Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 15/11/09 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 10 An eye for an eye makes the world go blind
Marvelous chapter! Love the action and how you tied everything up. Wait, what was Sam's deeper thought when he was talking to Dean before they went to Bonnie's house? I'm glad Miss Jessop was reunited with her son at the end. I love a happy ending. Okay, okay, in the name of peace, I'll study Dean's ass and make the final decision on is its fine. "You did pick up that $200 before the house burned up...right?...Sammy? Right?" That sucky Winchester luck strikes again. What a perfect ending!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 15/11/09 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 9 Of dogs and cats and little white bones.
"cos I ain't gonna be happy till that old hag is sinking in a puddle of something stinky, screaming I'm melting." Hilarious! I can see Dean saying this in the show. Quick thinking from both boys and lots of funny snarks from Dean. You've left me wondering what the deeper meaning to Sam's question is. Miss Jessop's final revenge to ruin the cream carpet of her nemesis with her blood was very funny and a perfect revenge on the Darkside Martha Stewart.
Reviewer: alena (Signed) · Date: 20/05/08 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 4 Ice cubes and Eskimos
I'm stillhaving serious trouble with my internet connection so let's hope this posts OK. Hello again Louy, I liked the way you depict Dean's thought processes and reactions- (they are very Dean) and Miss Jessop is still on form. Bonnie's plans are not sounding good for Dean (or Sam either), but the brothers splitting up is never a good thing and Dean and Roberts are clearly destined for another round. Let's hope it doesn't involve any airborne activities! I enjoyed seeing Sam finally getting "the drop on" Miss Jessop to make her tell him what's going on. It looks as if Dean still needs his wrinklie angel though if Bonnie's plans go ahead. Alison
Author's Response: 'His wrinklie angel'...damn, I wish I'd thought of that...lol Great line, and I'm very glad you think the depiction is true to character, that means a lot...Thanks Alison XXX Louy
Reviewer: alena (Signed) · Date: 20/05/08 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 3 Out of the frying pan and into the fire
Another great chapter Louy, I could really sympathise with Sam and his mercy dash to get to Dean. I liked the crowd reactions to Dean's plight and the added urgency of the "help" on its way. Just what they don't need! I think Sam should have taken that picture of Dean. Visiting Bonnie cannot be a good idea! I liked Dean's comments about her chinaware and Sam's eyes. You've got me wondering which of the boys she's got her eyes on- obviously the blood from Dean is ominous, but then she dropped that comment about Sam's hands... I'm glad to see Dean working things out as well as Sam, even if he does end up on the wrong side of a ghost attack. I liked the reference to the boys' understanding that not everything supernatural is necessarily evil. I'm still intrigued by the young ghost and his link to Miss Jessop and she's obviously not in the same league as dear, sweet psychotic Bonnie. Let's hope it's a good sign for the Winchesters. Alison
Author's Response: Y'know I just couldn't decide which of the two boy's she'd be after, and then I thought...I'd be after them both if it was me, so...lol Guess I'm gonna turn into a Bonnie Francis when I'm older huh? hehehe Thanks again for the great reviews Alison, you always put a smile on my face...XX Louy
Reviewer: alena (Signed) · Date: 19/05/08 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 2 Sheep in wolf's clothing.
Grr! I spent ages writing out a review and then my connection went haywire! Anyway, back to business-another great chapter, Louy. I really enjoyed reading it. I loved the Dean and knitting-armed wrinklie face off! And Sam's line "Dean. Bro, walk away from the little old lady." is a classic! Miss Jessop is a wonderful character. But I'm glad I don't have to meet her in real life. Bonnie is shaping up to be a really creepy villain. I am so glad that I wasn't eating when I read the eyeball bit! Two very different, but definitely scary OAP's in one story- it's quite a twofer! And then there are two ghosts. The second ghost interested me as he reminded me of Bonnie's "guest" and I'd like to know just what she's up to there. I'm also curious to know more about Miss Jessop's young ghost and why she called in for help when she seems quite happy to have him around. That was really sneaky of you Louy, here I was giggling away at the brothers and you go and throw Dean through a window!!! Hopefully this attempt will post OK (or I'll have to lie down in a dark room and whimper) Alison
Author's Response: That happens to me all the time!! lol Bonnie is a creepy villain but you know what?..I have a real soft spot for her...don't know why, just do...lol. And, yeah, I do like throwing Dean through things, Kripke should do that more, rather than just throwing him against the wall all the time...lol Thanks Alison, another great review from you. XX Louy
Reviewer: alena (Signed) · Date: 19/05/08 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 1 Of pickles and pies
Hi there Louy, I've made a start on this and so glad I did! The opening description of Bonnie was well done moving from the ultra "nice" to very disturbing as was the gradual reveal of her cellar guest. You've got the brothers down pat. Their characters rang so true and I loved Dean's parting shot about adoption! Two very different, but equally daunting OAP's in one story- now that's quite a twofer! It's a grewat story and a relief amid all the season finale woe. On to chapter 2... Alison
Author's Response: ALISON!!! It's always such a blast to get a review from someone I know in person, I'm smiling from ear to ear...lol And I need to say, those cards have come in Soooo useful already with preparations for this W/E...thanks for the heads up on that one...can't wait to see you in London...and thanks for the great review my friend. XX Louy
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 09/05/08 01:53 AM · On: Chapter 10 An eye for an eye makes the world go blind
Hahahahaha...i always love your ending...you just know where to stop and make it perfect!! especially if they end up bantering. this story is a joy to read, and i hope you had fun at the Asylum -i'm so jealous!!! you're gonna meet Jensen!!!!! AAAAAAAAA!!!!!- and hopefully post more stories for us! :)
Author's Response: No Jensen i'm afraid but got to chat with Bobby and Gordon...WOW...Thanks for the review and the stars and next year I'll expect to meet you there. XX Louy
Reviewer: IHeartSam (Signed) · Date: 08/05/08 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 3 Out of the frying pan and into the fire
loving the story so far!!! it's keeping me going through studying for exmas at the moment lol, it's good to have a break reading this as it's lighthearted banter (particulary dean's-spot on by the way!) and mix of suspense and action makes it feel like an episode. Youve got the characters down perfectly. Great job! -Aliyssa XXX
Author's Response: Thanks Aliyssa, it's good to hear its working for you and don't study too hard...lol X Louy
Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 08/05/08 05:53 AM · On: Chapter 10 An eye for an eye makes the world go blind
Fantastic story, finished with the kind of twist you can see coming, but that still takes your breath away! (Loved, "Yeah, 'cos even monsters under the bed have an appreciation of your fine ass." Oh, love to be that monster... Sorry.) Can't wait for the next story! Have fun at asylum, and I'll see you in London!
Author's Response: Hah, wouldn't we all love to reside under Dean's bed, well I say under...over, next to, on top of...it's all the same to me :) Thanks for the review cal and can't wait to meet you in London...XX Louy
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 07/05/08 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 10 An eye for an eye makes the world go blind
Lou, great ending to a great story. I love that you put Miss Jessop and Henry back together. seems only right. the description of Bonnie as she hit the ground; i could picture it. i almost vomited. Great job keep up the great work Renee
Author's Response: Thanks Renee, yeah, I just had to let Henry and Miss J. have a nice ending...even I didn't have the heart to kill her off completely...lol Thanks for the review, and I hope you weren't eating at the 'squashed tomato ' bit...hehehe XX Louy
Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 07/05/08 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 10 An eye for an eye makes the world go blind
Ahh, I do like a happy ending, particularly when that uncommonly fine ass is mentioned!! It was lovely to think Miss J and Henry were reunited and back to their former splendour. Great fight scene, I'm pleased Miss Jessop got to win the day. I think this sentence alone, 'Her swollen, rancid body bursting open like a squashed tomato, to spew layers of tripe across the grass...' deserves an award for something like 'Grossest description of the Year', absolutely priceless!! Thank you for a very entertaining, exciting tale, I loved the humour throughout. See you Friday. Jane
Author's Response: Thanks Jane and I ALWAYS love compliments about gore and fight scenes...I'm sooo shallow...lol Thanks my friend and I will see you in two weeks at the Asylum reunion XX louy
Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 07/05/08 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 9 Of dogs and cats and little white bones.
I've finally figured out who Bonnie reminds me of, Dolores Umbridge from Harry Potter, it was those pink twin sets and pearls, not to mention the kittens and puppy plates that did the trick....lol. I think it's about time Bonnie got her comupance and hopefully, Dean with his razor sharp, twelve inch blade, will get a chance to finish her off. I'm guessing Sam and the necklace might have to come to the rescue though!! I can't believe it's only two days to go to Asylum, I look forward to seeing you there!! Great update, I'm off to the last chapter. Thanks. Jane
Author's Response: Hahahaha, you are absolutely right, wonder what D. Umbridge did in her attic? The mind boggles...lol Thanks for the review and the rating Jane, I'm smiling from ear to ear...lol XX Louy
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 07/05/08 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 10 An eye for an eye makes the world go blind
LouLou. I have to say again I love this bot at the start it just cracks me up..."Sam watched Dean with eyes wide open as he swung against the old woman with expert polish and grace - and missed his target completely". You know I am devoted to Dean lithe grace so to have him flub like this makes me giggle! I think this ia a classy ending it has a righteousness that means baddies get their comeupance, goodies get laid to rest and boys get the crap kicked outta em which I always enjoy. Lovely Hun oh and don't forget that little Impala scene for me!! See ya at Asylum, Wooha! Loves ya Bev xxxx
Author's Response: Really glad you enjoyed this one mate, always glad to make people smile...lol XX Louy
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 07/05/08 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 10 An eye for an eye makes the world go blind
great chapters, nice to have the two last to read in a row. I guess they'll run the next time they'll meet old ladies... And don't we all have an appreciation of Dean's fine ass?!
Author's Response: You never said a truer word, Dean's ass is the finest on the show...hehehe XX louy
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 07/05/08 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 10 An eye for an eye makes the world go blind
A beautiful wrap up, Louy. Loved it. The best line(s) though--were the ones where Dean's talking about his fine ass. LOL Priceless. As is Sam's response.... Off to Asylum, do have fun. Everyone will be waiting patiently (or impatiently really) for you to get back and share, both your new story and awesome Asylum stories.
Author's Response: Thanks so much Ness, had to get Dean's 'fine ass' in there somewhere...lol XX Louy
Reviewer: Rae666 (Signed) · Date: 04/05/08 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 6 Idiot flies and screamers
Once again - brilliant! Gotta keep reading :D
Author's Response: Awe Rae...thankyou so much, last ever chapter of this one is on its way tonight and I hope you enjoy that one to... XX Louy
Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 03/05/08 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 9 Of dogs and cats and little white bones.
Great chapter. If i've gotta be honest, I think there's a clear difference between this chapter and the last one. This one was much more engaging and exiting. I found it very easy to get caught up. Very good job...
Author's Response: Thanks for that huge compliment, it's always great to hear when something works and you find yourself caught up in it...hope it carries through to the last chapter that will be posted tonight...Thanks for the review...XX Louy
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 02/05/08 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 9 Of dogs and cats and little white bones.
LouLou did I mention that this line "Dean kept their only shotgun hidden under his shirt " gives me goosebumps? Such an image! Perv yeah? Snort! Sammy chiding Dean to "think it through"! Does he think the green eyed god is really gonna do that when he can go in guns blazing? Silly Sammy! "the carpet soaking in ‘Jessop juice’" wonderfully gross! "He felt the recoil of the shot jolt up his arm" oh and there's another goosebump moment! "the twelve inch razor sharp blade tight in his hand" 12 inches huh? paradise! heehee bev xx
Author's Response: Perv? You? Never, how could I believe such hurtful things about me ol mate Bev...ehem... And glad you liked Jessop juice - kinda proud of that one...lol Thanks mate...and please take note of the number of bare feet I'm getting into the sequel of Dream...all for you mate! XX Louy
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 02/05/08 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 8 Is it lemon juice for blood on shag pile?
LouLou. You know i really mistrust pink twinsets - so please don't wears yours to Asylum will ya?  and especially not with your pearls! Crap, you are so gonna kill me now aren't ya? mea culpa!! "“Hey freak...don't you ever do that again, that was just nasty" love that line so cool! Freaky witch-bitch, time to toast her Lou! Go get her! Bev xx
Author's Response: Damn, you've just ruined my wardrobe choices for the convention...and all together now..toast toast toast... Thanks mate, you rock!
Reviewer: Rae666 (Signed) · Date: 02/05/08 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 5 Always gotta be freaky weirdness
Another great chapter - I wanna know what she wants with the boys... must read on (even if I was meant to be going to bed half an hour ago, he he)
Author's Response: Hah, I know that feeling...I couldn't stop reading Lucifer!!!! Thanks again Rae for the review and the stars...XX Louy
Reviewer: Rae666 (Signed) · Date: 02/05/08 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 4 Ice cubes and Eskimos
I've just started reading this... and I shouldn't have because you've sucked me right in and I know I'm gonna end up just sitting reading this instead of doing work that I should be getting on with - typical :P Loving it! Loving it, loving it, loving it. Seriously!!! I can picture both Sam and Dean in my head whilst reading it, it's perfect.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much - lovely words and thanks for the stars...I love it when someone new comes to a story and enjoys...lol Thanks so much Rae...XX Louy
Reviewer: coop (Signed) · Date: 02/05/08 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 9 Of dogs and cats and little white bones.
A bit strange but in a good way. Like Miss Jessop, sorry she's dead. When is the next chapter posting?
Author's Response: TONIGHT yeah...so not long to wait now...lol Thanks for the review and the stars coop, they mean the world. XX Louy
Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 02/05/08 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 8 Is it lemon juice for blood on shag pile?
Bonnie is conjuring up such a delightful picture with her knitted pale pink twin set, pearl necklace and then the whole left hand side thing going on. Nice to see the slippers escaped the blood stains!! She is one severly creepy old lady. Looks like our Dean's good and p****d now, I hope Sam figures out just what to do with that beautiful opal necklace when the time comes. I loved Deans' reaction to being invaded. Poor Henry seems more lost and desolate than ever. Great update. Thanks. Jane
Author's Response: Pale pink is most definately the colour of the devil...never knew where they got red from...lol Thanks again Jane, and the last chapter is up tonight, hope you enjoy. XX Louy
Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 02/05/08 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 7 Birds eggs and bullets
Great rescue, poor Miss Jessop, she turned out to be quite the heroine, I feel that we've not quite seen the last of her yet though. Can't wait to read more....Thanks. Jane
Author's Response: Thanks Jane, for another great review and the lovely stars, next and last chapter will be up later today...hope you enjoy.lol XX Louy
Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 02/05/08 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 6 Idiot flies and screamers
I loved Dean offering to help with the DIY, worth a try I guess. Bonnie seems to have different plans for him though, she is one totally crazy old biddy, with totally scary supernatural powers!! I just hope Miss Jessop with Sam in tow manage to get there in time to rescue those beautiful eyes and keep that tongue where it's meant to be!! J.
Author's Response: Nothing will ever happen the Ackles body parts in my stories...well actually, having thought about that a little...lol Thanks for the great review and for the stars too...XX Louy
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