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Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 23/06/09 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 3

“You don’t get to decide what your life is worth Dean. I do.” Yay Sammy! It's about time someone told Dean what he's worth.
A wonderful story and you balanced the emo and the grit perfectly!

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 14/09/07 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 3

Lovely rholou, not too over the top at all. Sam's anger stopped it from being too emotional, though it's hard to say how you could get TOO emotional about the situation Dean is in. And I completely agree with you about the "Hell" part of the deal. Great work!

Author's Response: Thankyou so much for taking the time to review my story, i'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 14/09/07 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 2

Okya, you've redeemed Missouri in my eyes! Nice for Sam to get a glimpse of the ordeal that was Dean's childhood too. You know where I'm going now, right?

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 14/09/07 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 1

A great start rholou, like the way you've described the effect Dean's deal is having on both of them. I must confess to having mixed feelings about Missouri (if I've guessed correctly about where you're heading!) so I'm reading straight on.....

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 13/09/07 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 3

WOW... great story!!!. The thought of what hell is really like would scare anyone, even the stoic Dean Winchester. You have captured the boys reactions and feelings perfectly.
Missouri is one of my favorite characters-she really does love Dean and Sam. I find her tactics with Dean priceless. Leave it to her and her spoon to get the boys on track again.
Bravo to a master storyteller.!!!!!!

a fan

Author's Response: thankyou so much for your lovely review. i really appreciate it, thanks.

Reviewer: SUPERNATANGEL67 (Signed) · Date: 12/09/07 06:02 AM · On: Chapter 3

Great story!!

Author's Response: Thankyou.

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 11/09/07 01:34 AM · On: Chapter 3

Didnt think it was over the top at all. I really liked it.

Author's Response: Thankyou, I'm pleased you liked it.

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 11/09/07 01:24 AM · On: Chapter 2

I like Missouri. Love how she just gets all Motherly on Dean...
good job

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 11/09/07 01:19 AM · On: Chapter 1

pretty good

Reviewer: eye4u (Signed) · Date: 11/09/07 12:32 AM · On: Chapter 3

I so like the ending!
A very nice interaction between Dean and Missouri! Who more can read him better than her!
And excellently done! You were able to write the various feelings of Dean! The angst, fear, weakness, then the sudden absence of it all, by just simply grinning while Sam pouts! Awesome!
And nice one having Missouri whacking him with a spoon! No speaking of that topic in that house! hahaha!
Grand Canyon! They really like this place!!!
Good one!!!

Author's Response: Thankyou for the great review, glad you liked it.

Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 10/09/07 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 3

Loved it!! Gosh...I wish Missouri would come back!!

Author's Response: Me too, but I can't really see it happening though. Fingers crossed.

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 10/09/07 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 3

Wonderful finish! I think I agree with your assessment of Dean.

Author's Response: Thanks, glad to know someone's on the same page as me.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 10/09/07 09:59 AM · On: Chapter 2

I'm glad you had this idea for a story. I like Missouri and it's obvious she has a special fondness for Dean. Good to see you filling in the gaps from the show. Very creative!

Author's Response: I'm glad someone else sees it the same way I do. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 10/09/07 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 2

gotta love missouri putting Sam to work, Nice - K

Author's Response:
Thanks!

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 10/09/07 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 1

Nice start, and you have to love a story that involves Missouri

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I love Missouri.

Reviewer: eye4u (Signed) · Date: 10/09/07 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 2

I approve, Missouri is a good choice!
Missouri seemed to be able to meet Dean earliest, even before Bobby, coz, this would be weeks after Mary's death, and John is not a hunter yet!
Going to wait for your update!

Author's Response: Glad you approve. I hope you like the final part.

Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 09/09/07 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 2

Hi Rhona, sorry got carried away and forgot to review chapter 1.Really like your writing, had a lump in my throat while reading. Can`t wait for next chapter, many thanks Lorraine

Author's Response: wow, thanks, nice to know i can affect someone like that.

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 09/09/07 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 2

Missouri's a fun character, really. I hope she gets to be in more episodes in season 3! I like how Sam keeps struggling to understand his brother...looking forward to more!

Author's Response: i loved Missouri, I loved the way she was with the boys in the episode.

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 09/09/07 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 2

I think you broke my heart with the mention of little Dean holding Sammy so tightly and not letting him go. And him not speaking either. Ahhhhhhhh.

Author's Response: thankyou, i always pictured Dean as such a broken little boy, partly why he's so good at hiding his feelings now.

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 08/09/07 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hmm, interesting so far!

Author's Response: thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 08/09/07 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 1

Good beginning! Lots of mystery. Are they going back to Lawrence Kansas to see Missouri Moseley?

Author's Response: now that would be telling would'nt it.

Reviewer: Harlech (Signed) · Date: 08/09/07 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 1

Sorry - not enough of the story to offer an opinion but enough to want to read more...so keep it coming please....

Author's Response: hope you like the rest.

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 08/09/07 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 1

Interesting! I'm intrigued by this woman. Picking on Dean??? Ohmy...what kind of evil, unnatural person would do that? Lol...this is great, rholou! And the angst is upped by the Demon Deal factor...nice! So yes...wanting more...

Author's Response: glad you're liking it, thanks for reviewing again!

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