Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 25/09/07 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 4
Oooooh...lol, that's all I can say really. Awesome chapter...
Author's Response: Thanks for that. Chapter 5 ends with a bang - hope you can stick around...Jules
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 25/09/07 07:20 AM · On: Chapter 3
Lol! This is a great chapter, mizpah! Wonderful job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for that. Hope the next chapters give you just as much pleasure...Jules
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 23/09/07 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 3
I can't get over this...I mean Sam and Dean are amazing, but two Sam's and two Dean's is heaven! That was very touching with the Sam's comforting each other. I loved it! ~Kayla
Author's Response: Thanks Kayla - actually, the two Sams will be spending a lot of time with each other - and they may even help each other to heal some of the wounds they are carrying. And of course, you have all four of them fighting for the shower...Jules
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 23/09/07 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 2
Great chapter, and from you're little summary, the next update seems just as promising! ~Kayla
Author's Response: Thanks, Kayla - hope it lives up to expectations...Jules
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 23/09/07 04:35 PM · On: Chapter 3
wow, really have to be concentrate to read this story! And four Winchesters in a small appartment is something very distracting, i'm so close of the gutter right now, and mentioning a shower scene surely won't help! Anyway, great update, can't wait to see Bobby jump in, man, the poor guy will have two deal with twice more Winchester than usual, this is gonna be pure fun...
Author's Response: Bobby is up next, after the shower scene. Hope you enjoy, hon - this next chapter gave me a bit of trouble - I hope you like it. It's not often I get writer's block, but I sure did with chapter 4....Jules
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 16/09/07 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 3
That was awesome. Loved the brotherly moments and the conversations. Great to have the AU brothers warned about the set up. I'm hooked, can wait to know which Dean'll end up with a cold shower.
Author's Response: Thank you, Oceane - yes, one Dean gets cold water - and he's not happy...glad you like the brotherly moments - it's double the fun to write, but double the headache to keep them all straight. Dean is easy - the two Sams are a challenge. Hopefully I will keep on the mark - thanks hon, as always...Jules
Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 16/09/07 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 3
i am definately staying tuned. this was a great chapter and i totally loved the banter in the beginning between the deans. anxiously awaiting the next update
Author's Response: Thank you - there are a few heart-to-heart talks between the siblings in upcoming chapters, as well as some drama - there is a demon on the loose, after all, and he's getting closer to our doe-eyed boys...thanks so much for reading...Jules
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 16/09/07 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 3
Sooooo not nice to promise a shower scene and then not deliver.... bad girl! Awesome chapter anyway, though.... Loved the two Dean's flanking the door to eavesdrop. And Dean making Dean cook and Sammy using his "eyes" on himself - LOL. Great mix of humour and drama again, Jules! Looking forward to Bobby, as always....
Author's Response: I know (hangs head) - bit of Alzheimer's there - sorry...but Dean shower fight is definitely in the next chapter. And we see Bobby's reaction to a double scoop of Winchester heaven. Glad you liked the puppy dog eyes bit - it was fun to write - and personally, I don't think Sam would be immune, either...Jules
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 16/09/07 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 2
How the hell did I miss this? What a fabulous story - I'm going to really have to keep my wits about me to figure out who is who - and not be distracted by TWO Deans in the room - *sigh*. Love how they know what the other will do... - esp the coffee and whiskey - perfect!
Author's Response: Thanks Lisa - and shower Dean in this next chapter. Lots of sibling interaction coming up - wouldn't you like to sneak in the back door of that apartment?...Jules
Reviewer: eye4u (Signed) · Date: 16/09/07 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 3
This story is SOOOOOO GOOOOD! You were able to write in grit detail on how the story I felt should play out! Its really so nice!! Makes me feel cuddly all over whenever the twins of each sibling interact!!! I would definitely stay tune on this story!!!! Please write soon! Cheers!
Author's Response: Thank you for that - there is definitely more twin sibling interaction in the next few chapters. I'm very pleased you like it - it's a bit hard sometimes writing the two Sams, remembering that one is broken. Hopefully I will continue to deliver for you...Jules
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 13/09/07 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 2
So much emotion in this chapter with the tale of both Sam's dreams. And now a demon is after them. So captivating. Amazing work so far Jules. Two Deans and one shower, can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks, hon. Yes, that demon that came through is bent on mischief. Actually, I goofed on that little tidbit - the shower fight is in chapter 4 - sorry. But Dean cooks in chapter 3....Jules
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 12/09/07 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 2
oh my, can't wait! Great chapter Jules, hope to find a lot more in eight days when back from my vaca.
Author's Response: Don't know about that, hon - but I hope you have a good holiday. Take lots of happy snaps. Hopefully the next chapter will be up in the next couple of days...Jules
Reviewer: Stock1210 (Signed) · Date: 12/09/07 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 2
Class Dismissed, and now this? You are brilliant.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you for that. I hope you like this one...Jules
Reviewer: SUPERNATANGEL67 (Signed) · Date: 11/09/07 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 2
Loved Class Dismissed. And with twice the Winchesters am loving this one. Can't wait for next chappie.
Author's Response: Thank you - I'm glad you enjoyed CD - I hope you like this one too. And yes, with two lots of brothers this is definitely going to have its funny moments...Jules
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 11/09/07 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 2
Ohhhhh my....mizpah, this is fantastic!!!! I have no other word...well, synonyms...lol, phenomenal, wondrous, amazing, fantabulous, awesome, awesomer, incredible...keep going soooooon, please!
Author's Response: Goodness - well, I hope the next chapter lives up to those expectations - hmm, the pressure's on...Jules
Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 11/09/07 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 2
oooo...i am so lovin the way this is shaping up! and i totally love the allusion to the next chapter. And thanks for marking the brothers with au...makes it so much easier to follow. This is getting better and better and i can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you for that - I hope you keep enjoying it...Jules
Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 09/09/07 11:53 PM · On: Chapter 1
wow...just...wow! I was totally expecting Sam to ask the other one about his own dream but i guess that's for the next chapter. This is so eerie and a tad confusing with the whole dean sam dean sam...label them dean a and dean b or something coz i was having a hard time following which brother was doing what...but I really really liked this. Killer opening to the sequel...i thought the first one was good but i get the feeling this one will be even better. Can't wait to see what happens next
Author's Response: Yes, it is a bit confusing to start with, but it will become clearer in the next chapter. And thank you - I'm glad you enjoyed CD. That one took a lot out of me. Hope the sequel doesn't disappoint. And yes, Sam's dream will be revealed - he will remember his dream in the next chapter...Jules
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 09/09/07 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 1
Loved the idea behind this story, alternate reality, very interesting, I'm already captived. Terrific start Jules, I so can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks Oceane. It was just a chance remark from Windyfontaine about the shower scene when Sam sees his alternate self in the mirror that got me thinking - and here is the end result. Hope you enjoy it, hon...Jules
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 09/09/07 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 1
Interesting.... I'm really curious to see where you go with this. Very different... Love how you give us just enough informaion and yet it feels disjointd - in a good way - that reflects the plot....
Author's Response: Thanks Lisa. Yes, it is confusing - and Sam remembers his own dream in the next chapter...Jules
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 09/09/07 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 1
yes yes yes, exciting! So, hum, it's a sequel, but also a prequel, because, it happened before the events of Class Dismissed. Cause in this universe, well, Dean was killed. Ok, i'm alredy hooked anyway, twice more Winchesters can only be good! Can't wait for more...
Author's Response: Yes, you're right, hon - it is sort of a prequel, as the school is not quite open yet. So what will be the result of Sam revealing his dream - if he remembers?...Jules
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 09/09/07 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 1
Sweet! This is a really cool idea, mizpah. Class Dismissed was a great story, too--glad you decided to do a sequel!!!Great job so far! Looking forward to the rest of it!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked Class Dismissed. I did lose a few people along the way with that one - some didn't like the twist. It always thrills me to hear that someone enjoyed it. Hope you like this one too...Jules
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