Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 09/12/07 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 3 Out of the frying pan and into the fire
ohoh! She's got Dean's blood and is eye-ing him up literally!! Scary as hell lout! Bird x
Author's Response: Now let's face it, who wouldn't want those eyes???
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 09/12/07 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 2 Sheep in wolf's clothing.
lout, Lout! What are you saying every piece of clothing Dean wears fits to perfection 'cause that bod IS perfection so leave off him! Jeeze so he has the occasional burger! And! I think I stayed in that motel but it was in Lake Louise Alberta! Carpet stains of unknown origin - Uggh! Reading on! Bird x
Author's Response: ...lol..you're absolutely right of course, but if I were to write about Dean's... '...taut rippling muscles under alabaster skin, dusted with tawny freckles, covered in nothing but thin white cotton...' *sighs* ...okay, just forgot what I was talking about...see what I mean!!
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 09/12/07 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 1 Of pickles and pies
Lout. This is just fab. Bonnie is too creepy  for words. Good job Dean's here to hold my hand or I'd be scared! Love the 'You do know you're adopted!' line that just so cracked me up, that's my boy - such a wit! Gonna read on now and review each chappy not that I think you would ever be a review slut! Bev xxx
Author's Response: lol...never been called a 'review slut' before but I think you've hit the nail on the head there...Thanks birdie, glad you're liking and moving on...
Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 28/11/07 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 4 Ice cubes and Eskimos
Now that was just a terrible thing to do!! Great chapter -- please more.
Author's Response: I'm sorry mtee, I must have been feeling particularly evil the day I wrote this one. Next update won't be too long and thanks for the review!
Reviewer: JMDoody (Signed) · Date: 26/11/07 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 4 Ice cubes and Eskimos
Okay, I want to say that after waiting a month and then leaving that nice little cliffie, you HAVE to update soon. As in very soon. I love your villain by the way. She's the perfect blend of creepy and well, creepy. lol
Author's Response: ooops - I am truly sorry for the delay - won't happen again! Got sidetracked with 'Better to burn...' This is mostly planned, just needs putting down on paper...lol, but isn't that what we all say! Thanks for the review and the rating JM - they mean the world and make me write faster!!!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 26/11/07 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 4 Ice cubes and Eskimos
"...some ancient monster all wrapped up in little old lady skin." Hilarious! Wow! Dean's in for a world of trouble now. How exciting!
Author's Response: 'A world of trouble' - that's just about exactly right, lol. Thanks for the review Shannon.
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 25/11/07 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 4 Ice cubes and Eskimos
OMG, what a cliffy!!! I love it and can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Cliffy's are always good!!! Thanks for R&R Ness!
Reviewer: heather03nmg (Signed) · Date: 25/11/07 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 4 Ice cubes and Eskimos
You're killing me with these cliffies. You know you're supposes to save the torture for Dean. not us poor readers! Loved the chapter, you do an amazing job writing creepy old ladies, I shall be forever suspicious of sweet, pie making old women. Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks heather, maybe it's cos I'm turning into one...need to start watching cookery programs! Thanks for the rating and review, hope you continue to enjoy!
Reviewer: Kumaproogey (Signed) · Date: 20/11/07 01:01 AM · On: Chapter 3 Out of the frying pan and into the fire
Your writing is strong & paints a descriptive picture that really brings to life the events. You definitely had me completely interested with all the suspense. You let enough slip to keep me wanting more & curious to see where it was going, but still kept the mystery. Can't wait to see where this leads!
Author's Response: Thanks Kuma - I'm very glad you're enjoying the ride, there should be an update to this story very soon!
Reviewer: bernie62 (Signed) · Date: 28/10/07 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 3 Out of the frying pan and into the fire
good story. keep going. I like the way you lay out a new story line of the old "if it isn't evil...we don't kill it". This is very very clever.
Author's Response: Thanks bernie, next chapter won't be long - working on it right now in fact.
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 10/10/07 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 3 Out of the frying pan and into the fire
Wow louy what has the creepy Bonnie got in store for Deans eyes? Great update Lorraine
Author's Response: Cheers Lorraine, more to follow soonish!
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 10/10/07 01:35 AM · On: Chapter 3 Out of the frying pan and into the fire
Terrific semi-cliffy bulletbabe. Hurry back with more please!
Author's Response: Thanks ciel, there's definately something to be said for the humble semi-cliffy!
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 09/10/07 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 3 Out of the frying pan and into the fire
Lol, bullet...seeeeemi cliffie? Muuuuy interesante!!! I'm really interested to know why all these crazy people want to kill Dean...I think your title explains it a little bit...but still, I'm veeeery curious! Lol, I can barely type my hands are so numb, but here I am...trying my best to give you a decent review and unfrozen cookies...possibly some leftover cupcakes...just because they're in the freezer doesn't mean they aren't delicious! And, um...yeah. :D Awesome chapter!
Author's Response: Well, I thought it was a semi! Thanks for the review Shiny, and my lovely frozen cookies - they last longer like that!! P.S.Blue frosting was just for you!!
Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 09/10/07 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 3 Out of the frying pan and into the fire
Glad to have another chapter. What do these old ladies have against our Dean??
Author's Response: Good question, all will be revealed soon, I promise. Thanks for the review mtee.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 09/10/07 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 3 Out of the frying pan and into the fire
Great chapter! This is getting so exciting! Can't wait to find out what type of spell Miss Francis is going to perform. Dean's a little young to be her beau.
Author's Response: Eeeuwwww - I hadn't even thought about that Shannon. (fingers crossed behind back) No, she has much better plans for him than that - next chap wont be long - Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: JMDoody (Signed) · Date: 09/10/07 12:00 PM · On: Chapter 3 Out of the frying pan and into the fire
I'm a huge fan of this story and it's only partly because my mom is a Bonnie and this reminds me of her...wow, that makes me sound like a bad daughter. Oops. Anyway, this is a great chapter. I loved the part where Sam calls Dean 'oldist'. He does seem to have an unnatural aversion to the elderly. lol Can't wait for the next chapter. I'll be waiting.
Author's Response: I'm so sorry to have used your mom's name for my main villain - I'm sure your mum's lovely!!! Not like my Bonnie at all!! Glad you're enjoying this so far - next few chaps. are planned out already so shouldn't be too long. Thanks for the review and the rating JM
Reviewer: denise (Signed) · Date: 05/10/07 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 1 Of pickles and pies
A GRATE STOREY KEEP GOING
Author's Response: Thanks denise, Its great you've started reviewing, next chapter should be up very soon. Hope you enjoy all the other stories as well. And checkout the Virtual Season - if you haven't already, they're fantastic.
Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 28/09/07 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 2 Sheep in wolf's clothing.
Well that's just an evil thing to do! This is an interesting story. I've got questions -- but I'll be patient and wait for you to write the answers. Thanks
Author's Response: I like doing evil things. Hopefully all questions will be answered soon, but there are a few twists along the way. Thanks for the review mtee.
Reviewer: Kumaproogey (Signed) · Date: 26/09/07 11:16 PM · On: Chapter 2 Sheep in wolf's clothing.
Good description of the captured man in the beginning, disturbingly good. I also like the Bonnie character & how she appears to be a sweet, elderly, grandmotherly type & has a dark, dark secret. I like how she interacts with her captor. I love how you portray the rapport between the brothers, most evident when they are talking about the job & the money – seemed very true to the show. Can't wait to see where this leads. You've set this story up like a typical real episode b/c it has a beginning unrelated to the brothers but related to the upcoming case – gets you hooked & leads us (& the brothers) to solve the case (together)
Author's Response: Thank you VERY much for this, it's a really thoughtful review and I appreciate it. Its good to hear about the parts of a story that work, and I tried to think hard about the structure of this one. Thanks again K. reviews like this are like goldust.
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 22/09/07 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 2 Sheep in wolf's clothing.
Ahhhh! Cliffie, bullet!!!!! Oh you triiiieeedd... XDI'm sorry, I keep finding hilarious things in here... "Damn those burgers and their chilly cheese goodness..." Lol!!!!! Yes. Now. The matter of the cliffhanger...when're you putting another chapter up????? Lol, I love the story by the way. Very intriguing!
Author's Response: LoL Thanks Shiny, working on cliffie for next chapter now, specially for you! shouldn't be too long. Really pleased you like it!
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 22/09/07 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 1 Of pickles and pies
Lol, Lou!!!!! This is really great! That first part was just sooooo creepy, and then this..."I'm sure we can rescue your pickles before we leave..." Lol!!!!! Great first chapter!
Author's Response: Yeah, I like it creepy, Thanks Shiny.
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 14/09/07 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 2 Sheep in wolf's clothing.
Holy $@^%#&#. Did you say 3 storeys? Hurry back bulletbabe, he's FALLING for pete's sake!
Author's Response: Won't be too long. Great use of symbols here!!!! lol Thanks ciel4
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 14/09/07 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 1 Of pickles and pies
What a great term "battleaxe" is! Terrific start bulletbabe, I'm reading on...
Author's Response: Must be a 'brit' term. Glad you're liking this. Thanks ciel4
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 12/09/07 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 2 Sheep in wolf's clothing.
OMG--fantastic! Freakin' creepy, creepy, creepy and gross. And I LOVE it. And Holy crap, what a cliffhanger! Please tell me you'll update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks Vanessa for the review and the rating, they mean so much. Fraid' I do love my cliffies, so there will be more to follow! Thanks again.
Reviewer: heather03nmg (Signed) · Date: 12/09/07 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 2 Sheep in wolf's clothing.
Absolutely loving the story. Miss Jessop is quite the character and her worry for her pickles made me laugh. Totally cracking up over Dean's theory of death due to finger dismemberment. Special thanks for hurt Dean, throwing him out of a window is just awesome...I mean, aww poor Dean. Update soon!
Author's Response: WoW Thanks for the review and the rating heather, always at least a bit of hurt Dean in my stuff, that's what he's there for after all. Thanks again.
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