devil so will saim
Author's Response: Yes, Sam would willingly trade his life to save his brother - no doubt about it. And now we've seen proof that it is true on the show.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 18/06/09 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 6
If it where possible then that would deffently help.
Author's Response: I'm sure it would. Thanks for sticking with it a second time.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 18/06/09 03:41 AM · On: Chapter 5
Not good couldn't au SAM have the power to transmit to au DEAN as to what was going on? You are good.
Author's Response: Unfortunately, the demon has Au-Sam way too rattled at this point. But don't worry, help's coming for the twins.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 18/06/09 02:25 AM · On: Chapter 4
This is going to be a very HUGE NIGHTMARE for the TWIN SAMS & DENO HE WILL BE MORE PISSED THEN HELL (DOUBLE AND THE ROCKS).
Author's Response: Both Deans are going to be pretty pissed - and what's worse than an angry Dean? Two angry Deans.....watch out, demons - double trouble's coming....
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 17/06/09 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 3
This is still confusing with the ORIGINAL TO AU, but i'm getting the hang of it. And again, if i haven't said thank you I will.
Author's Response: It got a bit confusing to write as well - bear with me though. It won't take long to work out who is who.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 17/06/09 06:23 AM · On: Chapter 2
The next one as you stated will be a bitch. This is a bit confusing, but it is worth it. Thanks.
Author's Response: Thank you. Yes, it is a wee bit confusing - the reader is in the same boat as the boys here. But it will become clearer as time goes on, I promise.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 17/06/09 01:14 AM · On: Chapter 1
This is spoky as hell . . . I'd like to be able to do that, and hopefully change a little bit of the past.
Author's Response: I'm sure we'd all love to swap realities from time to time. Welcome back - I see it's been about a year since you last popped in and read this. Thank you for coming back again.
Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 26/03/09 01:02 PM · On: Epilogue
Well, that was just one of the most beautiful and well-written stories I've ever read, in my entire life. You have quite an imagination, and an extremely amazing talent at putting it into words. I especially love the ending, just...beautiful. :')
Author's Response: Oh my gosh - thank you so much for that. This was a first for me in a few ways - first sequel, first long story, first sex scene, so it was a bit out of my comfort zone. It's good to know that I got it right. Thank you once again. Jules
Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 25/03/09 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 9
I freakin HATE THOSE DEMONS! They're so mean!...guess I'm kinda really into this story. ;P
Author's Response: LOL - I suppose you are! And yep, the demons are mean SOB's. But don't worry - revenge Winchester-style is coming - and a double helping at that. Jules
Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 25/03/09 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 2
Wow...two Sams...two Deans..four Winchesters! This is like fantasy land! I sooooooo wish they'd do an episode like this for real! ;D
Author's Response: Yep, four Winchesters - and didn't I have a hard time keeping them straight! But then again, I had double the fun, so that was the trade-off. And I loved the interaction between both sets of twins - it was fun to write their dual reactions. Jules
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 17/06/08 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 17
No, no, no, no, its so not boring. Please don tell me that the other SAM tells the other SAM of what happens next after DEAN passe's.
Author's Response: Thanks for that. And as for what Sam told au-Sam - well, hope you can read on to the epilogue and see....Jules
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 17/06/08 04:52 AM · On: Chapter 16
This is a terrific setr scene for the Supernatural show. I don't know if there realy is a number to rate it. ALL I can say is that their was to much imploding effects to this piece that you should know that I would like to read it over and over again. THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Wow - thank you so much. This story grew into even more of a monster than the original. There was just so much to tell - and I did begin to worry that it would never end - lol. I'm glad you're still along for the ride...Jules
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 16/06/08 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 15
This is trully a thriller.
Author's Response: Ahh, see - there's my love for Agatha Christie coming out again. I just love twisty plots. And cliffhangers - I'm rather addicted to those...LOL...Jules
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 16/06/08 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 14
No I can basiclly feel the situation from here. You are playing below the belt line, but it is a damn good one.
Author's Response: Wow - thank you. I'm glad that you are being moved by the story...Jules
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