Wow--great descriptions in this chapter.  Ick.  And I mean that in a totally good way.  lol  She's one scary adversary.  Looking forward to the next, and unfortunately last, chapter.

Author's Response: And it will be winging your way tonight Ness, and thanks for the great reviews...lol XX Louy

still bizarre...

Author's Response: Still great compliment...lol XX Louy

eww, bad bad... And for making better pies?! funny...

Author's Response: Had to get some funnies in there somewhere...lol XX Louy

ooch, three storeys... Okay, i now get the important rule of the story, old women equals evil!

Author's Response: Hehehehe, not strictly true...but you will find out! XX Louy

wow great story so far.

so glad Dean did not lose his tongue or those beautiful green eyes.

i am sure Bonnie is not done with the 2 of them.

hope chapter 9 will be up soon.

Renee 

Author's Response: Very glad you enjoyed it and yeah, couldn't really do anything to our boys body parts...well not and live with myself anyway...lol Thanks for the review XX Louy

Excellent chapter...finally Dean is on the offensive....LOL and thank goodness they are out on the barn and not in the house...they could have been burnt to death! or hurt more, at the very least..

Author's Response: Ain't it strange how they always manage to be in the right place at the right time...lol Thanks for the review XX Louy

So glad to see more of this Louy -and where do I get one of those self tidying tornadoes - might improve the looks of my place!!  Glad to hear you're ok - I've been so caught in my own funk lately that I haven't been much of a friend to anyone else.  In other circumstances I'm a pretty god listener and my shingle is back out....   Those boys have really got to stay away from matches or maybe just ghosties that like matches.  Great visual on Bonnie too!

Author's Response:

Thanks Angela, and especially for the good wishes, it's nice to feel healthy again after so long...lol Glad you're enjoying the story and the last chapter will be up later today...XX and thanks for the lovely stars:) Louy

I love your chapter titles!  They're so catchy.

Haven't figured out quite what Miss Jessop is up to, but I'm sure it's good.  I think she's going to pull an Obi Wan and be more help dead than alive.

Author's Response: Hah, you are Sooo perceptice..either that or I'm becoming predictable in my old age..lol Thanks Shannon XX Louy

Terrific update, hun.  Looking forward the the remaining chapters and the wrap up. 

So happy to hear the good news regarding your health.  Brings a smile to my face.

Author's Response: Thanks so much Ness, your reviews always cheer me up and put a smile on my face too...and thanks for the good wishes XX Louy

Great chapter... as always:) I don't know if this is too presumptuous of me, but your writing sometimes reminds me of my own writing. It seems like you see things in images before you work your way onto print.

Great characters...

Author's Response:

Hehe, not presumptuous at all, I think there are a lot of us who love writing the 'visual' style of story and I agree, I think there are definate similarities there.

I'm so glad you liked the first part of this and although I know I haven't updated in a while, its on my list as soon as 'Fall of the House of Dream' is finished...which will be very soon I hope.

Thanks for the reviews Andrea and I hope you'll enjoy the rest of the story as much.X Louy

Great chap... Exiting end and exlellent writing...

Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying Andrea, thanks for the review. X Louy

Great descriptions that really captured the moments and scenes.  Nice twists, that kept me waiting & eager for more.  Really eager to see where this is leading & how it ends. 

Author's Response:

Thanks very much for this Karen, and although it hasn't been updated in a while, it's not forgotten and will be finished soon. Been writing quite dark stuff lately that didn't really mesh with where I wanted this one to go, but now all that's out of my system...it won't be long.

Thanks very much for the review. X Louy

So, Miss J is one of the good guys, at least Sam managed to stop Dean from shooting her!!...lol  I just love Deans' diplomatic handling of the situation.

There are some pretty macabre going's on in Bonnie's mega warped world and it looks like the boys are high on her list of intended guests.

Great chapter.  Jane

Author's Response: Thanks jane, and yeah, she is pretty warped. Wouldn't want to meet her down a dark alley...or anywhere else for that matter...lol Thanks for the review.